Papermon Journey ROUGH - 2ND DRAFT
Added 2022-07-06 10:56:52 +0000 UTCWell I listened to your amazing feedback, took it to heart and reshuffled the whole thing so that the highlights section was way more coherent, to the point that I've actually added several new scenes. I will NOT be changing it further (I've put it off long enough, it can't be perfect) but I do still want to make sure you see what you helped make better first! Also you can tell me if there are any technical problems as well.
Enjoy! Once I update and add the patrons, Youtube is next!
Comments
2 months late but I agree with everyone else, this is the best draft you have done.
Oliver- Smilliereacts
2022-08-27 09:37:50 +0000 UTCI'm very late but I just want to commend the snappiness and timing of the editing in this draft! Perfect!
LL
2022-07-10 22:07:54 +0000 UTCGood note, I'll keep it just for now so that those looking for the old "Journey" videos can find it easier, but I might phase it out later as it gets the audience back.
Suede
2022-07-07 22:57:00 +0000 UTCThis is honestly far better than your previous draft. Sure, you can't use scenes from the anime itself. However, this does feel like you are getting the same point across as you did with the previous PJ. Good work!
David Gray
2022-07-06 16:43:04 +0000 UTCSuede, my piece of feedback is that I think you should chop off the word "Journey" from the title of this series. "Papermon" is a fun enough title as is, plus I always get confused and think you're talking about Pokemon Journeys the TV series.
Cole Durrett
2022-07-06 16:35:43 +0000 UTCTypo in the warning section says "How battles differ from the games outside *if* typing"
Lucas Neumeyer (NEW-my-er)
2022-07-06 16:05:31 +0000 UTCThat strike at "I choose you!" was wonderful!! XD
Death of Ink
2022-07-06 15:41:40 +0000 UTC
