Side Dishes: Chapter 2: Page 29
Added 2015-09-07 06:20:45 +0000 UTCIf you recall the vote option this isn't exactly the same as the recommendation. I actually had some trouble with this idea because I couldn't conceive of why Anastasia, who views cocks as a sinful burden, would serve fruit to help the girls grow cocks of their own. That's why I added the detail about her forcing them to eat the fruits as part of a test of their divinity... I figure if nothing else its clear that she's fairly religious, so the idea of someone claiming to be a goddess would be very sacrilegious to her. I'm still not sure why the Nah-Ri would serve cum-covered food to their guests... maybe it's part of the goddess test thing?
I've decided that I'm going to start uploading the hi-res copies of the pages as a RAR separately from the page going up. Basically just so the page can go up a little earlier, instead of having to wait for all the large files to load. So in uh.. thirty minutes? The hi-res RAR of all the pages will be up.
Comments
Interesting the monster girl children concept is one big ideas ones I always really want to push but wait till the moment is right in the story especially when the monster girls are able to enter there lair.
Shotred
2015-09-08 20:38:09 +0000 UTCThen maybe we should be moving toward a finale, in fact that could be your suggestion ;p but at this point the only way I see this is going to finish soon is the monster girls get what they want have their children with all the girls including Lily's crew and the tribes are happy doing so either by submission or ousting the chiefs. or The monster Girls get bested and imprisoned again the only point of them story wise being to make Lily and her crew heroes and live happily on the island.. I guess the end could be the everybody becomes friends and have a giant island wide "special cuddle" but that feels... meh considering events.
CGI
2015-09-08 16:20:09 +0000 UTCI personally agree with Kenneth in that it does not really go... I think that to make the dick really stick one of the Monster Girls need to Creampie you while under its effects, then you become immortal until you have monstergirl children, after which your immortality is transferred to the child along with losing the penis ( the symbol of your immortality ). Doing it this way will give Anastasia a more valid reason as in it was a test, but it is not like the Dick is permanent so it does not come across as I am burdening you with our burden because reasons... I have been discussing the nature of side dishes lately and at some point I think the boss should open a dialog with the Patrons and discuss tweaking the format.. some of my ideas include.. Giving a general direction for suggestions at the end of a page like, I want to switch scenes now to Kat on a beach what should she be doing? or I like how this plot development is going how shall we expand/handle it? and Keeping the pages in phases with a set beginning middle and end defined for each story this should keep things structured and to point as we will know when to suggest the plot twist and finale. OK Suggestions, How about... Shocked at what has transpired Kat Questions both her mother and the crew, she has never seen a magic fruit do this before as all the tribes on the Island already have cocks. Still convinced of the crews divinity regardless, Kat comes to the conclusion that her mother has defiled them out of jealousy as with the goddesses descended there is no need for a spiritual leader, as she tries to run out of the hut with the crew in tow she bumps into something and falls to the ground, looking up Eve stands in the doorway, Aqua Vert Pleasuring her while both of them look down menacingly...
CGI
2015-09-08 10:24:43 +0000 UTCyeah i like the non permanent thing. maybe this fruit could be like from a second generation of dick tree thats not as power full as the original.
Quinn Adlard
2015-09-08 04:25:31 +0000 UTCThis will probably be my last comment on this as looking back at the last couple of weeks, the suggestion pool has mainly been Kenneth vs. Nick suggestions; and I would rather have either other good patreon folks or Transmorpher himself, throw in a couple ideas. BUT, I would like to re-confirm my suggestion for this 'dick sprouting due to random fruit' thing not being permanent. Maybe have the fruit be some sort of temporary catalyst due to the magic caused by the return of the monster girl trio? Perhaps Anastasia even accuses the three of being the monster girls in disguise. Thereby giving her cause to force them to prove their innocence via some sort of purification ritual which will rid them of their 'sudden dick surprise'. Tribal priestesses are always a good direction. And as a personal statement; while I was truly honored that you used my suggestions I was rather surprised that you used all of them! (I was at most expecting that you would only use a couple.) With that in mind, I feel like in some cases the voting is being overwhelmed with suggestions that are all essentially the same thing. Take this last vote for example; there were three options that revolved around Sindra, Lily and Bianca. You had nearly fifty votes total in favor of a scene that involved those three. But they got divided up due to very small differences. Meanwhile, there were twenty-two votes for the fruit thing. I worry that the actual majority vote is being lost due to technicality. But lastly! Do what you feel comfortable with Trans (because you're awesome!) Based on your prior comments you have mentioned that you have a general direction in mind for this story. So when it comes to be vote time there is no requirement that says you have to use every suggestion (heck you can ignore everything I just said for all I care!) I just want this story to be a solid one that is truly enjoyed by the majority of your users.
Kenneth
2015-09-08 02:53:26 +0000 UTCoh well this took a turn. :/ oh no balls. idk about a suggestion just not feeling it lately. just not sure about this story anymore i guess.
Quinn Adlard
2015-09-08 01:20:11 +0000 UTCI understand what you are coming from this how I see it the story world building is still magic base so they can lose there cocks in the middle of the story, plus where the panel ended one them can still have a cock and the rest go through different changes. As for them getting cocks to be sacred thing to the Nah-Ri I dont see no evidence on that. You can say there leader Anastasia says so but she can be a corrupt leader and do what ever she once and no question her. Remember how she dont want other clan members to cum but only her, somebody sure is selfish.
Shotred
2015-09-07 17:22:21 +0000 UTCHmm. I know a couple folks were really gung-ho about this option... but I'll be honest; Not really a fan of this direction. I feel like doing this sort of damages the whole "babes in futa-land" theme that this story had. Having a majority of the main cast just sprout dicks so easily is frankly kind of a cop-out to what could have been a big deal later on in the story, and now only succeeds in removing so many options for further on down the road. That and as you yourself mentioned Trans, this sort of goes against everything that has been built so far story wise in regards to the Nah-Ri's supposedly extreme religious fervor. Why would they so easily give something to total strangers/outsiders that would allow them to become like them? I know this is just a sex comic at the end of the day but I still enjoy enjoy it that much more when we can still keep to something that resembles a consistent plot. Can we have this not be permanent? As in the fruit just causes a temporary sort of "futa-nization". Basically once the girls do this cock sprouting thing have Anastasia declare them to be false goddesses and force them to go through a 'cleansing process' to remove the cocks. And by cleansing process its a orgy with some of the village's priestesses, while Anastasia watches with bemused arousal.
Kenneth
2015-09-07 14:35:29 +0000 UTCFor one of the first suggestion since the first girl has a ball-less cock I was thinking the other two have interesting changes to there's and maybe some physical changes too. The asian girl starts to grow a dog like shape knot cock while she tends to grow a huge ass. Then we see the blond girl grow huge balls that can rival Sindra and Anastasia's but she has a really small one but the catch is it can get bigger but she has to swallow a lot of cum in order for it to grow but the effects good amount of time before it becomes small again. ....................... The second suggestion is the asian girl grows a long slippery cock like a snake or you can say chinese dragon which she can use like a third arm to her LOL. Then the blonde grow a spike like cock like Bianca but she also begins to grow tall like a giant maybe 5-8 feet more taller. ......................... Third suggestion have the red head cock always hard poking out of her shirt and tends to always leak milk from her breast. The asian girl grow a huge fat sausage cock with a lot of foreskin covering it and tends to leak cum no matter what but has a taste that most cant resist and have coconut size balls. As for blonde her cock is about close Anastasia size but is really sensitive and turns red because it tends to be hot where it needs something "wet" to cool it off or she get really horny and go crazy. ................ My last suggestion is make those girls go through a creature transformation where the red head leaks milk has cow ears, a tail, and a bull like cock and balls. The asian girl grows a huge ass has a fat wide leaking cock but has wolf like features like fluffy tail and paws and is very good agility. Then Blonde girl body starts to grow small like 1-3 feet and becomes a fairy with insect like wings with little size cock and balls that match her size and her cum tends to be really sticky like gum.
Shotred
2015-09-07 07:52:48 +0000 UTCWell you can say the cum flavor food is a delicacy for the village leader and there special guess LOL
Shotred
2015-09-07 06:41:42 +0000 UTC
