Shine page 315
Added 2020-07-10 07:19:09 +0000 UTCI guess she fell into her own trap a little here. Or did she?....No...No she really did. At least she doesnt back down.
Content warning for spanking...if thats not your thing.
Notice the whaps. Gonna be upfront and honest...those were placed there because the art underneath that bit really sucked. LOL I spent ages trying to get that to look right and it just wouldnt work for me so thought sod it just slap some words over the top and it'll be fine. Yup quality workmanship strikes again *whap*
To balance that out however I really REALLY frikkin love that last panel. Just the look on both their faces (but particularly Marellis's's's's) and the angle and....just that whole panel I am really happy with. So the two panels balance one another out and make it a normal page LOL
Here have a shine page
https://www.dropbox.com/s/q3c2onscq3km69f/pg315.png?dl=0
Comments
I'm already dreading what could happen next time. The idea that he could end up putting a punishment on Star so bad that she just instinctivaly safe-words to make it stop, and he just ignores it (or worse, mocks her for it) and keeps on going. Goodness knows how many other poor littles and ABDL's he's forced himself on before Star, considering it looks like he's been in the scene for a while.
2020-07-17 02:29:36 +0000 UTCYeah no after care either, just a "I'm done with you, get out" This is really horrible.
2020-07-16 07:31:49 +0000 UTCYou can already see the major difference between Marellis as a Dom, and every other dom Star has had. When anybody else was spanking or disciplining Star, they would get the punishment over with, and usually offer comforts afterwards. While here, Marellis just keeps kicking her while she's already down, talking about how she's "insignificant" and a "Dumb little baby".
2020-07-16 02:01:28 +0000 UTCis it wrong to want to burn someone’s house down?
Jared Godwin
2020-07-15 03:06:06 +0000 UTC*angry bunny noises!!* I know he will get what is coming to him. Nasty little evil always get their comeuppance!!!
Emily Wells
2020-07-12 00:58:29 +0000 UTCShe does have the cutest butt with that lil bobtail :3
2020-07-11 17:10:31 +0000 UTCYou know she'd go for his eyes if it wouldn't get her in trouble
2020-07-11 06:36:09 +0000 UTCThe hiss makes me really happy for some reason.
2020-07-11 06:02:14 +0000 UTCI'm in love with this comic. I hope star hasn't gotten herself in a mess she can't get out of.
Sabrina Liney
2020-07-11 04:05:24 +0000 UTCBetter watch it star, pretty sure you’re close to getting that butt padded in public
2020-07-10 16:29:40 +0000 UTCI'm glad Star kept her composure during this because I don't think I would have reading it. It actually made me nauseous seeing him lay his hands on her. I probably sound like a broken record with how much seeing him use her AB/DL side against her disgusts me, and I hope Star gets a play date with Manda and Lure again soon to be reminded that being little is about happiness and being loved. I'm nervous because I'm sure the worst for her is yet to come but as the cliched saying goes it's always darkest before done.
TheDaren
2020-07-10 15:53:49 +0000 UTCUnka Fezzik needs to put his size 18 boot up someone's ass!
FezzikFleabaggins
2020-07-10 14:36:44 +0000 UTCOof. This shouldn’t be hot, but here it is. I feel a bit guilty for getting warm over it!
Ashley Ackley
2020-07-10 12:53:46 +0000 UTCOh and Star is friggin adorable in this page. 😍
2020-07-10 08:57:38 +0000 UTCI... I don't know how to feel about that one. On one hand it's Marelis, but on the other hand they are just the right words. Just not the last panel. Perhaps I just need to run into Tessa... 😶
2020-07-10 08:56:46 +0000 UTCMe before discovering Star: how can people love something so much yet despise it at the same time? Me After reading Star for a while: oh... now I understand.
AndMore
2020-07-10 08:45:05 +0000 UTCI actually love this guy as a villain Not because he's a dick, but because there is actually reason behind why he's doing it Mind you yes he is a dick and he needs to be punched But still it's a vary compelling antagonist
TooMuchDesu
2020-07-10 08:19:18 +0000 UTCShe's totally "yeah whatevs mate. Dun even hurt? You even tryin back there, Bruv? Let's just get this over and done with so you can have your powertrip and I can get back to my plan"
2020-07-10 07:50:17 +0000 UTCWow talk about insult to the blackmailer "this is too tame compared to what my friends do"
None ya
2020-07-10 07:43:53 +0000 UTCIt’s easy to hate Marelis yes, but I also see a different possible outcome that can make her (work)life much better 🤔 I’m curious where this all is going.
2020-07-10 07:27:46 +0000 UTCI sure hope he doesn't get away with this. I hope comeuppance is something epic.
Night Mist
2020-07-10 07:27:12 +0000 UTCIts comin' don't worry :D
2020-07-10 07:25:34 +0000 UTCUgh i hate his creepy hands touching her. She doesn't deserve thaaaaat. He's the one that needs a whoopin
Jalena (Little Legreedy)
2020-07-10 07:24:09 +0000 UTC
