Ridiculous way to die (38p)
Added 2024-07-04 14:27:37 +0000 UTCThe "short" story I made for this month on Fanbox (it actually became longer than expected cause I ended up really getting into this one lol). Hope you enjoy and big thank you as always. Decryption password for the original version: kcssk (check my X/twitter account for more info on that) The heroine this time is a college girl, about to have a relaxing shower late at night in the dorm. Surely nothing can go wrong during such a cozy part of your day right? Well, crazy thing is, this scenario is actually inspired by an article I read in the past and it impacted me a lot...it's kinda scary how ridiculous ways people can die when you least expect it. We do have rescuers of course who really don't want to let that happen, so we'll see how it goes...
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Yup, that's exactly what happened, she suffered commotio cordis. The can exploded and the force of it powerfully hitting her sternum distrupted her heart and triggered vfib. It's such a freak accident. And yeah that turned to asystole way before they found her, her body was laying there for around 20-30 minutes probably before that other girl discovered her...so yeah definitely no chance to come back from that unfortunately, despite how big of a loss it is to have someone like her pass away. And thank you, so cool to see your enthusiasm on the topic.
phantom
2024-07-05 11:19:04 +0000 UTCbeautiful scene. I love her big blue eyes and sexy figure. She has such large breasts with that flat tummy Did she suffer from commotio cordis in the shower? It seems like she was struck in the chest and it disrupted her heart rhythm. She surely sustained a concussion too when she fell limp unconscious. It seems no one found her before her heart fell into asystole. That was probably a long time with no oxygen. I wonder if she could have displayed decerebrate posturing or seizures while she was experiencing worsening anoxia in the brain? Agonal gasping could be possible It is nice to see the chest compressions on the monitor and the flat line when they are paused. Great way to show the time passing between cycles. Looks like the beautiful girl never left asystole after the paramedics began resuscitation. Excellent visual storytelling in this set, I really saw the debate in the room when time was called. Seems her fixed and dilated pupils convinced them she was gone?
cprresus
2024-07-05 05:39:07 +0000 UTCThank you! Foaming from the lungs can easily happen due to drowning or other serious damage or injury to the lungs, so you can expect to see it occasionally. In the case of serious lung injury, it may even be mixed with blood...
phantom
2024-07-04 15:23:59 +0000 UTCgreat work as always! btw the foaming scenes in your earier work is hot and I wanna to see them more:)
sb
2024-07-04 14:39:47 +0000 UTC
