(Commission) East Meets West 4: Bulletproof
Added 2023-07-06 02:00:30 +0000 UTC(female wrestling, femdom, headscissor, crossover, Yang Xiao Long, Bullet, RWBY, Blazblue)
Story Blurb: After losing to her new rival during their first two fights, Yang faces Bullet for a third time, hoping to finally get a win.
Author’s Note: This story took way too long to finish.
Comments
This was super awesome! Out of everything I think the bar scene was my favorite out of everything. You captured the the submissive part after the match in a super unique way and did it really great! It made Yang look super cute. I liked the dialogue and banter, the Goldilocks thing especially captured and set the tone for it. How Yang felt super conflicted about it the whole time and showed it, even in the last match was super hot you did an awesome job! ^^
EinBoph
2023-07-07 16:23:42 +0000 UTCLove seeing Yang being written again. I never could get into rwby but the characters are awesome
Korravine
2023-07-06 17:42:32 +0000 UTC
