Shine page 368
Added 2021-01-08 10:44:24 +0000 UTCSo this page took longer than it was supposed to, generally because I had to go back through various other pages to make sure the kitchen and nursery were the same...As you all must have noticed by now continuity is not a strong point of mine. You may also notice that Marellis has like a white bit going up his muzzle all of a sudden and a black tail tip....This was always what his markings were but for some reason my brain decided back on like page 222ish to forget these things so Ive been drawing him wrong since then LOL Ive gone through and fixed all the pages on FA but you may find the dropbox/patreon pages still have his previous markings cause fixing all those dropbox links would be a frikkin nightmare but needless to say the source files on my computer are fixed so hopefully from this point he'll be consistent LOL.
Anyway have a shine page..You may notice something about the bottom half of this page that out of 368 pages has never been shown before :)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/i2bry1hlic68x9g/pg368.png?dl=0
Comments
Seeing Lure in vanilla clothing is a little jarring but a welcome addition! ^_^ Great work!
2021-01-09 04:49:47 +0000 UTCYeah slipping him a roofie is pretty morally grey, but given that Martellus was blackmailing her with something that would cause her already pretty abusive father to become downright horrible to her... yeah... fuck 'im.
SekhitheFops
2021-01-08 20:58:18 +0000 UTCAs dark as drugging someone is, those lines from Tessa are so perfect. We can winge on and on about what is or isn't ethical, being the better person, blah blah blah, but it's a fantasy story and I think everyone has a little sadist in them that loves seeing the bad guy humiliated. Also the answer is Lure out of diapers isn't it?
TheDaren
2021-01-08 20:43:51 +0000 UTCHad it not been for the way Marellis had been acting beforehand, I would have said this was going too far. But in this case, I'm not gonna argue. Also, is the new thing the Changing Table, or the Dino pictures on the wall?
Night Mist
2021-01-08 20:16:39 +0000 UTCThe new thing shown is the dinosaurs on the wall??
2021-01-08 17:27:13 +0000 UTCI completely agree and so does my recently volatile temper. There are a list of things I could think of to do to Marellis that he wouldn’t enjoy and all of them are very painful
Jared Godwin
2021-01-08 17:14:49 +0000 UTCMarellis deserves everything coming to him. I bet some sensetive people will say they think this is going too far but i think he's getting off lightly considering what he has done.
2021-01-08 17:10:08 +0000 UTClure is so cute even in adult form also i dodnt notice the mistake until you said something and i thought back anywho keep up the good work!
2021-01-08 16:03:39 +0000 UTCMy silly ideas for future scenarios from this point (totes non-serious): Star becomes the military mascot as "baby lynx". Mary joins for the charity event. Tessa took over Mary's place so she can be bossy for Star outside of Manda's :D.
Rambusk
2021-01-08 13:12:11 +0000 UTCTessa you beautiful, evil, genius girl!
Cloud Grandson
2021-01-08 13:09:14 +0000 UTCSecretly some of us want to be in Marellis’ position on this page 😏 I know I wouldn’t mind 😋
2021-01-08 12:25:34 +0000 UTCwait, Lure can be an adult too O.o
2021-01-08 10:54:17 +0000 UTCYou are right there. Although drugging people is not the best, but probably called for.
2021-01-08 10:52:34 +0000 UTCI think this may of not been the first time Lure has stumble across something like this. Also is this the first time we seen Lure not in little space whatsoever?
Nerdy_Little
2021-01-08 10:52:29 +0000 UTCIt's not kidnapping per say if he walk into the house himself 😉
Nerdy_Little
2021-01-08 10:51:42 +0000 UTC
