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Mockingbird - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

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Mockingbird - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

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I don't know much about Mockingbird (She was never around when I was reading comics the most, and from what I've heard she's really been put through the ringer lately), but personally I thought she was a total badass in this comic. While I agree with others that I feel the pairing between Spidey and MJ post-Regent fight could very well have warranted its own comic, I had no qualms over it being in the background, as I don't feel we won't be seeing any less of MJ here in Tracy's output . The art is also great; I love the rough lines Bayushi provides, it reminds me of Alex Maleev for some reason, though that comparison might be a bit off. Overall, not as good as "Scions," but definitely not something I ever knew I wanted to see, and enjoyed it all the same. Heck, I might have enjoyed the banter in this one more so than "Scions."

Jack Charlotte

I have to say as much as I really like the art I find this quite disappointing. The reason for that is that this comic is pretty much two concept into one, and that can have readers think what is this really about if it's not what the title says, and it feels pretty wasted. Here's the reason why: The first-half of this is pretty good and I think it could have been extended into it's own story with Peter and MJ in their spider costumes and having fun with some outdoor sex. There could have been some opportunities for it to be some creativity in their sexual activity and that the story could have been about those two tying to relive their romantic experience and make up for lost time as they start to fall for each other again. And when they were running in the park from those police guys were quite enjoyable and quite fun because of how much they're acting like teenagers. The second-half however could have been alot better. Those two are training together. Mockingbird knows Spider-Man's been interested in her lately and that could have been played into that were she slowly exposes and teases him. Something more like having those two wrestle each other  as parts of their clothes are removed and then it get's sexual, with Mockingbird being the more tough brooding figure that want's to have fun teasing Spidey until she gives him a reward. And Mockingbird is the kind of character that would take advantage over anything With what I'm seeing it's quite disappointing since the title is about Mockingbird and it should have stuck with it, with MJ being briefly mentioned, and I feel the concept in this has lost its moment to shine when you have the concept of one half being about MJ and the other half being about Mockingbird, and compare to both of them the MJ part was far more better then the Mockingbird part and I feel it could have been that instead. So yeah and I'm sorry to say this but I have to be honest. This feels like a waste to me. Mockingbird was a character that I've gotten interested after she was made a cast for Spidey, and here I feel the relationship between those two should have been developed further and there could have been chances for that had the MJ story not taken any space because the sex between those two feels uninteresting to see. It's still okay dialogue is quite alright but I feel it still couldn't make up for it in the end. Good Felicia at the end though

SH2307

Didn't really do it for me, I'm afraid; for some reason I ended up focusing on the banter, not the smut.

Shendude

I don't like criticism, but since I've started I guess I should continue. This really wasn't to my taste, it was a pure new girl pick (so those people should be happy) and I didn't have much of a connection to Mockingbird before or after. Tracey normally nails the empowered women characters but her Bobbi had something of a lack of conflict. She battled Pete's memories of other trysts and this by the far the most intriguing element and most problematic... Because I much more enjoyed the Iron Spidey MJ scene and even got a tickle out of Felicia. This was a great element and spiced up the tale and characters but a part of me would prefer MJ Iron tentacling Pete as a fucktoy. Still not bad by any means.

Spooney Bard

Cute stuff with the park stuff , nice with the outburst about not bringing up Clint, i though it was going to be Peter trying to play it cool around MJ after training and fuckin Bobbi and not the other way around

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