Chapter 7 Page 25-26
Added 2020-09-01 22:19:04 +0000 UTCAnd that's how the scene ends. Not with a bang, but with the lights going out as our heroes continue on their respective paths.
I really wanted this scene to end on a more positive note, but who are we kidding - Troy's known this guy for 1.5 days, some of the worst of her life, and Dan goes ahead and pulls..this. My wishful thinking could only do so much. After a bunch of rewrites Io came in and really made it work, first mirroring Eve's exit from Dreamspace 3:
and then those final words from Troy that better be a wake up call for Dan, because DAMN. MY EMOTIONS.
Anyway, I'll stop stealing material from Io's future script commentary.
Next week we're actually gonna check up on our other characters, a much needed break for everyone involved.
Comments
That quiet ending packs *such* a punch. I think I heard the closing of the door echo. And when Troy is outside watching his light turn off... 💔 I really hope Dan can get it together, or start to
littledot63
2020-09-02 04:57:50 +0000 UTC<3 @ Panel 12. Very, very much a mood.
Dave Cochran
2020-09-02 00:25:53 +0000 UTCI really hope Dan does do better and sooner rather than later...
Augusta Wickman
2020-09-01 22:40:16 +0000 UTC
