You're right, now that you mention it, the image of a slightly small old man thrusting against Akane's plump, shapely, feminine hips from behind feels incredibly erotic, and her swaying breasts are a nice touch too (lol). Anyway, I'm really rooting for your awesome work!
ajtmjtrm
2025-10-07 04:33:00 +0000 UTC
Thank you.
In my opinion, it's preferable for the villainous old man to be about the same height as the heroine, or even smaller than her.
(Though being as small as a goblin is nonsense.)
By making the villain shorter, I believe it strengthens the impression of the heroine being violated by an inferior being, which is why I chose this approach.
JJNK
2025-10-07 04:12:34 +0000 UTC
The concept is great! If I may be greedy, I’d love it if you could make the old man a bit taller (lol).Average height for Japanese men in their 70s: 160–162 cm
Average height for Japanese men in their 80s: 158–160 cm
Akane Kurokawa’s height: 163 cm If the old man is a whole head shorter than Akane, it makes him seem like a dwarf, which feels too fictional. On the other hand, if he’s just a few centimeters shorter than Akane, it’d give a more realistic, non-fiction vibe and make the work even better, I think!Just for reference. No need for a response at all. Keep up the great work, and I’ll continue cheering you on!