Shine page 364

One year of Shine

Raymond R Elder

I’m curious to see where this goes from here

And now, I have to start over at page one of Shine and get caught up with past details

Raymond R Elder

Its a lot to process all at once !

Raymond R Elder

Aw poor Star it seems like she can’t catch a break. Hopefully see can understand that her friends are just trying to help

And of course lure is focused on play smh

Two wrongs don't make a right - but 3 lefts do. We've had two major left turns, first the charity event then Little Mary. I can't wait to see the third left turn that makes everything right again

Poor Star. This might not be the kind of revenge she wanted.

CuteWolfy45

And I think most of us will still be here through the rest of those 200 pages. I know I will be.

Ash Vampire

I just hope they can catch Star before she makes it out of the house. Lynx are fast. I had a feeling this would all be a bit much for her, intrigued to see what happens next. :)

Lure is so pure haha, and Mary is taking this like a real champ, maybe enjoying it deep inside? :P. I'm excited to see this reaction from Star, either this will get more emitonal, or some minor freakout..... OR Star ran for her camera so she can take a picture too :P.

Rambusk

Star was expecting some time off and to be little and play for a while. Then she walks into THIS! I’d be upset as well. I feel sorry for her. She didn’t need to see this untill the video was made. It would’ve been better if “Mary” suddenly acted REAL nice all of a sudden at work and do everything what Star wanted. I still hope he gets banned from all other future events, because what he did was WRONG! I hope Star can forgive her friends and still finds the right set of mind to be little for a while before she returns back to her normal life.

Holy heckaroni sweetie, what a way to end 2020! Your work always brightens the day, and makes me even more excited for the next piece <3 I do wonder what's going through Star's mind at this moment, at least it was all done with good intentions <3

Looks like she needs a little time to process what just happened. I know I sure would. I'm hoping they somehow saw one of the flyers. So interested to see where this goes. Also, only 200 or so? I think I'm going to need at least 3000. Lol

I think your analysis is spot on. She went there to relax and get away from everything as we saw 2 pages back. What ended up happening was a completely different outcome than what she wanted

Jared Godwin

I think this is a case of what I would call good initiative, bad judgement. I do think Martin kept his word and Tessa is the link here to Manda, but surprising her with Marellis like this in her safe space I think is a bit much. Maybe make the surprise movie time where they roll this little home movie they have planned, and follow up with telling her Mary's down for a nap if she wants to see her for herself. As it is it looks right now, Martin went back on his word and her tormentor is in her safe space. All that said, I'm sure after a little reassurance Star will "warm up" to Little Mary.

TheDaren

Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah saw that coming. "I just wanna escape this week for a bit and forget all about Martellus and his assholeish plans fo- ohshithe'shere." Looks like Mr. Fancyhair kinda figured this might be a bad idea.

SekhitheFops

Star.exe has encountered a problem and needs to hide under her bed for a bit.

Fyari

yeaaaa... i was going to write something about Tessa in the last page but cut her out of it and just wrote that Manda was the mastermind. But my theory was that manda did that with the charity thing to protect her. but your theory sounds way more realistic xD

Did, everyone forget Tessa and MAYBE she's military as well? And she MAY E saw the flyer around base, recognized Star's outfit from the spanking room and put 2 and 2 together

I wonder if martin was not involved just asked to film the whole thing. I also think that Manda did know what was going on in the first place and just waiting for the opportunity to let start know what the punishment could be if anyone did step out of line. I wonder if the more people on the base knows about being a little then just them two and reporting it to manda about the flyer.

samantha rebecca clarkson

Welp I was wrong, but I wouldn’t want to be in Martin’s shoes as the Dom side of me would never tell a sub I would keep their secret if I wasn’t sure I could. To me I’ll try, but no matter what I will protect you would have been a better response to Star. It wouldn’t have comforted her as much but in a time where she’d already been deceived absolute truth is important.

Sicle_Family

Perhaps he kept his word and didn't mention the Star thing but that is why Manda didn't realise there was an issue, if the video taping stuff came out from a different source?

Sezoxeufu

A well deserved punishment if I ever saw one. I'm sure Martin has kept his word to Star and din't tell Manda or anyone about her involvment. But he probably told Manda about Mare..., Sorry, I mean MARY filming at the ABDL weekend. Not only Star is involved, but other's as well.

I actually think he DID told Manda, but not that, Star is in any form involved, and Manda decided this punishment for little Mary herself.

Just 200+ pages? But I just got here. Also I hope star is going to be okay. Did Martin tell Manda? He's definitely got some explaining to do.

Vinny the Stump

I disagree. As someone who has seen this very same situation happen to someone who I cared about, and it ending horribly with said secret coming out anyways, our little Mary is getting exactly what they deserve. Frankly after the situation with Star is dealt with, I hope they release this "Home Movie" to the base anyway just to tear down what credability he has. He doesnt deserve mercy at this point after all he's done.

Martin has some explaining to do...again. My theory...I think he kept his word and Manda found out the situation some other way. She did tell Star once there was no point in hiding anything from her. Just 200+ pages, really? We eagerly look forward.

Not the response i was expecting of her tbh. Perhaps its the fact that there is a camera pointed at her. But..also..general shock?

She's left the nursery..not the house...currently. I dont think any level of shock would cause star to rush out in the street dressed in her current attire hahah As much as we may wanna see that ahaha

i knew martin had a hand in this ^^ also he may not have tell. manda could have discover little Mary accomplice and martin would have jumped on the occasion i hope it will go well between them

Somehow this is even more unnerving...

Did.. did star just try to leave bottomless in a nappy? She must really be in shock!

Or maybe Martin talked to Tessa who told Manda. Then he didn't break his promise

I just hope Star doesn't get too angry on Martin because he told Manda when he promised not to

Lure? Less innocent? Nah he's as innocent as can be.

Luca 'Renee' Shoal

I don't think springing this on Star was the right call. She's been under so much pressure that this was definitely the time for a quiet talk to explain things. That said I don't think Martin did the wrong thing getting people involved. As he mentioned earlier its likely 'Mary' was filming a number of littles in vulnerable moments and that kind of predatory behavior needed to be dealt with.

This brings up a lot of feels for me. As sweet as revenge sounds personally I don’t enjoy it like that. Being hurt by someone isn’t a reason or right to carry out that act against anyone else. Some people on this planet are genuinely nasty and have no sense of empathy whatsoever, but I struggle with the idea of reciprocating that kind of hate back to the world. But being blackmailed has a way of jading you, I know that from experience. Bravo again, brilliant story

Awesome work, have a nice new year ya deserved it.

I really hope this is a misunderstanding and they didn’t actually find out. It would be good for them to know but I don’t think this would’ve been the right reaction to it

Wondering which way this is gonna turn out. Is she gonna reveal more of what Mary has done at base? Or is she gonna tell them to back off? Or will it go a third way where she teaches Mary a stern lesson? Whatever the case, you know how to keep the attention of the audience Star.

Night Mist

Lure playing along makes it feel like he has a less innocent side,

chris john

Mary doesn’t look too put out. Ahhahaha

Malaise Tonic