Comic preview <3
Added 2019-01-08 07:22:42 +0000 UTCStill need a lot of cleaning and adjust the style cause every panel they look like they have a different age and i think ill do more canon compilant since they will be using movie suits and be on the movie bed yadda yadda feel free to sugest anything <3
and tell me if its too small so i can make 2 posts or if its to confusing so i can fix things :3
this is very testy and i deal pretty well with critiques and suggestions, specially on the sandwish method: compliment > critique > compliment
byeeeee
oh almost forgot, this is inspired on this AU: https://twitter.com/2bewaffles/status/1057731526035677185
Comments
Aaaa Im working on it!!! I hope to post it tomorrow at most!!!
2019-01-10 19:24:28 +0000 UTCI'm dying of thirst at this feed me
xigbarf
2019-01-10 13:22:12 +0000 UTCThe tits 👀 Thank you !!
2019-01-08 19:59:37 +0000 UTCThank you! I think you are right but since the max post on twitter is 4 images I’ll have to keep it like that @-@ on a bigger comic we can work on those details for sure!!
2019-01-08 19:51:15 +0000 UTCThank you so much! Im enjoying this au a lot and when I saw that dialogue I instantly “THATS hot” ahuahah I’ll adjust the bubble!!! Thank you!!
2019-01-08 19:23:01 +0000 UTCI see Bakugo's foot is still mine. 😏
ano
2019-01-08 17:19:00 +0000 UTCOh my God, bakugo in the last page, with his head thrown back and his tits omg. He looks incredible. I can wait to see this finished ! Awesome work!
BardInTheWild
2019-01-08 14:31:17 +0000 UTCI’m really loving what I’m seeing so far Feh!!! 💖 I like how you adjusted Bakugou’s eyes on the second page 👌 That whole page is perfect! So is the third! I really enjoy Bakugou’s look on the fourth page! It’s so hot! 💦💦💦 I know you’re trying to keep this comicshort but I’d love to see a page in between the first in second of Bakugou giving Kiri a sassy remark. Since Bakugou is very strong willed I feel like he’d snap back briefly at Kiri’s claim of it being impossible for him to make him submit lol. I think in this situation Bakugou wouldn’t actually try to make Kiri submit but he’d playfully sass him anyway. Whether you take this suggestion or not I’m very excited to see the finished product and am proud of your progress! Your panel placement looks great and of course the anatomy is spot on! Also, that Kiri in the last panel is so cute!!! 😭💗 Keep up the good work!
2019-01-08 14:11:20 +0000 UTCIt's really interesting that you're using that AU! It's a really funny one. I didn't expect that line, which was over text to turn out that way if said in person but it's hot. I'm liking the lines and sketches I see so far and I was able to follow it all pretty well was bc I've read it before. That chibi on the last page is funny because it's so out of place with the tone. Just recommend one time adjistment, the 3d speech bubble in the first panel,first page, it is not clear that Kiri said that.
Rashel Izro
2019-01-08 12:40:34 +0000 UTCthank yooou
2019-01-08 07:33:31 +0000 UTCIt’s really coming together, Feh! I honestly love seeing the WIP and can’t wait to see it finished~ 💕
DoodleCakes
2019-01-08 07:24:46 +0000 UTC
