VENOM STALKS SPIDEY - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

I think this is my single favorite of your She-Venom stories. i have to agree with Zechs that the only downside is that it isn't longer.

Shendude

While I found the idea as a whole appealing - and the homage to Kasia Uscilko was cute - I think that the ending is a bit short-sighted. Leaving the girls to wander around the city still empowered by symbiote fragments could have opened up a lot of fun story options. Not just encores with Peter, but Felicia, MJ, Anya, Silk, Miles, maybe even Spider-Gwen or another Edge-centric spider from outside of 616...

Altairadactyl

Ah another wonderful symbiote story. I really enjoyed that the only voice present was the symbiotes which was new. Also I did enjoy how the blonde resembled Gwen Stacy. Also the curly brunette kind of looks like ultimate kitty pride in some stories. So overall I loved this one hopefully there will be more symbiote stories soon!

I think the narrative really makes the art come alive in this one, it both sets the scene as well as enhancing the art, you and Lanza really work well together. The ending scene in particular was breathtaking, Peter was a fool to give up the symbiote if it gives the owner additional penis power!

Vervalsen

I'll be honest here: I was in a kinda creator's block when I commished this comic to Lanza. So my script was just the scene descriptions for each panel, mostly based on some japanese reverse gangbang videos I had recently watched. I had already done something like that in the past: creating the dialogue from scratch after the art was delivered (I'll leave for you all to imagine which one it was) so it didn't seem like much of a problem. Then, when he finally delivered his wonderful artwork, I felt I could do something like I did in Liquorish Whiskers (not that one, btw), with the interior monologue. It seemed a perfect opportunity to explore a xenocentric view of the human relations, both emotion and physically. I may have lost the chance to explore my initial idea of playing with the sisters' personalities (the romantic, the pervy and the insane) but I think I already do something like that on the Spidercest series. In the end, I think it all came out well. Despite me struggling a lot with the sibilating narrative. =)

Tracy Scops

A++. This is a very different departure from previous comics, and I have to say I very much like it. It gives me a little of what I've been wanting from symbiote focused stories - a delving into the mind of the symbiote itself. And while these girls and the symbiote itself are forcing themselves on Peter in a story which actually gives no voice to Peter at all... even with my personal proclivities, I can't say I minded at all. The adorableness and hotness of it - not to mention Sketch's art - made me completely overlook it. It's our first reverse gangbang, too, which is a bonus. And even with the (light!) non-con elements, it actually ends on a note I really appreciate: Venom actually tempered by the symbiote, and concerned far less with killing, and far more with fucking! While I don't think there's much more to this story specifically, I would love to see more in this kind of storytelling vein. Both in regards to the symbiote's mind, and alternate forms of narrative. But yes, this hit in a big way. No complicated narrative like some past stuff, but it doesn't need to be for what it is. Love Sketch, love the Venomettes having their way with Peter. Faptastic. :D

GregD

This was the first time I made up new characters. But as SG commented below, they are indeed somewhat similar to a trio of neighbors Peter once had.

Tracy Scops

I have to ask are these girls made up for this story or were they in the comics or something?

Gerald L

I consider that a very good compliment. =)

Tracy Scops

In my script they were called only by these nicknames: Crazie, Roadie and Lovey. I think the blonde didn't get so much more of "screen time" on the actual comic. But her scenes seemed the best for the promos, so I ended up using her more.

Tracy Scops

This was a fun comic. My only take-back is I wish it was longer.

Zechs

you know the other venom girl in this story i was curious of how much involvement they would get considering the blonde had all the attention in the previews and yes also the story but i was still glad the other two got screan time.

Vince Champagne

I'm not sure what you mean. Elaborate more, please?

Tracy Scops

i meant the other host girls

Vince Champagne

Not intentional at all.... =D

Tracy Scops

In this story? The others don't appear.

Tracy Scops

i was curious of how much the other girls get involved considering the main girl presence

Vince Champagne

The girls reminded me of Pete's old hottie neighbors Bambi, Candi, and Randi, so that was a bonus.

Grey G.