Side Dishes 8-37: Hi-Res
Added 2021-07-11 22:23:32 +0000 UTCThe main conflict is now solved, so now the focus is going to be on the viral seed getting into the water system... I have a bit of an internal debate I want to ask all of you about... how much do you want to see of other women becoming infected? Because my instinct is to just do a quick montage for a page or two to finish the chapter and move on to the next Shortcake story, but I'm not sure if everyone would rather see some more specific or detailed stuff before finishing this chapter.
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I think a detailed story of a Mom and daughter in a hot tub would be nice to see. Overall I think you are doing great. No Complaints
2021-07-12 11:55:58 +0000 UTCWould love to see what happens to three girls in a hot tub or spa when the infected water reaches them... especially if two are transformed in the tub while 3rd only is sitting outside and force transformed by them after...
beefboy
2021-07-12 01:59:26 +0000 UTCI'm actually really unhappy with how that chapter came out... it was just too far away from the initial premise that it started with and the story never really came together.
Transmorpher D.D.S.
2021-07-12 01:20:40 +0000 UTCI think 3 - 4 pages would be awesome covering a range of different girls, maybe 1 or 2 per page. Hopefully that would tie it up without taking a long time, but also be awesome!
Alfredo
2021-07-12 01:00:19 +0000 UTCI'm all about seeing more than a few pages cuz I adore transformations, it's not like that wouldn't rule out a sequel in the future either. Maybe like a page each for a few different pairs or groups of girls throughout the city would let it show off a lot without seeming like it's taking forever?
The Wixard
2021-07-12 00:31:13 +0000 UTCI want see a sequel to that cowgirl short you made a while back. I really love scenes with transformations like that.
Testcase
2021-07-11 22:45:46 +0000 UTCWell you could end it right here, use that last panel for a cliffhanger. And if people want to see a part 2 pick up from there. Or the montage can be the cliffhanger showing the infection spreading. It all depends on if you want to have a sequel.
Testcase
2021-07-11 22:43:43 +0000 UTCI think a montage would be better for the story. Everything seems to be wrapped up right here. It would just be filler/fluff to extend it any further.
DarkKnight12
2021-07-11 22:28:00 +0000 UTCQuick montage but a part 2 would be nice in the future
Corsair103
2021-07-11 22:27:18 +0000 UTCQuick montage
Sirly1
2021-07-11 22:26:45 +0000 UTC
