Found page 117
Added 2022-07-18 07:46:46 +0000 UTCAwww no that didn't go to plan at all.
So here's the original https://www.furaffinity.net/view/7111231 and here's the new one...
https://www.dropbox.com/s/oj7o9e712mjvoqs/117.png?dl=0
Now here's a question for you because im genuinely on the fence about it. Part of me wants to add the original words back into that last panel, but part of me feels like the page feels stronger without them. What do you think?
Comments
These last few pages have been absolutely killer for art quality. I think the last panel is perfect without the dialog, too.
2022-07-19 04:03:10 +0000 UTCI can feel the rejection
Broaster07
2022-07-19 00:37:56 +0000 UTCDefinitely silence in the last panel is better
2022-07-18 21:57:00 +0000 UTCMaybe a 'sigh' to add emphasis, but the picture does convey Paul's feelings extremely well without any text. Shows how much you have developed your skills! ^^
2022-07-18 20:38:28 +0000 UTCIt doesn’t need the text how it’s drawn conveys the feeling in just as powerful way.
Jay Schoenhaar
2022-07-18 19:36:32 +0000 UTCI feel like silence is more powerful.
Damaronwolf
2022-07-18 13:26:48 +0000 UTCI like the new panel, silence is golden
2022-07-18 12:09:33 +0000 UTCIts much stronger as is imo
2022-07-18 09:12:18 +0000 UTCI think it works better without the last line.
DVoid Comics
2022-07-18 09:04:54 +0000 UTCHmmm... Paul's clearly on a downer in the last panel. While the text does clarify what he's thinking, it's not essential. Leaving it out is fine.
2022-07-18 08:45:45 +0000 UTCi think you need to add the text, but i agree poor paul.
samantha rebecca clarkson
2022-07-18 07:55:45 +0000 UTCKeep it as is
Vinny the Stump
2022-07-18 07:54:44 +0000 UTC
