Shine page 355
Added 2020-11-27 08:59:04 +0000 UTCThere was something about the words on this page which really set of my anxiousness. I was literally holding my breath as I was typing them. Or maybe it's because I know what's in store for our hapless ball of fluff...
Look...I'll rememebr to put the link in this time.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ql8v2aikhm4df69/pg355.png?dl=0
This is another one of stars friends from waaay back during the card game in the pub
Comments
Okie so I just missed the page. :P I'm a doofus.
Damaronwolf
2020-11-30 23:15:16 +0000 UTCPlease let Manda get to them first before my fist reaches Marellis' face to make his snout no longer stick outwards.
2020-11-28 06:24:34 +0000 UTCOh no oh no poor star she has to much on her mind already
2020-11-28 06:14:33 +0000 UTCAh i love filling my stomach with fear and panic first thing in the morning
Jalena (Little Legreedy)
2020-11-27 20:18:36 +0000 UTCI... Err.... Um.... *Runs in circles not knowing what to feel or think* Awesome writing as always. I really can't predict what's coming and I love it.
2020-11-27 17:33:10 +0000 UTC-breath in deeply with finger tips touching- heck! -breath out-
2020-11-27 16:23:29 +0000 UTCOh God, what does Marellis have in store for our little lynx this time?
Cloud Grandson
2020-11-27 15:46:08 +0000 UTCThe way this is going sorta makes me wanna smite Morallis with a 2x4 or something. This Page has me twitching in anxiety, anticipation, and suspicion. Ultimately, good job on this page.
Jared Godwin
2020-11-27 14:28:55 +0000 UTCThe new experiment by the scientist, feels like a setup for some of the short stories you do
chris john
2020-11-27 12:40:06 +0000 UTCYay! That’s good! This page just gives me anxiety that stars been outed. Bob needs to have a chat with morallis.
2020-11-27 11:26:02 +0000 UTCI think actually looking at where i am in the story...It'll probably be decmeber when we get to a point where the blackmail arc is primarily resolved :D so not long to go now
2020-11-27 11:21:02 +0000 UTCCan we get to the part where morallis gets his burr kicked pretty please? I love the story but mphhhh! I know he’s up to no good. Can’t stand star being black mailed.
2020-11-27 11:16:43 +0000 UTCMaybe its all an elaborate nightmare...right? I mean if he goes public with her secret like this he loses control over her, right? I hope so, or Martin may actually kill him
2020-11-27 11:05:12 +0000 UTCBIG SHENANIGANS ARE AFOOT
Adri
2020-11-27 11:02:03 +0000 UTCOh god I am not liking the sound of this. He’s gonna dress her in a custom onsie or something I’m guessing. This is gonna be torturous. Murder suspense. Looking forward.
2020-11-27 10:06:43 +0000 UTCI hope it something nice but he should not be getting anyone else involved. he is in trouble when others find out.
samantha rebecca clarkson
2020-11-27 09:50:13 +0000 UTCOkay, you're really got my mind whirling here. I'm very nervous about what is going to happen next. I keep thinking I know what's gonna happen next, then you make a sharp turn to a direction I didn't see coming. You really know how to keep readers interested. I LOVE IIIIIT!!!
Night Mist
2020-11-27 09:44:23 +0000 UTCI'm going to remain dilusional
2020-11-27 09:41:17 +0000 UTCOr maybe we’re the ones to be surprised? 😳
2020-11-27 09:24:18 +0000 UTCOmg, just reading this page filled me with anxiety!!!!! They seem to be old friends so my guess is this is some mind game he's playing on her, cause I don't think they would team up against Star for anything weird or malicious...I hope....
Devin Sarter
2020-11-27 09:12:54 +0000 UTCI can't wait to see the Surprises!!!
Raymond R Elder
2020-11-27 09:12:15 +0000 UTCEverybody here are worried I think.
Silvood
2020-11-27 09:06:51 +0000 UTC... I have concerns. MANY concerns.
SekhitheFops
2020-11-27 09:01:24 +0000 UTC
