Reward: The Burning Coils: Part 1
Added 2016-09-01 04:45:32 +0000 UTCHey there, guys. ...Whew. This was... quite a new experience for me. It came down to the very last second here, and I put an incredible amount of effort into it. Likely more than I should've, but I do care for you guys and always wanna give you as much as I can.
This is part 1 of The Burning Coils, a story idea I've been developing for quite a long while now. It was this year that I decided to make it in a comic book style format, in 11:17 ration versus my usual widescreen of 16:9. This presented some incredibly strange challenges to me, but I stuck with it and hope that it looks good enough.
The Burning Coils is about an ancient battle that took place between the humans of the world and the snakemen servants of Keto'sar, the serpent god. During the early days of humanity, Keto'sar grew envious of the gods of man and their creation. In retaliation, the serpent god ordered his creatures of scale to watch man and steal the secrets of their being and deliver this information to him. With that knowledge, Keto'sar began the long process of empowering and evolving his scaled ones until they resembled man, but far bigger and stronger.
Humanity would end up going to war with and defeating the snakemen of Keto'sar. But nearly one hundred years later, there have been strange sightings of monsters resembling the snakemen who were vanquished and eradicated. And now, a wizened man named Hagen has happened upon the Book of Man, a collection of prophecies and a dire warning for them all...
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Comments
Absolutely love this, everyones "clothes" from Vali and the incredibly handsome Jawline/cheekbone god odion, who's face also reminds me of someoneon, with their butts cocks and pecs exposed. Hjalmar and ylandarr a gust of wind would exposed their butts and cocks and even the sexy bearded old man hagen with his pecs and butt visible, the see through loin cloth being decorative. The light dustin of hair on odion and hjas sexy pecs. Wonder if hagen and odion are related? Love the banter in this, sexy scally butts cocks and pecs appear, yla's butt in pg 39 and nipples in 40, like how the green snake says he's grossed out. Hjalmarrs hand grazing yla's nipple at the end.
WallowinMuscle
2017-11-19 11:43:04 +0000 UTCThanks, man! It's gonna be quite a big tale -- probably even more than my orc vs man one -- by the time the final part is done.
Lucky Stallion
2016-09-23 10:51:47 +0000 UTCThis is amazing. I feel like it is building up to something really big, and exciting :) Thank you! I can't wait
bob hope
2016-09-22 21:38:21 +0000 UTCThanks, Alex! I'm glad to hear you guys enjoyed this first part. I'll have more wrestling in the subsequent entries, with extra details about the world and the characters, but with more emphasis on the action.
Lucky Stallion
2016-09-04 05:39:47 +0000 UTCThanks so much. :) It was certainly a different experience! But definitely worthwhile.
Lucky Stallion
2016-09-04 05:37:41 +0000 UTCWow, we can see the effort on this. Everything is spectacular from the guys to the setting. And the story is really good, too. Thanks!
Alex Miller
2016-09-03 19:53:07 +0000 UTCBloody hell this is great! :) Excellent writing and characters and great action too!
Steven Cross
2016-09-01 07:14:52 +0000 UTC
