Shine pg489
Added 2023-03-24 09:36:51 +0000 UTCClunky transition page.
I always know what the sections of shine need to be and have those parts fleshed out, but I never really know how to get from one chunk to the next chunk
As I was explaining in the patreon group yesterday (which is here if anyone who isnt there wants to be there)
https://t.me/+UrEEA3PduxtmZGU8
So yeah this is super clunky but it gets us there, so sorry for the brute force LOL so have this page of Shine
https://www.dropbox.com/s/2fqe2vxzlfu3zvy/pg489.png?dl=0
Comments
What about the surprise after getting 3 stars? https://www.furaffinity.net/view/50591211
2023-03-27 16:31:45 +0000 UTCI like it! It definitely provides some good context to the next segment and gives a bit of a ‘recap’, which is nice! :)
2023-03-25 05:04:38 +0000 UTChehe very cool page
SpringGear
2023-03-25 03:10:55 +0000 UTCI dont think it seems to chunky. The flow works just fine :3
Jalena (Little Legreedy)
2023-03-24 15:55:03 +0000 UTCI absolutely love Manda and Lure in the center panel!
Manigeitora
2023-03-24 12:50:19 +0000 UTCTo be fair if she told Elly she might be there swinging a rolling pin
Sicle_Family
2023-03-24 12:13:09 +0000 UTCIdk why I read the narration text in the voice from Stanley parable
2023-03-24 11:13:04 +0000 UTCTo be fair, I kinda have that same problem too
DVoid Comics
2023-03-24 09:52:36 +0000 UTC
