Episode 6 - scene 3 update
Added 2024-11-12 16:11:01 +0000 UTCReally didn’t think I’d finish this so soon…
But last night I couldn’t sleep for some reason so I kept writing haha. Anyway it’s there :)
Cheers, the writer
EDIT: reported bugs are fixed.
Comments
Nice of you to take the time to explain, I appreciate an option being added as well, thank you :)
Aetheries
2024-11-13 15:52:42 +0000 UTCNia will leave if you wait for her outside, especially if she sees it’s all three of you. She can’t leave while she’s there never matter what and she takes her volunteer very seriously. You can’t call her directly you have to call the hospital since this is 1994. So maybe I’ll add a line explaining this but Mrs. Winterop doesn’t leave her post, ever. She knows who enters and who leaves the hospital all the time. It’s just one of those things about the town. I’ll add the option to not want to break their finger, that just means Imre goes because rules don’t apply for him being the son of who he is
Jude G
2024-11-13 15:40:44 +0000 UTCWe gotta unpack why Imre's first response is to break a finger. I already know he is his own shade of crazy but like...If we can't just call her, wait for her to get off work and talk to her in the parking lot? If you must be inside it is *one* person who thinks MC might be sus, they can't be on shift all the time they are going to switch shifts or hit the bathroom at some point, heck it is a hospital there is more than one entrance. Anyway, I would ask for an option to refuse the breaking of a finger at the very least? Because there is no back button and given the option to break a finger or have someone else go in I am going to have someone else go in...or just wait until the end of a shift. Boy might be pretty but nobody is break a finger on a whim pretty.
Aetheries
2024-11-13 15:32:31 +0000 UTCRawrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr the cliffhanger with Nia scene!🥹🥹🥹 But God bless your writing speed, I didn't expect to get so many good crumbs in one month.
Eill
2024-11-13 13:27:17 +0000 UTCThere is a error when you select you re indefferent about the toddler thing
Moonrise
2024-11-12 19:41:01 +0000 UTCoh yes the aftermath of sally talk! 🥹
HarleyQueen
2024-11-12 16:12:35 +0000 UTC
