MAYDAY/SPIDEY 2099 - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

Mayday took a turn for the better, several turns in fact! Definitely up to see this continue as well!

Horizon

I really aim to have comics that balance the fun-factor of any Spidey comic with the explicit eroticism we're all very interested in. I'm superglad it worked once again! Thank you for your kind words!

Tracy Scops

I'm a new subscriber, and I have to say this one is my favorite issue of the collection so far. Rosita is a treasure, and I wouldn't be surprised to see her work one day in the mainstream, perhaps even illustrating an official issue of Spider-Man. It was also hilarious, something you don't always expect with erotic fan fiction. Miguel's "future-slang" moment was absolutely perfect.

J T

Miguel dominating them? That would be hard to happen with the Parker sisters. They're always in control. About your question, it was already answered here: <a href="https://www.patreon.com/creation?hid=2324574">https://www.patreon.com/creation?hid=2324574</a>

Tracy Scops

I am absolutely digging this, and the art makes it even better. Rosita is truly someone that you have to admire with that kind of talent Back to the book. I have to say that it almost felt like Miguel is Mayday and April's own man-whore, and while there is nothing wrong with it I kinda felt he should do them both abit more harder. In a more dominating way I heard about this sequel you're planning and I will be looking forward to it, but to me this would serve as a somewhat prequel to Mayday and April's very own "Spidercest" story, which I mention this to you already, and it would be like a femdom story with lots of theme to it. What are the chances of that ever happening, and would this idea interfere with the current Spidercest series? Good job with this and I love Rosita's artwork. Looking to see what you have planned with the sequel

SH2307

Thanks! I try to have a very wide range of themes and body depictions on my comics. We had symbiote futas last month and will have bigger women next one. I hope to cover most ranges on the long-run.

Tracy Scops

I could not suggest you start at any point but the beginning. The whole run is very heart-grounded and fun as a comic book series. But maybe some of the other people here can have a different opinion.

Tracy Scops

Man the art work is just amazing here, I think this comic is more sexy than the blues one, no complaints here! (Aside from more endowed female characters and symbiote futa, obviously!)

Vladdy Bladdy

it might not be the right place to ask but... Do you have a good recommandation about a Spider-Girl run. The book look to have a lot of up and down and I would like to start reading it at his best not its worst.

Hentai Borg

Thanks! About the wall-webbing, you might be in for a surprise with one of the next month's new comics. And about their dad, he'll do much more than just appear on the sequel to this. As people say, the apples don't fall too far from the incest tree. Stay tuned!

Tracy Scops

Loved the comic. Rosita is one of the best artists you've worked with so far. I really enjoyed the dominant women on Miguel. A couple things this comic made me want: When they were talking about shutting him up, I really wanted them to web him to the wall with a few placed shots and go femdom on him for a time. Maybe even do a scene where a crime alert draws the others away and Miguel is stuck glued to the wall with his pants down. Or with one of the girls, either way is funny. I also thought it might be kind of kinky if they played up an angle of May's dad busting them or almost busting them in the act since Miguel seemed worried about it. Just my two cents though. Stay the course.

Symbiote tentacles are always on my queue. There are 3 comics featuring them in production right now. I'll have to disagree with the "centered on Miguel" opinion. The girls appear on every panel except one. And the story actually is about them fucking Miggy, which was kinda hard to avoid with that big hard thing pointing at them. But I'm sure we'll be able to see more girl-on-girl action on a future sequel, mostly because there'll be 3 of them now and "daddy" won't be able to handle them all at once... ;)

Tracy Scops

I'm not sure what you meant by the canon version of Mayhem. I don't believe we changed much of her, did we? To be honest, this was the 2nd time I used the Spider-Song on a story, but only when I got to the lettering, which was much later to change. I also used it on the Gwenom story. But now that I think about this, I wrote this script almost an year ago, and Gwenom was written last January. So, turns out I made that mistake on Gwenom, not in here. =P About the sequel: As soon as Rosita is available, I'm going full-thottle on that idea mentioned in the extras. ;)

Tracy Scops

Hot and Funny. If I ever need a slogan, I'll use this one. And thank YOU for supporting me.

Tracy Scops

Thanks for your suggestions. Rosita will soon open her Patreon page with original stories. We will have to wait until she's open for new commissions again. Personally, I don't see any problem with the font I'm using. Why do you think it's abad font? Also, EvilGenius does not have lower-caps, which I prefer to use, since most Marvel Comics use that kind of layout now. I do have plans for a reverse violation coming later this year. Stay tuned.

Tracy Scops

Since BB was more of a romantic story, I tried having this one as a more "raunchy" one. I'm glad it was edgy to the right amount. Fun fact: Rosi used Ian Somerhalder as a reference for Miguel. Not sure why, but I guess she finds him hunka-worthy.

Tracy Scops

I had many complaints in the past that my stories usually happen inside a bedroom. I really tried to explore more of their abilities and possibilities of urban scenery. About the sequel: As soon as Rosita is available, I'm going full-thottle on that idea mentioned in the extras. ;)

Tracy Scops

This comics is one of my favorite. The Rosita's art is better than ever. The dialog are better too. The sentence "I guess we might have to help him deal with sudden blood flow to his pelvic area" is the best line used in a porn book ever. I like the attention to details like 2099 profanity (Jammit, Son of a glitch). The sex is great because it is "spider-sex", page 8 is what I mean, the 3 of them are sticked to the wall having sex and it is glorious. I like Spidey 2099 fang tricks too. Canon-wise it is a fun too. I am waiting for the sequel for sure.

Hentai Borg

Agreed, faces and body language are well done.

GregD

I have nothing bad to say about either comic this month. BB still wins, if only because I feel it was perfectly constructed, much like the original Spider-Gwen smut comic, to tug at my heartstrings. But this? This also worked very well. And Mayday/2099 is a good example of a comic with art that has harder edges, and yet still doesn't make me even uncomfortable. Miggy, I think, is just a perfect choice for a hunka Spider-loving, and May and April approached him just right to make him their willing manslut. Tone falling somewhere between Spidercest and Scarlet Spiders: everyone is still getting exactly what they want, And there's no borderline quality to it. And there was even still room to make fun of 2099s very silly future profanity. Top notch.

GregD

As usual for Rosita works great job! You should commision her more pages/comics she is so good in drawing. You should commission her also original comics not linked with spidey universe. In this volume maybe should be better to have more actions and less dialogues. Try to use a better font for lettering such as EvilGeniusBB (more comics-like font is requires in my opinion). Try to insert theme/genres such a reverse rape and so on. I hope to have soon a new work of you and Rosita you are both great artists.

The Art from Rosita Amici looks great as always. And the Story is great too and is not only hot but funny as well. Thanks for creating this great stuff.

Sven M.

I love that it sets up for more stories, especially with an earth X character which is a great one shot! I love the characterisation and how you've given them identities without having much exposition. I fully laughed at May singing the spider song. I think keeping that tone is great for the nature of the comics. I feel like having less story arcs and moving them along more would benifit the writing. Then gwenom one felt a bit self contained, where as this feels like we've come from somewhere and is going somewhere. I also feel like this would help us keep engaged with the characters like the the spidercest did and sexual symbiosis did. I know these were your earlier works and I appreciate how much effort they took. Maybe keep the ones you've got move them to 10/12ish issues and complete them then move on. That's how I feel. Inclusion of April was good and Miguel. Although I would prefer more of the Mayhem version of the character although that's not perfect cannon. But yes! More symbiotes. More tentacle action. The way April's outfit moves around is very hot. I also think maybe just the symbiote and its host alone with lots of writing and quite explicit pictures is something I would really want to see, weather it follows on with Peter from the SS storyline, this one or maximum carnage or someone else (mania.) The writing, story and dialogue is improving. Really good. The lettering looks great, definitely better than the last comic I read! And rosita. Keep her on board. Marry her if you have to! Keep her here because her work is fantastic and the new colouring and lighting is noticeably better! Great stuff! Keep it up!

Kieron Johnston

My favorite bit about Rosita's exceptional artwork is the way she draws faces, as she doesn't hold back in making them expressive, emotive and very detailed, without of course ignoring all the fun bits below the neck :) Couldn't comment storywise as I'm out of the loop regarding the spideyverses, but as long as it continues to be a believable and well written vehicle for incredible sex scenes, I am content. That being said, Spooney is right regarding the April/May and symbiote tentacles, although I suspect that'll show in any future installments for this grouping of groupsex :)

Vervalsen

I'll get the obvious out of the way and say the artwork is phenomenal! I also enjoy the characterization you have chosen for O'Hara as a passive dilettante who always learns to unleash his inner kinks. I sometimes forget how much I miss both of these universes, which is basically a Mel Brooks' level of awesomeness. The positions were also great fun, really paying off the Spider powers of the trio. Time for nitpicking. Unlike Bygone this was almost entirely centered on Miguel, with only two panels of April/May. Not to be a broken record but I'm always looking for more symbiote tentacles.

Spooney Bard