Banana Shortcake 3 - Script
Added 2016-02-23 02:32:03 +0000 UTCI just finished writing the script for the next chapter of Banana Shortcake. If you don't mind spoilers the script is available to read. I wouldn't mind if anyone could do a double check to make sure there's no serious plot holes or anything. I've watched Taimanin Asagi but it was years ago and I can't say for sure that I know the lore perfectly.
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Thanks :) I went ahead and changed the script to show that she's using her claws instead lol I had kind of forgotten whether or not she had a signature weapon, so I just kind of wrote it as her using a generic ninja weapon. I kind of want to draw her in the sexy dress just because it will be easier to draw, but I think it will make more sense for her to be wearing her combat suit.
Transmorpher D.D.S.
2016-02-23 17:58:59 +0000 UTCI read the script, not bad its hentai material LOL As for the characters I can't wait to see Ingrid more and Oboro more. If you can maybe if you can show more detail close ups on the characters. Ingrid for example sure stands out with those purple lips ;) <a href="http://g.e-hentai.org/s/7c2326e2ea/308105-10" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://g.e-hentai.org/s/7c2326e2ea/308105-10</a> Oboro sure is getting this treatment LOL <a href="http://giphy.com/gifs/l41lIz13p27hkXDP2" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://giphy.com/gifs/l41lIz13p27hkXDP2</a>
Shotred
2016-02-23 12:34:54 +0000 UTCWell..the only thing I can say about the lore depends on what Oboro is wearing :p If she put her sexy red dress on ( <a href="http://orig05.deviantart.net/74a2/f/2016/003/b/a/eye_candy__oboro_red_dress_by_snippets_of_genius-d9mkta4.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://orig05.deviantart.net/74a2/f/2016/003/b/a/eye_candy__oboro_red_dress_by_snippets_of_genius-d9mkta4.jpg</a> ), then she might grab a katana (Asagi's one?) instead of a short sword. If she's wearing her combat suit, I think she should use her weapon, the arm claws: <a href="http://media.animevice.com/uploads/4/40974/761047-oboro_claws1.png" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://media.animevice.com/uploads/4/40974/761047-oboro_claws1.png</a> Anyway...I really can't wait to see this new Banana Short Cake :) P.S. Asagi's katana doesn't look exactly like an ordinary one, so if you want to make sure to show that Oboro is using it...here's a pic showing both girls' weapons: <a href="https://rborg42.files.wordpress.com/2011/04/ups15.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://rborg42.files.wordpress.com/2011/04/ups15.jpg</a>
Alinoris
2016-02-23 11:47:59 +0000 UTC
