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Submit your Week 4 compositions here! (And a brief walk-through)

This week's intimidating goal was to write a minor key piece that utilizes the tritone (easily introduced via the II chord) but ALSO demonstrates a clear usage of melodic minor.

I've attached an extremely simple example of melodic minor below. It's just i - V in Am (so Am to E) with A natural minor occuring over the i and A melodic minor over the V. Here's what the melody looks like - notice how the ryhthm is consistent (1 + 2 + 3 4 ) over and over, it helps keep things structured in such a small space! And as you can see, in the first half we have a natural G and a natural F, but in the second half we use G# and F# instead. Also notice how we don't care about that "going up we do this, going down we do that" thing; the melodic minor scale is the same in both directions!

 

I've also attached two other pieces that utilize more indepth changes: Melodic Minor 1.mp3 is just Em (i) - C/E (bVI) - A (IV) - B (V7), then Em - C/E - F# (II) - B. You'll hear bits of E melodic minor over that V7 chord.

Melodic Minor 2.mp3 is a longer progression utilizing a "line cliche," where the triad stays unchanged while a melody moves atop. You'll see this in the first three chords.

Em - Tonic (i). I'm thinking Em scale but in practice, I only use a few notes of the scale.

EmMaj7 - I can't play b7 anymore, it'll rub ub against the maj7 in this chord, so I switch to E harmonic minor.

Em7 - I revert to regular Em scale to accommodate this b7.

A - I know this IV chord means that I need to raise the 6th, so I start thinking E Dorian scale instead. However, I really only play the new 6th and don't play a scale run.

C - This bVI chord is in regular E minor, so I'm thinking back to that scale. In practice, I just play a Cadd9 arpeggio cause I like it and I know that's in Em.

F# - I know this II chord can easily be accommodated by switching to E Dorian #4, so I play a big scale run using those notes. However, I could have just played an F# arpeggio and it still would have sounded great.

B9sus4 - I play a giant Bsus4 arpeggio

B9 - I use this opportunity to play the E melodic minor scale. B9 uses a C# note, which is the raised 6th in our parent key of E minor. I don't want to play regular E Aeolian which contains a b6, that'll clash harshly.

Note: Next week's class will be moved to Tuesday afternoon central time, but I'll still need you all to try to submit your final files by late sunday (or early monday) so I have time to properly get them reviewed. If you're late, that's fine, just email me the track directly and I'll llet you know what I think!

Submit your Week 4 compositions here! (And a brief walk-through) Submit your Week 4 compositions here! (And a brief walk-through)

Comments

Thanks! If only it were that easy... Big difference between making music and marketing it

Znernicus

This one's really put a smile on my face. It sounds like you had fun making it. Lovely work!

Iron Octopus

Thank you!

Aaron Shemon

Really well done, man. Great lyrics, great production. I’d like to hear of the full-version when you finish it!

Scott

This is nightmare fuel (in a good way) - feel like I am in a movie being chased/stalked while listening to it

Scott

Beautiful - very cinematic. Could be part of a video game score (the opening reminds me of Halo specifically)

Scott

This sounds great - really nice progression.

Scott

He is such a ridiculously good singer…

Scott

Awesome quality.

Steve K

Whoops - I submitted my song on the wrong thread. My submission below! Song is in Am. Progression is as follows: Part A: Am - C - D - Am - C - B7 (4x) i bIII IV i bIII II First interlude/riff I approached is as 'A Dorian #4', but feel like it came out more E harmonic minor sounding. 🤷🏽‍♂️ Part B: Dm - Am - E - Am (x2) iv i V i Second interlude/riff: A meldoic minor Quick little ending solo is noodling Am pentatonic over Part A. https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/cxer0eqke6kfzam55shxq/Funk-2_Signals-Week-4.mp3?rlkey=507ja9y525lhhse8s3ugg5h2f&st=248nkbbm&dl=0 Cheers!

Scott

Wow! That is next level. Well done!

Steve K

Thank you!

Aaron Shemon

Here's my submission!! Edit will come shortly giving a break down... https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QEvGknvh3ZAx7wkwE6Aycpjgc7JliSmm/view?usp=drive_link Verses: Fm7 - Bbm7 [x11] (im7 - ivm7) Pre-Chorus: Cm7 - Db6 [x3] (vm7 - bVI6) C13 (V13) Chorus: Fm7 - Gsus4 - G7b9 - Bb - C - Csus2 [x3] (im7 - IIsus4 - II7b9 - IV - V - Vsus2) Fm7 - Gsus4 - G7b9- Bb - C - C7#9 [x1] (im7 - IIsus4 - II7b9 - IV - V - V7#9) This piece is in the key of F minor. It borrows heavily from the melodic minor scale. It also showcases the tritone through variants of the II chord. The vocal melody in the chorus callously mashes pentatonic minor, melodic minor, and a tritone. I'm showing a little bit more of myself with this one. This is closer to the type of music I'm actually aiming for and hoping to get good at (stuff in the star-quadrent of psychedelic rock, post punk, indie funk/disco and alt/art pop). It was a fun but considerable challenge to make something like this in one week, but I learned a LOT. I legitimately learned a ton about modal mixture through experimenting with this challenge, but I also learned a ton about production, and using my voice. I will likely clean it up and extend it and make it a full song. LYRICS: Knock on the door, it's locked Sharpen a look of stone Block off the door, don't talk And nobody will know that I'm the one at fault Prop up the broken pot A miracle won't grow in dirt on a tabletop And I don't think I know Can’t know now I wanna miss it Can’t know how I won’t forget it Can’t know now Give me a minute I know it won’t stop… I'm on the outside looking in Paid the price, tasted my own medicine I'm on the outside looking in Jesus Christ, is this the way I've always been? Outside looking in Paid the price, tasted my own medicine Outside looking in Jesus Christ, is this the way I've always been? Knock on the door, it's locked Dirt on the tabletop https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QEvGknvh3ZAx7wkwE6Aycpjgc7JliSmm/view?usp=drive_link

Iron Octopus

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tIO-3Zj_QfY Oh, I'm not so sure about that: check out Peter Gabriel's moves at the end of this performance! Joking aside, and from a musical perspective (closing your eyes!), this has to be one of the greatest compositions, with one of the best endings, of the 20th Century.

Steve K

Wonderful - it's a menacing melody, really capturing the essence of this exercise.

Steve K

Great stuff - you have made the most of the darkness available in these chords.

Steve K

This was fun! For some reason I had it in my head that I wanted to introduce the Tritone through a Chromatic Mediant. I worked at Em - Gm to get that sound. I also wanted to include a melody this time which I may have neglected in previous submissions and the Melodic Minor feels a little ham handed. If I had more time it might flow a bit better. Finally I shortened the total time from the previous minor so it is a little more abrupt, in a real track it would need to breathe more. However I had to include the intro, it was too much fun to make to cut right into the main part. Em - Gm - Em - Gm C - Em - C - B7 - Em https://drive.google.com/file/d/18QufvUY0U1BxVxn1t5Or73TdaGnt8cNP/view?usp=share_link

Aaron Shemon

Hello, here's my submission. I wanna say thank you Jake for making your theory videos, I used to binge watch your videos when I was beginning my journey on learning theory and your videos have really helped and made me love theory. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gjMCH7XN8C_ObywduLU6iFiDUYIpyrHS/view?usp=sharing Chords: A: Dorian, Harmonic minor/Chromatic Am - D7 - Am - D7 - Am - E9#9b13 - G#o7 B: Dorian #4 Amadd9 - Cmadd6 - F7 C: Melodic minor Amadd9 - Bmadd13 Amadd9 - Bmadd13 E7 D: Dorian #4, Aeolian, Harmonic Minor Am/E - B/E - Dm/E - E7 E: Harmonic Minor, Dorian b9 I think at Bb. Am - Amaj7sus2 - Am - Ammaj9 - Bb+add9,#11 - Amaj7sus2

Patrick

Thanks Jay!

MindStorM

Very 80s synthpop at the beginning. 👍😁😎

Jay Goemmer

Glorious! 😇😎🔥

Jay Goemmer

Arr! Where's me eyepatch, bandana, and gold earring? 🚣‍♂️🏊‍♂️

Jay Goemmer

Steve, neither can the guys in Genesis. (Dance, that is.) 🤣

Jay Goemmer

Thank you!

MindStorM

Well said Eric. This truly is great stuff by Jake. His YT channel is the best and my most referenced resource.

Sole Brick

Holy crap the material covered in week 3 and 4 is MELTING MY BRAIN! It's crazy for me to think that for my whole musical life Ive just picked up a guitar and played stuff until it sounded "good" to me. And it's even crazier to me that it took me this long to say to myself "hey maybe I should try to learn the difference between a C major and C minor chord." And so here I am... about 1.5 years into self learning music theory via YouTube - LOL! Jake - your videos are amazing and your teaching style is soooo accessible for someone like me. Thanks so much for creating this MMM series. It's the 1st "formal" music lessons/classes I've ever taken. I feel like I'm learning a ton of useful stuff to help me pick up my guitar and intentionally play different stuff that sounds "good" to me (and possible others). Stuff that I would have never come up with left to my own devices! EDIT - I think I goofed up again!! Original piece... https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/m1he3sn7dkw2kma43dy0p/MMM_W4-Cmin.mp3?rlkey=bfkojqfmemn63zjwxud2swirf&st=vefmxi3j&dl=0 My piece this week is very short, I struggled with wrapping my head around the concepts the 3 minors - aeolian, harmonic, & melodic but after wrestling with it I think I was at least able to meet the prompt... Mainly in C Aeolian, borrowing V7, IV7, & II7 i-iv-V7-i i-IV7-bVII-bVI-i-iv i-iv-V7-i i-IV7-bVI-II7-i OMG - ok I think I missed the point regarding "one moment of melodic minor" In this revised piece I changed 2 notes in the melody - Bar 13 Bb to B natural and Bar 16 F to A natural... Revised piece... https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/v3w51v7l9mgypzpsxjfkg/MMM_W4-Cmin-corrected.mp3?rlkey=ajiqy8141fuxqj9hh8p9wskdr&st=2t52g6bx&dl=0

Eric Kirwan

Just brilliant.

Steve K

Shiver me timbers!

Steve K

Most excellent!

Steve K

Wow indeed. Aspirational for me!

Steve K

That's really good - beauty in simplicity!

Steve K

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1u-p5yaIiuSlWDM8lGcSgdeTVw7fg1eKm/view?usp=sharing Mine's in A minor. A 4 bar intro contains the chords which make up the first two sections: hand on heart, I can't claim an obvious melodic minor section in my melody, so that's a fail I guess. Am7, E9 / D9, Dm add 9 / Fmaj7, Em7 / Am7. The final section has the II chord to get the tritone: Am7, B7, Bbmaj7, Fmaj7, Em7, Am7. If anyone is interested, here's the MIDI for the chord progression: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1yhmTnI1sdPg7CY_Umlz9KnUx64B5_G-c/view?usp=sharing Oh, and a full disclaimer: I can't sing (or dance).

Steve K

Here's mine: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1iAMjSq4Mjr5bhWFzayBsJURmZMc44lKB/view?usp=sharing The A parts are pure E minor, but the B parts I tried to insert some proper E Melodic Minor, and one measure of Lydian Dominant(?) from the F#7. I found it tough to try to get the natural 6 and 7 to play nice close together, so I stopped trying. Em7-CMaj7-D7-Bm7 x2 (im7-bVIMaj7-bVII7-vm7) Am-Em-Bm-Em (iv-i-v-i) Am-Em-C#m7b5-F#7 (iv-i-vim7b5-II7) Em7-CMaj7-D7-Bm7 x2 (im7-bVIMaj7-bVII7-vm7) Am-B7-D#m7b5-Em (iv-V7-viim7b5-i) G-A7-C-B7-Em (bIII-IV7-bVI-V7-i)

Gamp

EDIT at midnight: Still working on the finishing touches. I still plan to have it done before any reasonable person would wake up to make a video... I'm looking forward to listening to everyone's pieces!

Iron Octopus

This reminds me I need to work on guitar bends. Really nice vibrato too. The ending made me smile :)

Znernicus

Beautiful playing, I dig the 5/4!

Znernicus

Excellent note selection highlighting the chords and changes, and I really like your tone!

MindStorM

Siiiiiiiick bro! Love the prog as always!

MindStorM

Wow! This is some serious shit, Znernicus! If you've got some other day job, now's the time to quit. You could be doing so much with this kind of stuff.

Sole Brick

This is a piece in A minor in 5/4 (for some reason it just comes naturally to change it up from 4/4). I tried to keep simple (ha!). I added the F# and G# in to get the tritone and Melodic Minor. There’s also some Harmonic Minor when the E7 dominant chord comes in. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-FPaTknP8_MVW11IVjkb348UCD9_XN7S/view?usp=sharing Am | Cmaj7 | Dm6 | E/G# Am | Cmaj7 | F#m11 | Fmaj7/b5 (Esus/F?) Am | E7 | F | E7 Am | F | E7 | E7 | Am9 This took a lot of work trying to figure out what goes where. But I think I managed the assignment. 🤞

Sole Brick

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/2saaplh47e0gspou8huox/Lesson4MelodicMinor.mp3?rlkey=e55sa9x2z5x202c3x5wygrukw&st=39fk9gqj&dl=0 I decided to go metal on this one, with drop D power chord tuning and 7/4! I think I used all 12 notes... some Harmonic Minor, Melodic Minor, Dorian #4, Phrygian, and even a little Lydian b3. It got weird and a bit difficult but it was fun. D drone A/D Gm/D E/D Eb/D x2 Bbm Dm Gm F C Dm E Eb Bbm Dm Gm D Gm F E A Dm riff Bbm Gm A/D Gm/D (Harmonic Minor) E Eb F/D E/D (Dorian #4) A/D C#/D (lydian b3) Bbm Dm Gm F C Dm E Eb Bbm Dm Gm D Gm F E7 A9 (melodic minor) Dm Riff

Znernicus

That was really neat! Absolute pirate vibes on that one, and it was perfect!

MindStorM

The arpeggiated chord outlines are chef's kiss!

MindStorM

Very true! Though I’m a 90s kid, that tone still hits for me. I used a more modern metal tone with the rhythm guitars but the 80s tone with the lead

MindStorM

Super cool! Agreed on the tone, sounds like straight out of an 80s studio.

ExcellentHummingbird

Not super happy with this one since I just noodled over the backing track and then injured my hand before I could come up with something better and cleaner. But it is what it is, so excuse the self-indulgent guitar slop. :) It's mostly in E Minor/Harmonic Minor, grabbing the occasional B9 from Melodic Minor and F# from Dorian #4. There's also a brief E Major chord in there, sort of faking a key change to A Minor where I go from Em to E > Am > G > F# > F, but we're actually still in E Minor and the F chord is just the bII leading to a V. Nobody expects the bII. I did manage to use all 12 notes though, so that's something. https://drive.google.com/file/d/16QrOT2bn4gZAOAfwk8GLDBeResfRq0Ya/view?usp=sharing Intro: Em - D#° - D - B9 First part: Em7 -- Am7 -- D7 -- B7 Em7 -- F#7 -- C Cm -- B9 Second part: Em - C - D - Em E Am7 - G9 - F#9 - F B9 Em - G/Am/Bm/B End: Em7 - Am7 - D7 - G7 - Cmaj7 - F#m7(b5) - B7 - Em7 i - vii° - bVII - V i -- iv -- bVII -- V i -- II -- bVI bvi -- V i - bVI - bVII - i I iv - bIII - II - bII V i -- bIII iv v V i - iv - bVII - bIII - bVI - ii° - V - i

ExcellentHummingbird

Thank you so much, Paul!!

MindStorM

Great playing! Really like your lead tone on this.

Paul T

I can’t dedicate so much time this week so this is a basic arrangement with virtual instruments. However, I’ve been thinking about folk melodies so I decided to lean hard into the folky vibes and write something in 6/8 with only traditional instruments. Melodic minor seems to fit perfectly for this style (admittedly I only used it briefly), and I was surprised to find that even dorian #4 doesn’t sound totally out of place. Maybe it’s just because accordion automatically makes everything sound like it’s being performed by a group of pirates. Yarr! https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/1udzc9e83sq6vnxtweco5/Modal-Mixture-Week-4.mp3?rlkey=4eorgqhown6vm5mgmx79sw5g8&st=kzb53q4w&dl=0 Chords: Am | Am | Am | Am | D | Am | Am | E | Am | Am (A Dorian / A harmonic minor) C | D | E | Am - Am7/G | E | E | Am | Am (A melodic minor / A harmonic minor) F | F | Am | Am | B | B | E | E (A aeolian / A dorian #4 / A harmonic minor) Am | Am | D | Am | Am | E | Am | Am | Am | E | Am (A Dorian / A harmonic minor) EDIT: Had some time to write some lyrics, feel free to sing along “The Golden Age of Piracy” Many years ago, we burned DVDs, And we downloaded music for free. No monthly fee, Lars won’t get his royalties, No revenue drawn from me. Your intellectual property belongs to me! Many years ago, we burned DVDs, And we downloaded music for free. And we downloaded music for free.

Paul T

Thanks, yeah, it's a fun couple of chords.

Alan Zeleznikar

Really cool, Jay! The melody over that melodic minor change still caught me off guard even though I read it was coming haha

MindStorM

That A7 to Eb caught me off guard in a good way! Really cool stuff

MindStorM

Here's my submission! This was a really fun challenge. I've never incorporated melodic minor itself into my music--only modes of it before. The tune centers around B minor. I took more of a rock/metal approach for this one. I have two rhythm guitars panned to opposite sides. One is always doing power chords, and the other is doing a mix of power chords and full chord voicing where I really wanted to emphasize certain modes. I also did a lead guitar solo over it to try to further emphasize which mode was being showcased. The progression is as follows: Bm-G-A (Aeolian) Bm-D-E (Dorian) Bm-G-A (Aeolian) Bm-D-F# (could be either harmonic minor or melodic minor, but I focused on that sharp 7 only, so it seems more like harmonic to my ears) Bm-D# x4 (B Dorian #4) Then I climb D#5, D5, E5, F#9, F#7, and then end on Bm. When I get to the F#9 I begin the melodic minor scale noodling. I stayed in melodic minor soloing, but I know the F#7 can pull the ear towards harmonic minor, so it isn't quite as clear even though I tried to hit that #6 in my soloing to show I'm still meaning to play in melodic minor. I started to switch between the D# and C to get Phrygian in there, but it sounded too forced lol. I look forward to hearing other submissions! It's so neat to hear so many different styles and interpretations of these assignments! https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ip0lLRKGhmRUjYeKVjN548a8fiXNnWWa/view?usp=sharing

MindStorM

Back to the sequencer this week. In Gm: Gm Gm Bb Dm (diatonic Gm) Gm Gm Bb D9 (V9 from melodic minor) Gm Gm Bb Cm (diatonic Gm) Gm Gm A7 Eb (II7 from Dorian #4) Gm Gm D9 = D D F# A C E all from melodic minor. This chord was played as a "spread voicing" in this case meaning the notes were played in ascending order to sort of spread out the frequencies to make it sound a little clearer... maybe. The bass plays a D and an E on this chord as well. Finally this chord sounds a little awkward on its own to my ears but it came together in the mix when I dropped the velocity of the E a little. A7 is the II7 from Dorian #4 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1B56S9QkQmJY2JcbMXL-ZePKaIwC2RCQl/view?usp=drive_link ARZ

Alan Zeleznikar

Modal Mixture demo Week 4 Brief and to the point this week, since I was sick a couple of days. 🤢 Quarter note triplets again, inspired by my Harmonic Minor violin segment in Week 2. Dorian / Lydian | Am | D7 | G | B7 | i IV bVII II | Am | D7 | (dramatic pause) i IV Melodic Minor | Am | E9 | Am | E9 | i V i V B7 in bar 4 is II7, with #4 (D#/Eb) in melody D7 is IV7 E9 is V9, melodic minor melody in bar 8 (natural 6 and 7) https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/n79dunqkr80si4r9c29ei/Am-D7-G-B7-Jan-2025.mp3?rlkey=17m2zjy37sx9c9yqpx0ai7wuy&st=sgjbxkhi&dl=0

Jay Goemmer

More to the playlist! Yessss! Such delicious sounds <3

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