Hellish Delights Pg19 (WIP)
Added 2022-07-16 08:30:45 +0000 UTCThis page is still VERY sketchy and needs some perspective tweaks. I'm also unsure if Talon pushing on the bed hard enough for Church to slide really comes across clearly, lemme know!
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Thank you for the feedback! It might come across better with sound effects and motion lines but I might just redraw the panel to make it more obvious he's slipped
Lilythekitsune
2022-07-17 04:21:43 +0000 UTCA bit hard to tell with the slide. Maybe slightly exaggerate the covers bunching on one side and being pulled taut on the other? Otherwise looks really good imo
Homedragon
2022-07-16 14:13:17 +0000 UTC
