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Celestial Potter 008

Editted this chapter 19/11/24

Added a Jimmy scene at the begining of chapter as it fit better here chronologically.

Eddited this chapter 24/11/24

Changed Goblin scene.

Sorry for any inconvienience.

Comments

I've been thinking about this, and you could probably edit it to work like the Fidelius. People still know that James Potter has another son, and the Goblins know that it was James' disinherited son, they just can't remember his name and they should realize that something like a fidelius is protecting the name. From this it shouldn't be difficult for eventually everyone to know that the protagonist is James' son but is using another name. I can actually imagine the Unspeakables going through something similar, having their name protected by a Fidelius since in this fic they deal with things like demons.

Kureiji Ryuu

Yeah... i stumbled into that problem as i'm writing. I think i can make it work with a bit more of a slanted interpreatation of how the perk works.

Lachlan Keating

I really like gender bending, I think it's interesting and it seems to add an interesting twist to the story, although I would have liked it more if it took a while to adapt. I don't know what to say about the name perk. It's certainly useful, but I think it was detrimental to the story. This perk killed a lot of interesting developments that were forming. I really think it might be better to reroll when something like this happens because there's no point in sticking to the rules if they hurt the story.Also, I'm still confused as to how everyone found out she's half-Veela if she hid Allure.

Kureiji Ryuu

There are a few perks withing the Grimoire that allow switching.

Lachlan Keating

Depents on the Grimoire whether he will return to male, be futa or gain the ability to switch back and forth.

Lachlan Keating

I enjoy the gender bending as well, but am happy either way, is there a ranma 1/2 perk maybe he could switch back and forth, keep both sides happy. Though I doubt the vocal QQ crowd will be happy, they always want a fic to go a certain way

Lawdan

I very much like the genderbentness, I’ve never understood why people dislike it so much

Tyler Hooker

So…is he ever gonna get the power to turn back into a guy?

Based_Bass


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