HEAT SEASON - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)
Added 2017-07-05 23:18:18 +0000 UTCFeel free to express your thoughts regarding HEAT SEASON in the comments below.
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I take it from the premise and write it myself as I think it works best. The co-writer option is reserved for the patrons who pledge for that particular tier. Also, Phase 2 starts in a few days. ;)
Tracy Scops
2017-07-20 13:46:56 +0000 UTCAbout the Monthly Contest: if someone gets their idea selected, do you corroborate w/ them on how they want the story or do you take it as you would from the premise they give?
Just another Monday
2017-07-20 03:52:24 +0000 UTCDid you make a recent survey of how your patrons feel on preggers?
Just another Monday
2017-07-11 18:34:00 +0000 UTCI've been a patron of Viiper for some while. Maybe I'll return again this month, mostly because of that particular art.
Tracy Scops
2017-07-11 17:57:33 +0000 UTCHey Tracy, I found this guy & thought of you. <a href="http://viiperart.deviantart.com/art/Black-Cat-Spidy-and-Deadpool-Adult-Naughty-691649549" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://viiperart.deviantart.com/art/Black-Cat-Spidy-and-Deadpool-Adult-Naughty-691649549</a>
Just another Monday
2017-07-11 01:37:21 +0000 UTCThis is a late review, but I must say I'm really digging the art and the banter is quite fun. I've always liked White Tiger as one of the females Spidey should have hooked up from the show. Any chance for a Spider-Man/White Tiger story in the future?
SH2307
2017-07-10 19:57:17 +0000 UTCIt's probably because it has quite less dialog than some other comics. Especially compared to the other release of this month, which was the exact opposite. So it reads way faster than the other.
Tracy Scops
2017-07-09 16:47:51 +0000 UTCFinally got around to reading it, really enjoyed it. Weirdly, it felt like it was shorter than some of your other stories. Not sure why.
Shendude
2017-07-09 16:20:36 +0000 UTCThanks, I'll consider a sequel in the future.
Tracy Scops
2017-07-08 15:25:19 +0000 UTCThanks for your detailed feedback. It's very helpful and makes me understand better what readers get from what I deliver. Preggo is unfortunately one of those fetishes most readers are very weary about, like when I did zoo content a while ago. Sad, huh? It's possible that it'll appear in the future, but not really frequently.
Tracy Scops
2017-07-08 15:24:56 +0000 UTCAgreed about Nova. I was wondering how he would be fit into the book and in the end he was just kinda there.
ukyo_rulz
2017-07-08 01:25:41 +0000 UTCThis was okay. If I had to note a problem it was Nova, he really didn't add much other than a spare dick. But mostly some very nice scenes. I particularly enjoyed Peter's rambling Bohemian Rhapsody parody coupled with a great kiss (always enjoy a bit of g/g). As great as Llama draws her without the mask it may have been good for SG to yank it off at an earlier point but thats mostly a quibble. Still Tiger still smoldered and dommed Pete excellently and SG was pure delight even if this was a bit tame on the heat meter. Such is the will of voters though.
Spooney Bard
2017-07-06 16:55:51 +0000 UTCI quite liked it. Funny, and Doreen looked quite hot. Would enjoy seeing her again sometime in the future.
Marcus
2017-07-06 03:38:32 +0000 UTCI truly enjoyed it. Llamaboy's art adds flesh & really gives the look of girth when WT takes Spidey's member & milk's him dry. Peter's begging not to be a dad was humorous & WT w/ SG trading dicks to fuck was nice. The sequence art was the highlight in the comic as it made following the "double dick dip" of Spidey & Nova all the more scintillating. That ending was fun to see, w/ 1 pill left & 2 girls CP'd, I was sorta hoping for an epilogue with 1 or both of them preggers. I gotta agree with Spidey's final statement in the book, I'd like to see said boom. Ah well, in sequels we hope for. I give the read a 9/10.
Just another Monday
2017-07-06 01:41:11 +0000 UTC
