TINGLING THAT SENSE - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)
Added 2018-02-13 16:08:59 +0000 UTCFeel free to express your thoughts regarding TINGLING THAT SENSE in the comments below.
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This is the best and hottest one, it would have been more perfect if Peter made her speak spanish gibberish
Stellavan
2018-02-15 21:16:11 +0000 UTCI like this one as well; there's LOTS of dialogue, but it doesn't interfere with the smuttiness, both characters get to be figuratively on top, which is neat...
Shendude
2018-02-14 22:34:47 +0000 UTCI liked how she was just HAMMERED by Spidey's tall & big body compared to her petite barely legal jail bait pussy. The Creampie frame was nice, but I felt her waist could have been thicker as it looked like she had no stomach in that shot. Her comment on breeding a new spiderverse was round 2 fap material. I really love seeing Anya getting creamed by Peter whenever they're around, and the age difference is also a stimulus I enjoy. The art was very good, Anya's lolita fetish at play again, and the RAW fucks & creampie were gold. Makes me wonder if Jess will tell Anya about Gerry's "donor" being Peter (I am referencing A-Force Strip Poker) Would like to see Jess & Peter "mentor" her in future lessons. Maybe with more creaming. 9/10
Just another Monday
2018-02-14 16:43:59 +0000 UTCWasn't that excited for this one but have to say was pleasantly surprised really enjoyed it.
Thomas
2018-02-14 12:34:28 +0000 UTCThe month of Make-goods we'll call this. We have two very back-to-basics stories this time with less plot than ever. First we have Anya, one of the early bottom image previews that got lost in the ether (although Hornblower got a release but no Vio 2) of artist ennui (to be polite). A constant featured player since the start of the Scopsverse, this Spider-girl's fans have demanded a lead for their starlet. She won one of the first big contest polls with the Spider-fappening that was released in Summer 16 and got some in a tizzy with its twist. Thus we now have a pure, proper starring vehicle for Corazon and her fans. And you can count me in as one of them now. Anya was great in Banginjet and kills it again in this issue. She wastes no breath in getting into a kink factory, this issue might have more images of getting down than any issue I can immediately recall. The montage blowjob must have taken a while to draw and for only one panel I must through proper cred to Cocksmith who gives everyone real weight and tone. Her prancing and wall stretch and tights pull all were electric. Weird praise, I really like the way TS draws hands and fingers. To offer some constructive criticism this certainly read a bit like Spidercest 1. This may not require a sequel but some continuation of the characters or roleplay themes would be very valuable. I was a bit dry on this month but this exceeded my somewhat middling expectations. If there is something I truly didn't like it was the very last panel. The Doujin Night Head 9 (with Ivy and Seung-mina from Soul Calibur) ends with a very similar bit of dialogue teasing anal we'll never see. Yes, comic porn parody PTSD actually struck me briefly.
Spooney Bard
2018-02-14 05:45:30 +0000 UTCHm, that makes sense I guess
Akira Inugumi
2018-02-14 02:37:04 +0000 UTCThe way I see it, stories work better when things happen because the characters want things happen, instead of the writer pushing buttons and forcing things up. In this case, I don't think it would make any sense to show a Driver's License, for example. But instead, Peter really wanted Anya to say the truth and be cool with it, so he did something to get that answer. Also, always keep in mind that, as the first statement on my Patreon page mentions, all sex in my comics is between legal adults, even when the characters I'm parodying may not be in the original source material. No exceptions.
Tracy Scops
2018-02-14 01:15:28 +0000 UTCTry something a little more fun, like an image of a driver license and a reaveal of the current year so we can put it all together. You already have a comic with Peter and a Spider Gwen and she’s clearly a minor in the comics. So I don’t think you need to worry so much. That being said I hope to see more of these two. And keep in mind, more does not always equate to extra. It can just be Peter and Anya. Sometimes the intimacy help sells the sensuaitlity.
Akira Inugumi
2018-02-13 23:26:52 +0000 UTCI'm definitely down for a part two
Voltra Neo
2018-02-13 22:39:03 +0000 UTCOkay in all honesty.... I loved this one. The art was beautiful, the dialogue flowed and felt so natural and the sex was very well done. I loved the relationship that Anya and Peter had here and it was just.... So good. One problem I had with past stories was that they fled rushed to fit your 12 page limit (well.... 8 pages really since there is the cover, the intro page, the repeat of the cover and the advertisement for your other work) while this flowed perfectly and it felt like it was MADE to be this length while others felt like they where bigger than the page count allowed. Loved this one.
Dennis King
2018-02-13 21:47:18 +0000 UTCConsidering the way patreon feels about that particular theme, it was a necessary statement.
Tracy Scops
2018-02-13 20:37:38 +0000 UTCFor a moment, I thought the title was Tingling THOT sense and Peter can sense where THOTS are located is now headcanon for me.
WeedLovingUxion
2018-02-13 20:16:40 +0000 UTCThis one was very good. One of the things I think you should focus on is the concept of the dialogue. For a comic book it makes or breaks the immersion. And the conversation between the two of them was very good. The only thing I would recommend is spend less time narrating what's going on. It kind of kills the mood a bit. But having them discuss the age gap between them was a nice touch. Though to be honest I would have preferred if it you made Anya not tell Spiderman her age just to keep us guessing and see her tease him more about it.
Akira Inugumi
2018-02-13 17:47:45 +0000 UTCreally liked the poses and dialogue
Faeginn
2018-02-13 16:29:27 +0000 UTCI really liked this comic. Art was well done, and the role reversal with the younger character being way more aggressive was cool. A lot of the better comics tend to feel like they were condensed to fit within the limited amount of pages but this one felt just right. I haven't seen this pairing much too so points for that as well.
ukyo_rulz
2018-02-13 16:13:41 +0000 UTC
