[TWS] Chapter 180 – The Rightful Owners [HIDDEN]

Thx for the chapter 👍👏👏

MadRat

I was thinking the same thing when I read that part.... After all, she is part of Ast's party

Yes pls Salieri

Robert Thornton

I was certain Ast was going to give Sylvia a room in his castle and he would wake up in the morning to find her in his bed with his other mates.

Jon Torres

#ARA ARA GUFU

shifter1987

What if it's a nice demon milf with big tatas?

Saileri

Sigh....the mention of milking an antagonist is really not settling my stomach.....

shifter1987

No no no... not yet. Antagonists are rare and precious commodities in this story, even poor ones. This is the first AYM in... 60 or 70 chapters? Got to milk him for a lot more than quick drowning.

Dennis Erwin

Hopefully, John Tacoma will just fuck off into the sunset, but I doubt that. On the one hand, he didn't seem *homicidally* angry about being told he has no claim to the castle. On the other, based on what we know if him, there's no way he's just going to let it go, and there will be many people connected (socially) to Ast in Glimmervale that John could target in various ways. If Ast is smart, he'll have Umbra keep an eye on the guy. Not 24/7, but definitely checking on him a few times a day to see where he is and what he's doing. I doubt Ast will bother to do that, though.

Termac

In what way is this a cliffhanger?

Termac

Hopefully the drowning of that annoying bastard.

Darth Mole

Ok Mr alchemist hehe. Though you do have a point.

Darth Mole

You…… you are EVIL! ;)

Darth Mole

What with the law of chekhov's gun, I wonder what the heck that Confluence of rivers is going to be used for soon

Robert Thornton

Law of equivalent exchange. You get 5.5k word chappy instead of 3k, I get a cliff. Simple. Balance in the universe.

Saileri

This chapter was much better than the last one! But you keep us on that cliff too many times lately! I hope no one falls over it.

Ralph

Great chapter!

Michael Shuble

Outline? What's that? You mean the story doesn't just write itself towards its ending which had been decided at the very start and everything else is a journey there? :v

Saileri

I think I asked this before but can we get a “peer into the future tier” where you give us, under the penalty of a horrific death if we reveal it, your outline for the story as a whole? I pay lots! ;)

Darth Mole

Very evil cliffhanger. Great chapter, but it's never enough

Greg Szarko

That's some evil cliff. Thanks for the chapter.

NopiSoul