RYKER'S BAIT #1 - Discussion thread (spoilers allowed)
Added 2019-09-16 17:51:21 +0000 UTCFeel free to express your thoughts regarding RYKER'S BAIT #1 in the comments below.
Comments
Really interesting plot. I missed a lot of Spiderman comics. Is Lily an OC ? No problem with her at all, That allow your writing to improve even more and I am really hoping for that number 2 one day.
Hentai Borg
2019-10-14 18:25:09 +0000 UTCSo looking forward to more of this.
Hivedragon
2019-09-23 22:38:13 +0000 UTCI enjoyed this entry. Lilly is such a beautiful and wanting central character. I really enjoyed how Spider-Plushie was her First, and I can't wait for a sequel. But I think her reactions with Cat are odd, as Black Cat is famous for her make outs with Spider-Man, yet Lillian barely knows who she is. But I wanna see her grow into a proper Nympeht someday and fuck Peter's dinklage! XD - 9/10
Just another Monday
2019-09-22 04:36:07 +0000 UTCDidn't expect the cat to show its tail, definitely impatient for more
Voltra Neo
2019-09-20 18:56:49 +0000 UTCRyker's Bait is one of the most intriguing stories in the whole Scopsverse. A tale of desperation, obsession, and self-destructive fandom. It's thematic depth is high, as a commentary on the reader's own fascinations (who isn't inserting themselves into Lily's shoes?) and the impossibility of them becoming actualized -- we have a very strong work. It is almost an anti-Fanservice Con, full of yearning and buildup that is immediately doused. If there are issues they are twofold. One, we are desperately in the first pages of a large story that can't be judged on its own. Secondly as a work of eros there is no benefit. Her sitting in her room and masturbating in her garters would be even better than to be utterly rejected. Her acceptance of Cat's advances reeks of inadequacy. Lily barely is even aware of Felicia, giving into her advances certainly paints a dire portrait. However the intrigue is high. Is this part of some extreme con? Who truly holds the power? Who has the hook, what is the bait, and what is the fish? Fascinating.
Spooney Bard
2019-09-18 19:17:14 +0000 UTCLoved it, everything from the cover page to the surprise twist mid-way, Call me a sucker for blondes in a lace domino mask but I really enjoy the inclusion of an all-new OC being incorporated into the tracy-verse and the "costume" is Mwah its chefs kiss, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how black cat mentors her to truly become the Nymphet. Long Story Short...I NEED A SEQUEL IMMEDIATELY!! :D
Jak O'Hara
2019-09-18 12:45:30 +0000 UTCHow long do you imagine this series being?
SpiderBat
2019-09-18 12:22:08 +0000 UTCThere are no plans on that end.
Tracy Scops
2019-09-18 11:29:28 +0000 UTCHey Tracy, it’s been a long time ... Do you think it is possible in the future to get a package of each comic with pdf, cbz, cbr file in it ? I would love to read your comics with the “original” quality of your images. Just compress them at your mac as a zip file and rename the file cbz. Every comic reader support the pdf, cbr or cbz ending.
Jessi Jaymes
2019-09-18 10:14:26 +0000 UTCLooks great and can't wait for part 2.
Sven M.
2019-09-17 12:08:44 +0000 UTCInteresting but needs that sequel.
Thomas
2019-09-17 11:58:09 +0000 UTCI love the twist, half way through. I can't wait to see more of this.
Jeckl
2019-09-17 01:28:36 +0000 UTCSlow start, but I'm interested to see where this goes. Hoping that Felicia comes up with something crazy and unexpected.
ukyo_rulz
2019-09-16 23:24:20 +0000 UTC
