Catswitched (Rough Sketches)
Added 2023-04-15 23:09:53 +0000 UTCAlright so to give you a progress update since it has been a while since I've posted, I wanted to share the rough sketches for the next long comic, Catswitched. I normally don't upload work when it's this early into he process but I wanted to gather feedback, so let me know what you all think.
Expect a cleaned up version of this in the coming weeks.
Comments
Was this finished?
Lexi M
2024-09-21 23:40:01 +0000 UTCLove the concept and how everything unfolds! The story idea and dialouge If you wanted some feedback or something to consider, just for dialogue, I was curious why you went more with the sudden semi-hostile response of Adalia calling Adrien a twerp. The particular segment jumped out more than the previous dialogue, in my opinion. I'd maybe tweak this to keep Adalia's more sweet/comforting/descaling tone but manages to only remind Adrien of other problems he'd be potentially facing later as her "job/family/more elaboration on childcare", further making Adrien feel helpless and hopeless.
LordWit
2023-04-16 20:33:56 +0000 UTCLove the body swap and also the whole role reversal dynamic!
Jennifer Jones
2023-04-16 05:45:59 +0000 UTCamazing! great work, love the faces/expressions!
Halcyone
2023-04-16 04:06:28 +0000 UTC
