Found page 112
Added 2022-06-13 09:41:09 +0000 UTCThis page is slightly different to the original. (which is here) https://www.furaffinity.net/view/7021386
I felt in the original that some of pauls words didn't sit right with his personality they felt out of character for him. Taking them out and changing some of Gems words, has made Gem come off as colder than in the original I feel. I think that's a good thing at this point in the story.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/vt5r4zqw6gbq7qf/112.png?dl=0
Comments
Gem, how can you be so mean to Paul? He just wants you to open up, you'd feel better.
Jay Schoenhaar
2022-06-14 01:41:31 +0000 UTC
