Shine page 398
Added 2021-07-09 11:06:55 +0000 UTCSo. This is the start of a bit of a discussion between the three of them. Stars thought bubbles and dialogue at points during this scene may come across as a bit...problematic I guess is the phrasing, her questions and thoughts dont come from a place of malice but she is a pretty clueless. Luckily Kim is quite patient and is there to guide her and Star is a fast learner.
As I stated in the previous page, this whole scene is being hashed out with strong input from Kim herself.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/a30z1942a0vxvwa/pg398.png?dl=0
Comments
IM NOT CRYING....YOU'RE CRYING. I just got some dust in my eyes...yeah...
2021-07-11 13:58:23 +0000 UTCAwww so sweet and I love your story telling
Jade Coyote
2021-07-10 05:10:35 +0000 UTCYes I know a few.
samantha rebecca clarkson
2021-07-10 04:06:32 +0000 UTCThere are several of us! SEVERAL!
Luca 'Renee' Shoal
2021-07-09 19:04:47 +0000 UTCThis is hitting home but in a good way :)
2021-07-09 17:22:51 +0000 UTCyou are so good at weaving this story
2021-07-09 17:04:01 +0000 UTCwahhh ;w; now i want the next page even more
Fyari
2021-07-09 15:18:38 +0000 UTC