Scions - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)
Added 2017-05-13 17:02:55 +0000 UTCFeel free to express your thoughts regarding SCIONS in the comments below.
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Hmm...the feedback seems to be a bit light with this batch Personally, I loved both of the May outings, but "Scions" was by far my favorite of the bunch, though by all accounts it shouldn't have worked for my sensibilities as well as it did. I'm usually really apprehensive not only to pseudo-incest, but also to any barely legal material (I mean, Annie has been 18 for literally a few minutes by the beginning of the story), but the way the comic teeters around these boundaries to the point where it becomes a joke in-universe not only works, dare I say it's actually brilliant. Both Mays and Annie are drawn splendidly, and I liked the back-and-forth between them and Peter and MJ back home. Additionally, if that one line by MC2 May implies anything, I appreciate how "Scions" is apparently a follow-up to "Mayday Spidey" (And I completely agree with Earth-X May; I would have loved to see April join in). At the risk of sounding like this is all faint praise, I thoroughly enjoyed this comic all around. Thanks Tracy!
Jack Charlotte
2017-05-18 01:31:37 +0000 UTCThis, however? This was exactly what I was hoping for.
Shendude
2017-05-15 20:40:54 +0000 UTCI liked Scions more of the two books this month and was more anticipating this tale but I felt something was off. I think the story was a notch rushed, as hot as the Spinneret scene was it probably could have used a whole story instead of as a sidestory to this one. I would have read two and a half pages of dialogue between the girls (perhaps criticism of the Inheritors story affected your writing a bit strongly) before the intercourse. In general I really enjoyed the trio, and loved the positive vibes of the story. The extreme sports positions and dildos were great touches and makes me very hopeful more g/g is on the way. Wincest was way overdo and I enjoy references even if there won't be a sequel to PEOSV Spider-girl Spidey 2099. I normally dodge criticisms of art as that's something you can't control too much, but this wasn't my taste either. The sisters all had a very precisely modeled frame that gave them an aura of marbled statues. At times it was a mix of Immonen and Liefeld, with buttocks seemingly disconnected from thighs and arms dislocated from joints. Perhaps there was a rush on the artwork but I still didn't get a hair-raising experience like I normally should.
Spooney Bard
2017-05-13 20:36:28 +0000 UTCVery solid especially with the cuts back to the house to see how they "celebrated" plus I've now got an idea for a semi sequel
That black guy
2017-05-13 18:17:11 +0000 UTC
