Future Foundation - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)

Baba O'Reilly

Very sexy comic I loved how over the top Sue was, very funny. I was expecting more full on sex between Sue and Spidy, but all the other sex stuff makes it hard to complain. Very good work as always Tracy Thanks

Jeckl

Awesome story. Everyone knew there was going to be sex between Spider-Man and Sue but I never expected to see it from the Thing and the Richards' kids. What I liked about the Thing panel was that it reminded me of the movie Mallrats when the character Brody was asking Stan Lee if his penis was a rock like the rest of him. I also liked how Johnny had a warning message for Spider-Man but he didn't really look that sorry about the situation. On a side note, with all the different stories featuring Peter Parker having sex will dressed up in his gear, it was nice to see him wearing a different costume.

jmy25

Indeed it could be a story about a Peter/Sue affair. I just took a different route, exploring a different side of that arc in the comics. For me personally, that canon page on issue #1, with Peter and Sue in the elevator set the tone for this whole story. <a href="http://i.imgur.com/lDg17J8.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://i.imgur.com/lDg17J8.jpg</a> I really didn't change much from what was depicted in that scene. Sue's words where flirty as fuck, for someone supposed to be grieving for her brother. "The entrance is wide open, young man. You coming in?" I mean, it would need some weird writing acrobatics for me to turn that story into something romantic, sensitive and even remotely realistic. So I chose to do it as a fanfare. It was just a personal choice, really.

Tracy Scops

I'll disagree a bit with the last part of your comment. Looking over the lineup for the past 6 months, half the comics were about orgies and half about pairings (or threesomes, at most). Even this month, the other comic is just about Peter and May. But I agree with FF being over-the-top. That was on purpose, following a narrative decision I took early in the script development. Of course there are other ways to write a story like this, but I thought this would be the most fun approach. I am personally not in the mood of dealing with grief again. I did it once with Spider-Gwen right and it ended up being a nice story, but now I'm not quite able to do it for personal reasons. Less is indeed more sometimes. But not always. This time more was fun. (For me, at least).

Tracy Scops

I'll admit, not what I expected. When I suggested this idea for the contest I thought it would be more romantic with Peter helping Sue with the loss of her brother or at least more mundane but this was good, although I feel like it went too far and over the top for the most part. Although I feel like you've been in an 'orgy/mass a lots of sex in one comic' kick for a few months instead of focusing on the two characters in the story having sex. As Hannibal said, less is more sometimes.

Dennis King

It was nice, but honestly it felt a tad over thr top at times. If the story had just been about Sue tempting spiderman into having a secret affair I think that would have been more hot. But with it being out in the open the way it was kind of took some of the fun away. That's my only comlapint about it. Sometimes less is more, and it would have been kind of sexy toss the two straight arrows have an affair behind the backs of everyone. Aside from that still an ingesting read.

Akira Inugumi

Auntcumming was good enough that it was going to be a hard bar to beat. Did FF beat it? No, but it came close to matching! Premise first of all. Far more complicated than Auntcumming, which was a point in its favor. Aunt coming on to her young nephew is a time honored premise that artists like Jab and Pandora's Box, and the entire site of MILFtoon have covered. For a guy like me, never gets old. But the way FF plays out defies expectations. It seems like it's just all Spidey and Sue, but quickly spreads out and covers all kinds of basis, including my favorite - incest! Tracy delivers her story in fine form, even if it is sort of predator/prey. After this and Wolververse, I have mixed feelings about a Spidey that isn't sure if he wants non-Spider story women to fuck him. Sure, FF is more hilareous in the way that he keeps walking in on new depravities, but still. If a woman wants to fuck your brains out, you say: YES!. How is this a difficult concept? She's not even got claws this time! The art is... variable. Most of the time, I am totally in favor. There are a few faces that came out weird, like the spacing between eyes, nose, mouth and chin in panel 2 of page 8...and the mouth in the last panel of page 9. But bodies in general worked out very well, and the rest of the facework is spot on. But there is another problem: choices of perspective. During non smut relevant scenes, such as the suit replacement in the first panel of page 5, the fact that Spidey gets so much detail and Sue gets less from being farther away, okay. But the very next panel, where she walks in nude? That was something I would have liked to see more of especially since it's our first nude shot. But it's smaller and harder to make out because of the perspective angles. And there's more of same, where shots end up smaller than expected, like Panel 4 of page 6 (although we did get a larger version thanks to your promos!) It tickles me the way Johnny is so smug. Peter and John have had long standing rivalry, so in this alterverse where Sue is a completely kinky Nympho, it makes perfect sense that John would play one last prank by making Peter the new target of Sue's lust. And it plays out awesomely. Am I disappointed that Peter didn't just give in and mount Sue like in the cover? More than a little. But then we wouldn't have had some of the comedic moments. Great job TS and artists. It's a smash hit. I even loved the alt art by Cocksmith.

GregD

Trivia: The variant cover artist was supposed to do the entire issue, back in August. But he had to decline the job for personal reasons, delivering only the cover art. He may be back for other comics later this year.

Tracy Scops

Should be in your messages inbox already. ;)

Tracy Scops

I just want to say, I have been energized about the past month and this month. Maybe it's presumptuous but, when you trade away from the canon Spider-Man character, it just seem more interesting. Laura from last month, Sue and Homecoming for this month. However, this have got to be my favorite, issue, I do love the art work for the Variant cover, and the art i this one is on a really high level. Hope to see more from them!

Stellavan

Estoy a la espera muy ansioso de ver tu trabajo!! 😊

Starsaber