[TWS] Chapter 113 – Not So Impenetrable Fortress [HIDDEN]
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But does she really :P
Saileri
2021-12-03 17:10:56 +0000 UTCCan’t forget that she obviously has a crush on him.
Van
2021-12-03 17:06:03 +0000 UTCExtra strong light just me deeper shadows
Aurora1325
2021-12-03 12:54:04 +0000 UTCAlso, I think the princess got the same hots as the blade that cut the blade she broke lose in half and now wants a "Flaming Poker" from him too. ( ◜◡^)っ╰⋃╯
2021-10-29 01:44:42 +0000 UTCPersonally, I think the big mouth complaining about him all the time, knows something about what is going on.... ༼ つ ͠° ͟ ͟ʖ ͡° ༽つ
2021-10-29 01:42:40 +0000 UTCI mean if suddenly you find out that a guy overturns everything you know to be a fact and these facts are linked to extemely awkward and powerful summons that shouldn't exist, according to what they know, their entire reaction just seems out of the ordinary if you consider the previous iterations. Not to mention the king is surrounded by experts that should be kicking up a storm. The tone just feels off. But this is just my personal opinion and of course feedback. The king is probably hiding his own secrets but this chapter is going to feel... off until we get more context or explanations.
2021-10-28 05:14:55 +0000 UTCMaybe if he is weak to his daughter like some daughter cons are....
2021-10-28 00:05:56 +0000 UTCIt's probably because there's something bigger to worry about as a king than his summons, and the fact that his family seems a little to close to the royal family in general. Either way we need more chapters asap to find out why
2021-10-28 00:05:32 +0000 UTCThanks for the read. I kind of feel like the mc and king are far too trusting. I understand his ability to break through the arrays, but he is revealing his hands way too easily. Their reactions at his summons didn't feel all that strong either compared to previous times either. The whole chapter felt a bit.... too smooth for the setting imo. Theres no tension, wonder, or curiosity when i feel like there should be a lot. Considering he's infront of the king and probably some of the highest level people around it just feels off.
2021-10-27 14:36:57 +0000 UTCGreat chapter! Now it's super interesting to know about a way the Princess will involve herself in this epic quest "Hey dad, can I please go to another continent with this super poweful guy to do some adventuring?" shouldn't work, should it?
slua
2021-10-27 10:48:10 +0000 UTCAs the King I'd still invest in an security upgrade after this. Like extra strong lights to an degree that borders on paranoid obsession. ;D
n00by_ME
2021-10-27 10:17:26 +0000 UTCRoyal Harem Member protocol initiated.
Darth Mole
2021-10-27 02:47:35 +0000 UTCIt’s 3
Ralph
2021-10-27 02:31:40 +0000 UTCWell, there were multiple little things. First, the whole castle was built with some material that blocked teleportation spells in the area, be it in or out. Second, the meeting room had several security arrays and as the magician showed, they didn't stand together on one side just to look cool. Third, there were silencing wards installed there too. There also might have been a few other things that weren't mentioned in the chapter. I don't want to tell too much since that would spoil the next ones. But, the king was hinting at something with his last sentece. And his confidence both in himself and the security wasn't completely baseless. We'll see more things soon :P
Saileri
2021-10-27 00:35:25 +0000 UTCYeh lol that’s the only option that actually makes sense to me
ThisClown
2021-10-27 00:24:06 +0000 UTCPersonally I agree princess get because she would love the adventure from what we have seen from her and it would let the king keep more of an eye on him
2021-10-26 23:47:30 +0000 UTCOr 4 she is just a nosy outgoing girl curious about the guy that kut her knights sword in 1
2021-10-26 23:46:23 +0000 UTCI can think of three possibilities: 1. She is a part of this evil organization; 2. She is staging a coup for the throne with help from discontent nobles; or 3. She wants to prove herself to her father to make him proud of her by taking down the organization by herself
Eroyla Drago
2021-10-26 23:40:41 +0000 UTCThanks for the Chapter!
2021-10-26 23:15:41 +0000 UTCI am not critizing here. Moreover reality is sometimes stranger than fiction anyways. That said, if I was that King, I'd feel the hairs on my neck stand up the moment the dwarf got "teleported" into my (supposedly) secure and warded room. Well... maybe it ain't as secure as I was made to believe, since the behavior of the princess suggests that she had a way around the whole warding, atleast in part.
n00by_ME
2021-10-26 23:03:11 +0000 UTCScheming and untrusting politicians are annoying and depressing. I get enough of those kinds of politicians in real life. I want my fiction to be fiction. Not realistic. That's why I read this type of story and not Tom Clancy or similar.
Thomas Beauvais
2021-10-26 22:10:34 +0000 UTCWe don't yet know his exact level of power or specialization with just some hints here and there, but the king certainly wouldn't take uncalculated risks :v But again, I wonder if his calculations would be correct as he doesn't really have full awareness of how big variable Umbra might be xd
Saileri
2021-10-26 22:07:24 +0000 UTCI can see the princess is going to be trouble for our friends! Excellent chapter!
Ralph
2021-10-26 21:54:55 +0000 UTCI don’t think that’s completely true
NickDatBoi
2021-10-26 21:41:01 +0000 UTCWhat fun would slowing down be? :D I say full throttle ahead! In fact why wait at all. Ast should do her on the packed table, with the intend to get her with child on the first try, while he proposes to her!
n00by_ME
2021-10-26 21:31:39 +0000 UTCYeah, the good old cliche of "The ruler who believe's it all and doesn't feel threatened in the slightest." I wonder what kind of drugs that king took before the meeting to be this... trusting? I would like some of them for myself, seems like good stuff. xD
n00by_ME
2021-10-26 21:22:59 +0000 UTCLooks like Silvia has a snooping artefact
2021-10-26 21:14:11 +0000 UTCSlow down :v
Saileri
2021-10-26 21:03:41 +0000 UTCAnd another joins the harem. "Drum beat"
Gunnar Crider
2021-10-26 21:01:25 +0000 UTC