子宮の勇者について, そして個人的な質問
Added 2022-11-23 12:40:34 +0000 UTCa personal question about the brave in the womb
子宮の勇者
私は漫画や文章について勉強をしたことがないせいかカット分け、文章の伝達力が足りないと思います。 ただ絵だけで表すとか、絵と文を別々に使うとか、自分なりに色々試してみる予定です。
個人的な質問ですが、皆さんは私の絵の中でどれが一番好みだったのか気になります。
a brave man in the womb
Maybe because I've never studied manga or writing, I think I don't have enough ability to communicate. However, I plan to try various things, such as using only pictures or using pictures and sentences separately.
It's a personal question, but I'm curious which one of my paintings you liked the most.
Comments
Thank you for your detailed opinion. I recognize that my face is hard. It's the part where you feel desperate about studying the human body.
2022-11-23 14:43:48 +0000 UTCAfter browsing your gallery a bit more, and giving it some thought, I decided on a final favourite. This one: https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/3673063
Praso
2022-11-23 14:32:04 +0000 UTCOh, and I forgot this one: https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/3529098 Abused elves are always fun. :D
Praso
2022-11-23 14:04:30 +0000 UTCAlso, some text feedback: I really really like the way you draw hair. Pretty much in any picture you draw, I like the hair most. Your faces are good too, but sometimes they seem a little stiff. I think you should try making them a little bit more expressive. In regard to the bodies, I think you draw the perfect midpoint of plump and slender. It's great. When you draw womb prolapse, I think you should draw them a little bit bigger. I do not mean, that it should hang down to their knees, no. But sometimes they are positively tiny. It looks out of proportion I think. 🤔
Praso
2022-11-23 13:55:25 +0000 UTCApart from the "Bitch Diary" series, I also really liked https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4332959 and https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4533751 There are two pictures I'd like to mention, that I would not consider favourites, but that have aspects I really liked. In this one, you drew a really fantastic body for the girl, but I think the content is a bit boring: https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4410566 In this one, I somehow really like the all over style. The way the colors interact, the details on her clothing. You did a good job there :D https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4501075
Praso
2022-11-23 13:51:44 +0000 UTCContent wise, I actually like the older "Bitch Diary" series and adjacent pictures most. :) I pretty much like all of that series, but I especially liked the unfinished 7: https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4351466 I also especially enjoyed https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4238248 and https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4006850 and https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4201252 and https://www.fanbox.cc/@ruinabyss/posts/4308062
Praso
2022-11-23 13:51:40 +0000 UTCall picturs
2022-11-23 13:29:54 +0000 UTCCounter question: Do you mean, which one of the panels of "子宮の勇者"? Or do you mean from among all your pictures?
Praso
2022-11-23 13:21:00 +0000 UTC
