[TWS] Chapter 135 – Behind the Golden Gate [HIDDEN]
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Thanks for the chapter
Aurora1325
2022-02-18 13:06:56 +0000 UTCShone is the correct term.
shifter1987
2022-01-08 14:39:29 +0000 UTCIt can get a bit confusing with shined and shone. In this case, it's similar since you could argue it could be be both "arrays shined" and "arrays shone" if you argued it's an object. But I think I should change it to shone and my brain just slapped shined by default. Shone should be the correct one, I think.
Saileri
2022-01-07 22:30:17 +0000 UTCI have a comment on English. With several different authors that I have found using the same ( in my humble opinion ) mistake, I am wondering if common usage of English has changed, or if they are all using the same grammar checker, which, in itself is flawed. In this last chapter we have the sentence, “The protective arrays shined like a crimson sun with blue streaks woven into its rays.” To my way of thinking, the word ‘shined’ requires an object, for example, ‘he shined his shoes’; the word shone is a thing that something does on its own, for example, ‘his shoes shone in the sunlight’. I remember that one is transitive and the other intransitive, but I forget which is which. Is that now passe?
Kestril
2022-01-07 21:36:43 +0000 UTCOh hell to the yea!!!!!!!! So good, so hot, so need moar!!!!!
Darth Mole
2022-01-07 17:44:57 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter! Love the photos!
Ralph
2022-01-07 16:04:43 +0000 UTCDamn this is awesome
Michael Shuble
2022-01-07 14:50:30 +0000 UTC
