Chapter 207 (2/2)
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Chapter 207
Aster came out of her reflection and spat. The ice cream had been fine, but the fourth and fifth lives theyâd brought her to were less than stellar.
In one, Matt had died, leaving her all alone, which had been frankly awful. And while the Concept had changed and been about making her as strong as possible, turning her fur to literal ice and using it as a way for her Talent to leverage its might against her own flesh, she hadnât liked living in a world with Matt dead in it.
No, that had not been fun.
In her next life, she had never gotten the fruit of perfection, and had, for some reason, gone almost feral, which was frankly insulting of Minkalla to suggest. Even without the fruit, she had been a perfect lady, even if she had chewed on a shoe or three.
With one ice cream left, she hoped it would be a good one.
***
Aster flicked her tails and sent a stream of fox fire at the target that tried to run away and snickered at Frank, who dodged all the illusionary fires and ran directly into the real one.
She didnât let the fire burn too long, but did allow him to get singed before she flicked her tail and dispelled the illusion that they were training in.
Frank whined, âMiss Aster, why can't we practice longer?â
Flicking him with one of her tails, she berated him. âYou started out well, but by the end of the training, you spent more time trying to look at my butt rather than watching my tails. Distractions like that will kill you in a real fight if you aren't careful.â
The boy blushed down to his neck, but she ignored it.
He was young, and hormones were raging through him like a tempest.
She could forgive that.
She couldnât so easily forgive the sloppiness of his technique.
Stopping him at the door, she caught his eyes and said with her best teacher voice, âWork on your sword forms. Especially seventeen, eleven, and forty three. Do each of them two hundred and fifty times, instead of the normal two hundred each. I can tell from your lack of progress that you were slacking on those.â
He tried to interrupt, âBut Miss Aster, Iââ
She cut him off with a stern voice and a dismissive flick of her tails. âNo buts, mister. If you want to graduate, you need to work harder. As a third year, it's frankly embarrassing how little youâve progressed this last semester. Even the second years are starting to catch up to you.â
Softening her tone, she poked him between the eyes with her long finger. âI know you have a lot going on at home, but if you don't focus up and buckle down, you won't be able to change anything.â
Seeing his eyes shift down to the ground rather than her butt, she asked. âHow are things at home? Last I heard, your father was stable and just waiting on a higher Tier healer.â
Frank sighed. âYeah, but mom is getting worse by the day. She barely eats, and she hasnât gone to work in the last week. AndâŠâ He paused and looked around nervously. âAnd people are coming around looking for money. Iâve had to get a part time job to cover the expenses.â
Aster narrowed her eyes at that.
She knew Frank's father had gotten hit by a curse and was in a coma, and that his mother was taking things badly, but she also knew that she and the headmaster had ensured that all of their bills were being deferred until his father was able to get back to delving.
There shouldn't be anyone sniffing around Frank and his mother for money. No one legitimate, at least.
Smacking Frank with one of her tails, she asked, âWhy didnât you say so earlier? You were there when the headmaster got your motherâs bills deferred. I know, because I was there as well. So why are you paying anyone anything?â
âThey said that it was different, and my father owed them. And if we didnât make at least some payment, they would have to take our things in repayment, and you couldn't do anything about it as it was a personal debt.â
Aster looked up and counted to fifteen, going through all ten fingers and then her five tails.
She begged anyone to give her patience.
Frank was a good kid, but clearly too naive.
âYou should have come to me sooner, rather than taking things into your own hands. I could have brought this to the headmaster and he would have squashed this before it started.â
Dragging him to the headmasterâs, she had him explain everything, and the older man picked up his cane and asked Frank to lead the way to where he was told to deliver the money he earned.
As she and the headmaster suspected, it was just a local gang of wanna-be street toughs who thought they could take advantage of their strength and rob a down-on-their-luck family.
Almost instantly, a fight broke out, but with a flick of her tails, she was able to send most of the lower Tier gang members into a stupor, which allowed the headmaster to more easily subdued the ring leaders.
She, as a Tier 14, could have done the same, but with the Tier 20 as back up, they ensured there were no senseless casualties.
Looking to Frank, she gestured with one of her tails as her arms were crossed. âSee. We could have handled this if you had said something earlier. The Corporations donât tolerate such gangs doing as they please, and our Academy even less so.â
Frank looked both happy and crestfallen, so she tapped him on the head. âNow, I expect you to practice harder without such distractions. Three hundred of each form, as we have ground to make up.â
He tried to complain, but she threatened to increase it to three hundred and fifty, which finally shut him up.
She was leading him out of the building when she caught one of the guards flying in from the sky and jerked as she recognized the armor.
She knew that armor. A passive version of [Phantom Armor]. A cracked version.
Something about that seemed wrong, and she poked at that idea and felt a spike go through her brain.
After that moment of pain, Aster felt like her mind expanded as memories rushed in.
Aster, the fox, immediately took over Aster, the kitsune's body.
She had tails!
And fox ears.
That was fun, and she immediately knew she would be adding them both to her body from her life as Mattâs sister.
Though, maybe only one tail. It was better to have one perfect tail rather than a bunch of subpar ones. Really, this Aster needed to take better care of her tails, having illusions didnât mean one could forget about proper fur maintenance.
She also found it interesting that she was living in the Corporations for this life, of all places.
Her Concept of this life was also interesting, as it was related to illusions.
She was impressed with herself in this life. Tier 14 by one hundred years old without huge amounts of assistance was quite impressive, but her kitsune life had managed it easily. By the same token, that had been incredibly dangerous, and she shuddered slightly with the realization of how close she had been to losing herself to the life, but the important thing was that she hadnât.
Not wanting to have this life end just yet, she dove back into the reflection with the thought of not Tiering up to Tier 15 quite yet.
She wanted to incorporate illusions into her own ice eventually, and this was a perfect chance to learn about them.
***
Liz crushed yet another cup in her hand, letting it fall to the ground to accompany its broken brethren. The glass cut into her hand, but she dismissed the wound and the dreamscape healed her. That made two lives in a row she never wanted to think about ever again.
That white wine had betrayed her.
It was supposed to be easy going and pair well with everything, not⊠that.
That wasnât her. It never would be her. It never had been her. That was someone else altogether.
It. Wasnât. Her.
It was just a nightmare, of sorts.
A traitorous voice in the back of her head spoke up, asking if this was how she reacted to seeing herself in the mirror. It was a reflection, that meant it was her, right?
But no. Minkalla was a liar. The lives it showed were lies. Luna had even said they werenât indicative of how she actually was. Probably warning her of exactly the things she had seen in the last two lives.
An image of a man half-burned, but kept alive by healing flames flashed through her mind, but Liz shook her head to clear it.
She just wanted to hug Matt and cry. To talk to her therapist, to just⊠anything, to get two vile lives out of her head.
But she couldnât. Not yet.
With shaking hands, she raised the final cup to her lips, and drank of the last glass of wine, bracing herself for something awful.
***
Liz was a noble. Nothing so noble as a princess, but a Viscountess through her parents' hard work.
Not that she was a Viscountess yet. She would need to reach Tier 20 to take over their title, and she was only Tier 11.
But she would be one day, and as everyone knew, foundations were set early.
Though her Talent may have been decidedly average, and her blood at that, Liz was never one to squander an opportunity presented to her.
Uselessness was merely a symptom of insufficient creativity.
Blood had its uses. Notably in contracts.
Contracts bound in Blood, Talent, and Concept were nigh impossible to break, and for those that managed it, they suffered.
Contracts werenât one-sided, of course. There was a give and take to such things, after all. A contract was an exchange, and a willing exchange always left each party better off than before.
Of course, what she had in abundance were often the very same things which others were desperate for.
Commoners in particular desired equally common things; wealth, skills, connections⊠They could be so pathetically short-sighted, too, signing away decades, centuries, some few even an eternity for one of the countless skills within her vault.
A pittance.
They worked for her. If they were better at their jobs, that meant they were more valuable to her. That they were ever-so-willing to work for her more in exchange for the ability to do their jobs better proved the value of her philosophy.
Soft power was far superior to hard power.
Combat power.
So what, if she was embarrassingly bad at fighting? She hadnât needed to raise so much as a finger in self-defense in decades. She had a few trainers helping her improve, but what did it matter if she could punch hard? What did it matter if her Talent made nearly all skills useless for her? She was layered in defensive spells and armor, and surrounded by the greatest defense of all: her minions, bound to loyalty and all the more empowered by her might.
No one could hurt her, even if they wanted to.
When Liz heard about a strong woman who had a Talent for the blade and an armor Talent, she quickly moved in to snatch them up.
As she was sitting in the hovel that the womanâs family called a home, she smiled as the woman signed away ten years of her life for the sum of ten mana stones, two Tiers above her own, per year.
Practically nothing for her.
And the woman was happy about it.
It was wonderful.
She was watching a news report on her AI when an alert flashed to her about a new and upcoming chef.
Young and Talented, being rated as a once-in-a-decade prodigy.
Someone she absolutely needed to have for herself.
She was looking at a picture of them when she noticed the person next to them.
A bodyguard.
She studied him, trying to figure out why she was drawn to him, but couldn't figure it out.
Attractive, yes, but no more so than her endless flock of paramours.
He seemed almost familiar, but a quick search revealed he had never been in a movie or tv show, though the one video she did find of him fighting hit her like a jolt of lightning.
The man was the son of the Beast King Alargon.
But wasnât the beast kingdom ruler Queen Mara?
Wasnât Mara her mother?
Liz awoke and studied her life.
It wasnât ideal, but compared to her last two lives, this Elizabeth may as well have been a saint.
Still, she wasnât sad to wake up from it, and she pulled herself back out of the life so it could pass as quickly as possible. A little trick she had learned two lives ago. It helped distance herself from the dream, like memories of the reflection lives, and kept her from having to directly experience anything her other selves did.
Six new Concept powers. She should be happy, but she wasn't.
The lives werenât her. She knew what Luna and Kurt had said, but these were still reflections of her.
The lives shouldnât be her.
But what if they were?
***
Susanne took a deep breath, calming herself as some of her reflectionâs irritation carried over.
Being the sword she wielded was interesting, yes, but she had to deal with so many bad pick up lines about being a âsword sheathâ, even the real her almost snapped at the young men who learned about her Concept.
Castrating one of them hadnât been her real self's idea, but she hadnât stopped the reflection either.
The week in jail and fine had been worth it, as it got the word out she wouldnât tolerate such âjokesâ any more. Sheâd considered breaking her Concept just to escape the teasing, but eventually settled on a ânever tellâ policy.
Susanne took a few minutes to process the last life, but after reviewing and packing it up for later exploration, she picked up her last coffee and drank it down.
It tasted like a library smelled.
A good smell, but not a good taste, if she was honest.
It would have made a better tea.
***
Susanne was a scribe.
That was her life.
While her brother struggled to become an artist in an oversaturated field, she wrote. It didnât pay much, but it paid the bills and kept the both of them fed and clothed on a Duchess Tier 31 world, where they could cultivate the ambient essence and advance without delving into rifts.
That was far, far too dangerous for two academics like them.
Entering into the little room in the library, she set out her supplies and cursed as she realized the book she had stashed under the booth yesterday was gone.
Meredith.
The woman was infuriating.
Attractive.
Attentive.
Astute.
Brave.
Shrewd.
But most of all, a stickler for the rules.
Susanne could deal with all of the other characteristics, but an unbending desire to follow every rule was a step too far.
Did Susanne take over the little private room to work in every day? Yes.
Was that against the rules? No.
Was she supposed to leave things in the room overnight even though she had the room reserved? Also no.
But still. No one used the out of the way room, yet Meredith insisted she clean it out properly every night before she went home. And she did. Susanne never left even a scrap of pencil or ink stain in the room, but she saw no reason to put away the assuredly heavy book every day. She was just going to get it back out the next day.
And even that wouldnât be so bad, except its index placed it in the farthest section of the seventeen story library. Even as a Tier 7, it would take her twenty minutes to cross the distance with her best speed, but she couldn't even move that fast, as it would be both rude and dangerous to the books around her.
Trying not to stomp, she arrived at the place her book should have been close to an hour later because of a school trip taking up most of the stairwell.
Except, when she arrived at the place where her book of flourishes and calligraphy strokes should have been, there was only a single wooden marker that stated the book in question was no longer in circulation.
That took Susanne aback.
Had someone other than Meredith taken her book?
That sent a bolt of horror through her, and she ran to the front desk a little faster than was strictly necessary. She had developed a fine sheen of perspiration that she tried to wipe off before she waited in line.
There were seven people in front of her and two people working at the front desk. Susanne didnât see Meredith and wondered if she had been right about someone else taking the book.
Meredith normally put it away in its proper place, and would simply chide Susanne a little when she came to drag her away for lunch.
Just as she was going to get helped by Spencer, Meredith sauntered out of the back room with a familiar shaped bundle wrapped in brown paper.
Susanne didnât wait until properly called to the front desk and stepped in front of Meredith, reaching for the book, but the woman's mock cleared her throat and pulled the book back slightly.
âPatrons are supposed to wait until called to approach the desk, Miss Velar.â
Susanne rolled her eyes and smoothed her shirt before asking the most important question. âWhy did you take my book?â
Meredith just looked at her with those piercing eyes, letting the question speak for itself.
They both knew the answer, but Susanne wasnât asking what she had spoken aloud. She was asking why the change in routine.
Just as she thought Meredith was going to make her ask properly, the librarian spoke. âI believe we have gone through this song and dance long enough, so I decided to end it.â
Terror shot through Susanne at the thought she was being banned from the library, and she swallowed through her suddenly very dry throat. If she couldnât work in the library, she would need to rent a place out, and that would be beyond expensive in the city.
She was already struggling to make ends meet while supporting her brother.
She was opening her mouth to speak when Meredith pushed the wrapped book forward. âDespite my lack of understanding as to why you still need this book, as you are beyond proficient, I have given up. If you feel the book helps in some way, you might as well make it your property properly. That way, you can take it with you when you go home, and won't need to leave it behind anymore. Consider it a gift.â
Susanne froze as the unexpected news caught her off guard.
The book wasnât just a book. It was the book that had taught her how to use her Talent for more than fancy lettering. It had been her lifeline as a poor young adult trying to figure out how to support herself and her brother on an expensive, high Tier planet.
It had been her only friend when she went hungry.
It had been there when she made her first commission, and finally was able to start repaying their debt.
It had been there when she first met Meredith, and the woman forced herself into her life.
It had been there when she formed her Concept, and her quill had risen on its own for the first time.
She had always wanted to buy it, but it was also an incredibly old book that went for two dozen Tier 32 mana stones. A price she could never afford. She could have bought a cheaper reprint, but that wouldnât have been the same.
You couldn't replace a friend with a copy just because they were expensive. It was the experiences they shared that made them friends. Not the contents of the book.
And the generosity. That just⊠wasnât done. Some part of Susanneâs spirit rebelled at the gift, shouting at her that no, this wasnât right, this wasnât normal, she couldnât rely on anyone else ever for something like thisâŠ.
A sword is reliable.
But she had never held a sword.
The Concept broke through the illusion Susanne found herself in, and she relaxed.
She could deal with generosity in a dream. She didnât quite understand the womanâs gift, but it seemed like Minkalla was trying to do something with it.
As she watched and waited for skills and personal developments of value, Susanne contemplated the value of her life as a calligrapher.
An animated pen definitely seemed like it would translate to an animated sword back in reality. It was either that, or gaining the ability to manifest a quill with her Talent, but that seemed less likely.
She settled in for the ride and watched as her other self bumbled through awkward thanks. It didnât seem like it would be all that interesting of a life, but who knew? Maybe sheâd get some insight into her Talent to help her with the slow process of expansion. A professional calligrapher sounded boring, and she remembered it being fairly dull, but she would stay optimistic.
These lives were worth more than just their Concepts after all. Each could teach her something, and could act as a reference for skills she might not have gathered during her real life, even after they faded to little more than memories.
These lives were the pieces of experience that could help her create her Intent.
Minkalla was a forge after all.
And she was her best hammer.
***
Five lives down, one to go.
Matt tapped his recently-drained teacup against the saucer it had rested on, contemplating life. Specifically, a life that seemed smarter than his own. His alternate self had never gotten [Cracked Phantom Armor], the bar fight which had ended up with him snatching the skill for himself simply never happened. Heâd still been able to join the path of Ascension, but without a skill, heâd just relied on his physical prowess for delving.
That meant a slower rate of progress overall, as injuries were more common, but it also meant heâd turned around and left the rift when it presented him with a rift challenge. Without Aster, he stayed a solo climber, never teaming up with Liz and becoming more and more self-reliant.
What had really interested Matt was how his other life had eventually expanded his capabilities. Notably, he used Talismans far, far earlier than Matt ever had, starting at Tier 5. It was like watching Quill, not Matt, clear rifts.
Where Mattâs strengths had always lay in outlasting and overcoming tough opponents through attrition, that life had focused on incredible amounts of preparation followed by a few brief moments of overwhelming power, perfectly tuned to fell targets.
It was inspiring, really. Heâd managed to develop a true Concept at Tier six, all on his own and without the help of an ascension like the real Matt had gotten. âAlways Preparing,â played a dual purpose of allowing Matt to change the aspect of his enchantments and even move mana between talismans heâd made.
Heâd won his tournament by the skin of his teeth, fighting Queen for the top spot, and had gotten Erwin as a manager, though filling a role as a classical enchanter rather than a researcher. He wasnât even aware the man was a manager, though he likely wasnât in reality.
Overall, it was⊠interesting. And gave him a few ideas for new talismans for once he was out of Minkalla.
Well, nothing else to it.
Matt grabbed his last cup, the ceramic mug with a sharpened lip, and poured the contents into his mouth.
***
Matt slammed his sledgehammer into the rock twice more, and once it shattered, wiped his face.
Construction was hard work.
He knew that. His father had worked in it as a supervisor, but this wasnât even that kind of construction.
This was using cheap human labor to work where the bots couldnât get as easily.
Still, it was a job, but it was the best paying one Matt could find that might someday get him to his goal of being a delver.
500 credits a month wasnât much after he paid for housing, but it was enough to let him save a little. It would just take three years of hard work.
He had already been doing this for six months, but now that he had fallen into a rhythm, things were at least passing by monotonously, if slowly.
As he checked the time on his watch, he and most others started walking to the end of the construction site.
Calvin shouted, âHey, Matt! Why don't you join us at the bar tonight?â
Matt shook his head. âI can't afford it, Calvin. You know that.â
Calvin grabbed Mattâs arm. âCome on, the first oneâs on me, and no need to drink another. It is nice to have you with us.â
Matt debated declining, but ended up agreeing when the others on the team pestered him.
The bar was as run down as they were, but it at least had cool beer, and Matt sipped at it slowly as he listened to the others talking.
As was usual, the conversation turned to the rift break, and Matt spat, âFucking Junipers. Useless bastards.â
A man at the nearby table raised his glass to that. âFucking truer words have never been spoken.â
As their table raised their glasses in toast, they went back to their drinks just a little more somber.
Going to the bar became a regular thing for Matt. Or rather, the others dragged him along once a week and paid for him to have one beer.
Matt even became familiar with the man who had toasted to the Junipersâ shittiness the first time.
Tom was a simple man like the rest of them, but after getting to know that Matt wanted to be a delver, he became closer to him.
He had apparently been a delver before the incident, but gave it up when his family died.
That was a feeling Matt understood, even if he didnât agree with giving up.
Things came to a head after another year.
The Junipers were fined for their allowing rift breaks, but they werenât given any more punishment as they managed to foist the blame off on their low Tier workers.
As Matt and everyone in the bar were fuming about the weak punishment, Tom came over to Matt.
âDo you want to take revenge too?â
Matt nodded, and Tom didnât say anything else, just nodding and drinking next to him.
Matt thought that was the end of it when, a week later, a new man joined Tom at his table and shook Mattâs hand.
âMy name is John. Iâm a lot like you. Lost my mother and sister to something just like what happened here.â There was a pause before he added, âI want to do something about it. Wanna help?â
Matt knew he should say no, but he nodded. He was angry. The Junipers were just a symptom of the evil that were the nobles. Above the rules and lawless.
âWe intend to graffiti the town hall tonight, and could use another hand.â
Matt hesitated, but it wasnât too dangerous. Even if they were caught⊠meh. What was a few more months of work in exchange for spiting the people whoâd ruined everything?
That night, the three of them and six others painted âCowardsâ and âOur Lives Lost Donât Warrant Punishmentâ on the stone face of the building before running away, even as the police came to investigate.
Thankfully, John had a contact in the police department, and they warned them in time so they could get away.
That started Matt's time with the Resistance.
They started small, but as the weeks passed, they escalated.
They did bad things, but they were the good guys.
Burning down the town hall was met with satisfaction of the masses, even while the local papers tried to vilify them. They knew the truth. They talked to their fellow citizens, who were just as angry as them.
A year later, they were in contact with a dozen more groups like theirs, and they had a plan for an even bigger score.
They wanted to burn down one of the Junipersâ supply depots.
It took some planning, but they managed it without any of them getting caught.
That was only possible because of John.
Far from the simple man he pretended to be, he was actually a Tier 15 who had come back to Lilly when his family was killed.
With his help, they grew stronger as he took them deep into the continent and taught them how to fight.
When Matt reached Tier 3, they grabbed onto his Talent and the possibilities it provided.
Mana was both money and power.
With it, they got better gear and hit harder targets.
First was an outpost of the Junipers that housed their guards, who had been responsible for putting their mana stones too close to the cities.
They executed each and every one of the lazy, corrupt bastards and sent the video to the news stations.
They called them terrorists, but Matt and everyone else knew the truth.
They were liberators.
Saviors of their fellow commoners.
Once they got a taste for blood, they hit more outposts and hit them harder.
With John, no matter how strong the defenders that the Junipers tried to hide in the common guards were, they were always dealt with easily, and they punished all the traitors the only way they could.
Things continued like that for another two years before they had an opportunity.
A prestigious âplaypenâ for the rich and elite had a vulnerability in their primary ward.
They took advantage of it.
The nobles and ilk had taken away their parents, so the Resistance would take away their children.
A few explosives filled with tens of thousands of mana detonated while they were at lunch, and killed eighty percent of the little monsters.
As John said, âIf the problem wasnât taken care of at the root, it would just regrow.â
That was their first big victory.
It was also when the stove got too hot, and they needed to move.
With that last mission done, they left Lilly and moved to a nearby planet with its own corrupt noble.
There, they gathered more support before striking out once more.
They even started claiming their attacks as, âThe Wrath of the Commoners.â
They used Mattâs mana and got themselves support from the locals while striking out at the nobility and upper class as much as possible.
They spilled the common man's blood without thought, and The Wrath of the Commoners spilled theirs back.
One time, they even ambushed and killed a Tier 15.
That was their greatest victory.
A victory so great, they needed to lay low for a while.
That was when Matt created his Concept.
Detonation.
He could constrain his mana in the area around him, building it up and compressing it with his will. Then, once he was ready, he could unleash it in a massive detonation that not only could destroy just about anything of his Tier, but melted even higher-tier runes and enchantments in a wide area.
That enabled them to attack even larger targets.
It culminated in an attack on a prep school for noble children.
It took a year of infiltrating the staff, but eventually, they got their bombs in place, and during an assembly for some stuck-up award, they intended to detonate them.
Better yet, the fish they hooked was the biggest one yet.
Some Elizabeth Moore was present to give the award for some little noble brat being more noble than the others.
As the bombs went off, sending broken bodies flying every which way, Matt felt triumph, but that feeling quickly yielded to confusion.
That shouldnât have worked. How had that worked? There was no way that should have worked.
Liz was a royalâs daughter. She had Tier 35 guards.
They should have stopped the bombs.
But they hadn't.
A body landed near him, and Matt smirked as he saw their target lying broken on the stones before him.
Wait.
Liz was dead?
Liz was dead?
Matt felt an overwhelming sense of nausea, but he shook it aside. As he looked at the body of the girl in front of him, it returned in force, and Matt broke.
He had killed Liz.
The love of his life.
For some reason, that more than any of the other heinous crimes this reflection had committed hurt him.
Liz should have been safe.
And the thought that Liz mattered more than the others hurt even more.
Liz was only one person, but to him, she mattered more than all the others.
In horror, Matt watched as his reflection recovered and celebrated the death of the nobles.
They ran, as cowards always did, but Matt knew what was coming, even as his reflection thought heâd escaped.
Mara and Leon descended on the planet like angry gods.
Mattâs only warning was a tremor sweeping through the atmosphere like a sonic boom, then he was elsewhere, alongside every other member of The Wrath of Commoners.
Matt expected them to kill them instantly, but they didnât. They didnât even torture them, even though Matt wouldn't have blamed them. Honestly their little band of terrorist shouldn't have even gotten that far after hitting the targets they did without a Tier 45 coming down on them but he was sure Minkalla had kept them away until Matt and his team killed Liz.
Instead, they simply handed them over to Imperial authorities, who tried them for their terrorist actions.
All of them were guilty and pronounced so, despite their pitiful excuses.
Matt felt sick watching his other self casually dismiss the lives of everyone they killed because of who their parents were.
It was a side of himself he never thought he could become.
He was glad they were being killed. His entire group deserved far worse than the quick executions they were going to be given.
A part of him wanted to tell Mara and Leon this was just a Minkalla reflection, and he loved Liz more than his life, but couldn't bring himself to do so.
He was a coward to think about what they would say.
In front of a gathering of their victims' loved ones, his reflection fell over, dead alongside his entire band of terrorists.
***
Matt fell to the ground, on his hands and knees.
It was done.
His spirit felt tumultuous, though whether that was his Concept assimilating its new abilities or something more akin to nausea from his experiences, Matt didnât know.
There were a few other houses scattered across the safe zone, and a few individuals in varying states of recovery. Fortunately, Liz, Aster, and Susanne all appeared alongside him with spirits seemingly intact.
They didnât need to say anything, Matt simply pulled out his house and the four of them filed inside. In silence, he made tea and passed out the mugs for everyone, hiding a small tremor in his hand as he handed Liz hers.
Matt was just starting his second mug when Aster finally spoke up. âDid everyone succeed?â
Nods all around gave the answer.
Aster then continued, âGreat! What did everyone get? I had ice cream lives, which was cool. There was one where I was a human artist and Mattâs little sister, which was the best! One where I was a winter wolf, one where I was a fire fox⊠That one was ok at best, but I like my cold much better. That dumb fox liked chili. There was another where I was a kitsune, one where I wasnât nearly as pretty or smart, and⊠one where Matt died early, and I had to live on my own.â
Asterâs low whine as she sent the last life was a heart-wrenching thing, and Matt reached over to where the little fox was sitting to pull her onto his lap in comfort. She snuggled up close to him, stealing all his warmth with a deliberate burst of cold.
The cheeky little fox.
Susanne chuckled at Mattâs involuntary shiver before speaking up herself. âI had coffee, not that it really matters. Um, anyway. I had one life where I served as a dedicated defender for my brother, focusing on shields especially. One where I mastered lots of weapons rather than just my sword, one where I was a scribeâŠâ she frowned at that before continuing. âThere was one where I was an agility warrior, specializing in daggers and using a Concept to empower othersâ blades, interestingly enough. I had one life in the Sects with the power to resize weapons I wielded, and one life where I could hide swords inside my body to benefit from their enchantments. I swear if I hear one more joke about being a sword sheath, I will hurt someone.â
Matt smirked but kept his mouth shut. He had learned his lesson about bad jokes decades ago.
Their other lives were sort of abstract memories at this point, he didnât need to worry about getting confused in regards to what was real or not, but habits and preferences were known to bleed through. Theyâd be sorting out whether or not a bit of irritation was genuine or a âphantom impressionâ for months, maybe even years to come. Theyâd have a dedicated debrief with Luna and their psychiatrists once this was all over, unpacking the six other lives theyâd all lived, but for now, they needed to focus on what was immediately relevant. Namely, the general forms that their new abilities might have come in.
Liz still seemed interested in staring at her still-full mug of tea. He reached over and gave her a small squeeze on her shoulder, which broke her out of her contemplation and earned Matt a smile. âOh, am I going next?â
Matt shook his head. âI was going to, unless you really want to? You just looked deep in thought.â
âYeah⊠Yeah. But Iâm fine,â she shrugged. âJust thinking.â
âIf youâre sure.â
âI am,â she smiled, but he could see it was forced. âMatt, are you delaying?â
Matt just rolled his eyes and counted off on his fingers. âMy lives involved me being a professional cook, then there was one where I was imprisoned for my mana generation. There was a life where I never teamed up with you, and mainly worked as a mage-warrior duo with Aster, one where I never even got Aster, and moved into using talismans way earlier, and a quiet life where I joined a guild and acted as a support mage. The last was a life where I was a⊠well, a terrorist, with a Concept meant to⊠meant to make things explode.â
Susanne shrugged. âYeah, I canât say Iâm happy with my behavior in the Sects, but they-â
âThey arenât real. I know.â He took a breath and nodded to Susanne before looking to the last one. âLiz?â
âA life where I was a researcher. A life where I had a fire Talent instead of a blood Talent, a life where I used blood sacrifice to become a queen during the Shattering, a life where I pushed people to sign unbreakable blood oaths with me, a life where you and Aster both died and I went hard on being a blood warrior rather than a mage, and a life where I killed a few planets via bloodborne illness, rot, and decay.â
That last life caught him speechless. That was⊠a step beyond even his terrorist life. âAre⊠are you sure youâre okay?â
Liz nodded, âAbsolutely. They werenât me.â
The private AI message Matt got as she said so told a different story, however. âI need to talk to you. Alone.â
He acknowledged the message, not letting his face show any reaction, and spoke up. âWell. I donât know about the rest of you, but I really need a good nightâs sleep as me. Bedtime for now, get a good nightâs sleep. Weâll divvy up loot in the morning and cross our fingers the last psychotic floor isnât Wasteland.â
There was a bit of murmuring in agreement as Aster and Susanne got up to go to bed, and Liz just nodded silently as they went to their respective beds.
No sooner had the door clicked behind Matt and Liz as they entered their bedroom, with the privacy enchantments graven into the walls clicking and humming into action, did Liz launch herself at Matt, wrapping him in a one and a half-armed hug, sobbing.
Matt scooped up his girlfriend into his arms and sat the two of them on their bed, where she sat crying into his shoulder for a substantial length of time. He just held her and gave the best hug he could while she vented her emotions into him.
Eventually, her sobbing relaxed into a mere sniffle, and after she blew her nose on the handkerchief Matt provided her, she looked him straight in the eyes. âItâs well past time I told you about my Awakening.â
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Lorraine V
2023-03-04 00:43:20 +0000 UTCI was just thinking that since Matt has this new Halo, and Liz is this scary fire and blood spearfighter, their Ascender names could be Angel&Imp, Hallowed&Demoness or something. I don't know how to put Aster in that tho. Humm, is religion a thing in the Empire now that I think about it?
Arlano
2023-02-19 19:34:28 +0000 UTCOk so just a guess on Lizâs awakening she was a massive little shit when she thought she was gonna get fire. Like insufferably vain and full of herself classic noble kid kinda thing and because Leon and Mara are birdbrains they donât really notice or care about it. Getting blood instead shattered her view of herself and made it so she had to rebuild her mental image of herself from the ground up, she still has supportive parents and they take notice and help and she turns out much better for it in the end. Without that shattering fire Liz remained a massive asshole and does classic evil noble things which is why sheâs so upset by that life.
Kain
2023-02-17 15:02:31 +0000 UTCJust for the monster house memes I want hills have eyes lol
Kain
2023-02-17 14:51:58 +0000 UTCIt'll be another POA side story mini arc :P
Tyler
2023-01-25 02:31:21 +0000 UTCthat was the floor 2 theme challenge so around 180ish
Rowsdower
2023-01-23 19:40:59 +0000 UTCThe condensing of mana for the detonation concept reminded me of the experiment Matt ran in one of the previous floors where he condensed the mana down to make a rift or something. Anyone remember what it was for or what chapter it was so I can go back and check it out?
Mario Morales
2023-01-23 14:30:32 +0000 UTCI assume with combination of "this is my mana" and "detonation" , Matt can fix his mana density cultivation problem.
Drebee
2023-01-22 23:57:11 +0000 UTCThey have mentioned that bandage should work well here. Iâm curious is Lizâs bandage blood version [Scab] might be even better.
MikeL
2023-01-22 22:02:15 +0000 UTCI think "It's my Mana" is like the reverse of his real Concept -- it lets him leech mana from enemies.
Clint
2023-01-22 19:45:21 +0000 UTCWill we have a therapy arc after Minkalla, where they all go to psychologists and stuff for a year or so to recover from the trauma? Or maybe be better to roll it up into some montage moments as they do work with rifts and healing their psyches over a few chapters⊠Liz def needs some serious down time after her floor 6 experience
Tommy
2023-01-22 15:35:46 +0000 UTCHills have eyes would be good for a talking house!
Tommy
2023-01-22 15:29:23 +0000 UTCWould Blood is Thicker give Liz a chance to alter her bloodline from fire to blood? Make her a blood phoenix
Thomas Todd
2023-01-22 15:18:53 +0000 UTCSomething involving a lot of blood, I'd imagine.
Clint
2023-01-22 12:13:03 +0000 UTCThese chapters were a lot of fun. Now I'm really curious what's the source of Liz's trauma that seems beyond just not being able to prove herself in her parents shadows.
Luciaron
2023-01-22 07:45:56 +0000 UTCThe mana thing is easily explained by people carrying huge numbers of Mana stones. Not everyone in Minkalla is from the path. It wouldn't be hard for some elites to enter with zillions of Mana in Mana stones sponsored by someone in a higher tier Then there's courtly warfare. There were millions in tha floor burning their lead Then you've got to realise that Matt and Liz are essentially doing a 100% run of Minkalla. Not everyone is. All the level end challenges are unnecessary unless you want the extra reward and that means you need less genesis energy. I suspect there are several teams that are doing an any% speedrun to get the final reward Also, I'm sure there are lots of people with seeker talents that'll let them delve really deep. Maybe they get challenges and ruins with the highest generaos energy rewards, maybe they get the optimal pth to save time. And finally there are several people from path equivalents in t12 and t13 who are all strong and have their own advantages. More than a billion people entered Minkalla. Is it really surprising that there are people a the same depth as them. In fact it's incredible that there are so few as the same depth as them. Instead of asking how everyone else is keeping up with them, the question is how t11s such as them are keeping up with everyone else
Anonymonous
2023-01-22 05:24:45 +0000 UTCEach will have their own powers/skills/concepts to push the limits
Lacrimosa
2023-01-22 04:49:05 +0000 UTCAt this point they are competing against people in their own skill tier. All of the great powers have strong people that are on their own powers version of the path. The path and whatever the other powers call it are the top 1% of the age/tier those left at this point are basically the top 1% of that
Lacrimosa
2023-01-22 04:46:59 +0000 UTCHow the heck are people matching there speed/ outpacing them??? Seriously I know they took a week to recover from there last pvp fight but really they need way less energy to move on and no mana stops idk how this many people are keeping up/ahead of them.
Wrathwind
2023-01-22 02:06:10 +0000 UTCConcept additions List Matt: âgood food takes timeâ (enhances ingredient effects), âability to pass off both his physical cultivation to others, along with a small portion of his mana regenerationâ, âInternal Concept that boosted his body to incredible heightsâ, âItâs my Mana.â (Able to take back what he has given?), âAlways Preparingâ (allowing Matt to change the aspect of his enchantments and even move mana between talismans heâd made), âDetonationâ (âHe could constrain his mana in the area around him, building it up and compressing it with his will. Then, once he was ready, he could unleash it in a massive detonation that not only could destroy just about anything of his Tier, but melted even higher-tier runes and enchantments in a wide area.â) Aster: Fire concept (able to freeze fire?), âability to âfreezeâ a moment in her memory, then apply it to her artâ, âShe even had a Concept which she had practiced manipulating objects with.â (External manipulation concept?), âConceptâŠ. about making her as strong as possible, turning her fur to literal ice and using it as a way for her Talent to leverage its might against her own fleshâ, Feral concept?, illusion concept Liz: âblood was herâ (blood empowers glyphs or better control of blood?), Fire concept?, âPower Through Bloodâ (âcould seriously boost the bloodline of her and any willing participants close to herâ), blood contract concept, (blood warrior concept?), blood-born illness/decay-rot concept Susanne: âI am what I made me.â (Extra depressing Introspection?), (sect life) ability to stretch and shrink her blade in any way she chose, âConcept to boost the power of blades around herâ (wind hyena), shield concept, âsword sheathâ (Being the sword, can hide swords inside her body to benefit from their enchantments) , animated sword (quill?) concept
Wrathwind
2023-01-22 01:56:36 +0000 UTCPersonally, Blood is Thicker seems to be the most obvious Floor 7 because it fits so well for them except Liz. But Wasteland would be amazing for Matt and Liz. I would love to see World of Cardboard or Self-Identity as floor 7.
KingGoomba
2023-01-22 01:02:06 +0000 UTCI have thought that their wedding will be when they reach T25 and finish the path. Perfect moment to have their friends and family around for.
MikeL
2023-01-21 23:56:26 +0000 UTCMana cooking, talisman buff, physical support buff
Lorevi Q
2023-01-21 22:00:22 +0000 UTCThe last floor could also be mind over matter. It would synergize really well with what they just finished this floor.
David Dorelus
2023-01-21 17:33:05 +0000 UTCSo what is the list of additional aspects to the teamsâ concepts? Matt: explosive mana, taking mana back, infusing mana over time for more effect, ???, ???, ???
Craig
2023-01-21 16:17:17 +0000 UTCAll Paupers is my vote but i think they will get something like World of Cardboard
Phillip Hunsicker
2023-01-21 15:37:57 +0000 UTCThe brainwashing was implemented with the talent of a tier 48+ I donât think they are breaking it on mass no matter what happens. I do think it would be cool to see one or two break free before this arc ends though.
Revenice
2023-01-21 15:03:37 +0000 UTCHow big is Aster and has she attained her adult size or will she continue growing bigger?
sambee
2023-01-21 10:21:37 +0000 UTCI enjoyed this mini " what if" arcto see what the characters lives could have been. Will we get to see the spin off series Suzanne Librarian Extraordinaire? Still crossing my fingers for the key they found on the second floor to unlock the 8th level bonus floor.
Gjim
2023-01-21 09:09:00 +0000 UTCOr Self identity, since everyone gets the perfected more then perfect body at floor 7, and since they can enchant themself, with Matts mana and enchanting it would be a major boost
JRĂ
2023-01-21 09:08:24 +0000 UTCI serioudly think they are not going to try for the bonus (the 10men killsquads) as they are here for killing not getting rewards.. they were told how to live from the moment they woke up and were fed misinformation so i hope they don't have what it takes to wake up each and every time if they do try to get the bonus reward
Nicolas Maganto
2023-01-21 09:02:29 +0000 UTCPlus I don't think the bandage skill is widely spread yet to the other powers
Nicolas Maganto
2023-01-21 08:55:15 +0000 UTCNo regen or healing plus many many weaker mobs capable of suicide tactics to injure juste a little. Reward is three times more healing from concept or added healing effect to concept if it didn't have such
Nicolas Maganto
2023-01-21 08:53:32 +0000 UTCBlood is thicker - has been explicitly called out as only useful for Matt as a floor 7 and aster had some foreshadowing hoping for it!
Charles Simon
2023-01-21 07:24:13 +0000 UTCMy personal guess for the last floor is âblood is thickerâ. Itâs the only floor that perfectly fits all the characters objectives and it was explicitly called out at the start as one that would only be useful for Matt as a floor 7. Aster and Liz get bloodline upgrades, Matt gets Arcane mana and Suzanne Void is my theory.
Charles Simon
2023-01-21 07:22:37 +0000 UTCSiĆce we were about to move to the last Floor of Minkalla, hereâs a quick summary I made of all the Floors. I started doing this prior to Courtly Warfare to keep track of Stuff 1st floor - Eternal Darkness Challenge room: Ants vs Elephants Challenge room: Essential Civilization Exit Challenge: Catching butterlies and shadow monsters Reward: Spiritual Perception is improved. On the first floor, it slightly increases resolution and adds faint additional feedback, such as color perception. By the seventh floor, it returns almost perfect, detailed feedback on everything within its range and is substantially better at bypassing any blocks. 2nd Floor - Genesis Cultivation Challenge: Unnamed (Something with penguins and vomit?) Exit Challenge: Make own genesis Reward: On floor one, the most recent Tier of essence thatâs been cultivated is converted to something similar to Genesis Energy, enhancing all aspects of cultivation, but particularly in the stacking bonus that comes with cultivating the same areas for multiple Tiers. By floor seven, not only is all essence converted to Genesis Energy, but the effect lingers until Tier 16. 3rd Floor - Back to basics Challenge: Escort Mission Exit Challenge: Survive in unnamed wilderness for at least 6 months at Tier 0 Reward: Concepts empowering the body become stronger, or if the Concept doesn't do so, it begins to. On floor seven, it's a full second very strong Concept, or the original is about three times as strong if it was able to empower the body before. 4th Floor - Courtly Warfare Exit Reward: upgrade growth item Reward: A growth item gains a new effect. For the first floor, it mostly seems to accelerate when the growth item would get new abilities. Instead of Tier 25 where a growth item would gain a new effect, now the effect is unlocked before then and shifts all the upgrades the item would get corresponding down by the same margin. By floor seven it adds a completely separate set of powers which grow at the same rate as the original growth power. In addition, Boons are available to the winning side. 5th Floor - Taxing Skills Exit Challenge: Clear 25 monster waves using faĆse bodies, breakable Equipment and limited spells Reward: Gain bonus skill slots. On floor 1, this is two extra Inner skill slots and five extra Outer skill slots, effectively one Tiers worth in total. By floor seven, it grants an extra four Core skill slots, thirty Inner skill slots, and one hundred Outer skill slots, slightly more than doubling the current skill slots available to a Tier 14. 6th Floor - Folded Reflections Challenge: Careful What You Wish For Exit Reward (?) : 6 alternative lives and concepts Reward: Experience a number of other lives equal to the floor depth, change your Concept to one of them, or fold their effects into your current Concept.
Mashiara
2023-01-21 06:44:34 +0000 UTCI feel like at least one of them would get some sort of concept boost that lets them fight off the brainwashing.
Echohunter
2023-01-21 04:42:47 +0000 UTCNah, Mantis already stated they're not getting another permanent member of the party, and he tends to plan things out pretty far in advance. Plus, we've already done the "grow a team member from childhood" before. It's nearly certain to be the bloodline one at this point. The foreshadowing is too heavy for it to be otherwise, and since it helps Matt as well as the girls, it's a good choice for the reader base as well. That said, I thought the skill upgrade one would be amazing, and no matter what happens I'll be sad if it doesn't happen. A part of me does long for the house to become sentient as well. (Hungry house. Always goes and eats other houses when they're not looking. Good house).
Nathan Sto
2023-01-21 03:40:44 +0000 UTCAlso made him kill his girlfriend
Anonymonous
2023-01-21 03:38:51 +0000 UTCThis is my prediction for the last for and its kinda specific. I will either be close to what happens and I can say I called it before it happens. Or I'll look like a fucking idot, I'm cool with either baby So Wasteland jinx was a misdirection and its actually gonna be Spirit Journey. Boom they get there and action starts right away and eventually floor turns into a bloodbath. The group has 2-5 fights some longer and better than others(rematch with blood fist idk). But they make it out of them relatively fine and healthy with pretty good amount of genesis energy for everyone. Then near the end they run into the brainwashed group and get into a fight. Susanne is put into a bad situation were she can get away from the fight safely or she has to tier up to fight for/defend/save either Liz and/or Aster. She does and they win but because the prize on the floor cost so much energy they don't have enough for all 4 to get prize. But with the original trios energy combined together they have enough for 2 but instead they they get one(between Matt Liz aster) and give the excess to Susanne so she can get one too. Technically they could say and try to collect more energy but they take that as good enough because they don't want to got around killing random people.
mag28
2023-01-21 03:08:06 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed these chapters. They were well done. That being said, I agree with your decision to post them in large chunks like this. As much as I enjoyed them, if I'd been forced to read today's posts over 2 weeks instead... that would have ruined my enjoyment.
Mothman
2023-01-21 03:04:50 +0000 UTCI have loved these folded reflections, even the ones where things go wrong. Some of them have made me laugh, others have made me cry, some seemed over too soon. I'm glad you pushed to get through them so quickly, because I might have had a different opinion if they lasted much longer, but if you hadn't gone into at least this much detail, any reward and boost to their concepts would have seemed unearned. Thabk you for your amazing work, and I hate you for making me look forward to a Monday. Keep being awesome!
Chemnerd263
2023-01-21 01:40:50 +0000 UTCThank you for the last four chapters! I know some people didn't like them, but I loved the change of pace and style. Maybe not the most exciting chapters you've written in terms of action but really enjoyable nonetheless. Any chance of getting a side chapter in the future to go into some of Liz's lives? I know you want to get back to the main story but the different ideas you had for their lives were fascinating and I now want to know what has her so traumatized.
Josh Bullock
2023-01-21 01:12:14 +0000 UTCtypo hunter report What was a few more months of work in exchange for spiting the people whoâd ruined everything? should be What was a few more months of work in exchange for spiting on the people whoâd ruined everything? When Matt reached Tier 5, they grabbed onto his Talent and the possibilities it provided. should be When Matt reached Tier 3, they grabbed onto his Talent and the possibilities it provided.
wanderer117
2023-01-21 00:44:34 +0000 UTCI'm torn because because Spirit Journey sounds like the coolest reward, but Wasteland adding healing would be most useful useful if I'm being honest. But my guess is probably gonna be Wasteland. This me making a prediction that idk if it will happened but I wanted to just call it now. If it is Spirit Journey 2 members of the group need to tier up to Tier 12 so they don't have enough genesis energy for all 4 members to floor reward. If that happens my guess would be Matt Liz and aster get one between them(something to act as tank so Matt can move more towards mage) and Susanne gets one. Also it would be cool/sweet parting gift if the original trio pool there "extra" genesis energy to help Susanne because her roads "harder" if you know what I mean
mag28
2023-01-21 00:35:59 +0000 UTCUnskilled was the one floor I was betting they would get. Itâs not just an upgrade itâs upgrades however they want them. CPA with all the mana he could pump into it and invisible. CMS with no strain so we can pump any mana amount. Even better a healing spell with overhealth, how is that not what everyone wants.
MikeL
2023-01-21 00:19:10 +0000 UTC<3
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 23:20:41 +0000 UTCand @StarWolf yeah not everyone will like em. but its over now so it should be back to what you are used to
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 23:18:58 +0000 UTC"rip through the brainwashing of any Federation teams that have made it this far.:" See I disagree as anything they get shown would be written off as Minkalla being evil. People who are brain washed aren't really prone to believing when told the truth. It just drives them further into the cult or what have you.
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 23:17:11 +0000 UTCwe werent but thats more cause not much is know about it as its so long ago. Millions of years. Even aunt helen wasnt alive at that time. shes a few generations after the shattering
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 23:15:12 +0000 UTCThat seems to be what should happen to me, but I doubt it will. They've been built up too much to be a future threat to have them defect now. I'd enjoy being wrong though.
Anon
2023-01-20 23:03:22 +0000 UTCUnskilled doesn't give an innate skill slot it is the upgrade a skill. The innate skill slot is the exit reward for floor 7. They already have 2 upgrad orbs they have yet to use so I don't see Unskilled being that great
Josh
2023-01-20 23:02:52 +0000 UTCThat seems likely. I've always pictured the gang appearing outside Minkalla more than half dead, but triumphant.
Anon
2023-01-20 23:01:14 +0000 UTCI dont think we were told that the king at the time was called a God-King, right?
Maakolo
2023-01-20 22:59:37 +0000 UTCPersonally I am hoping for Spirit Journey, though I know it is the least likely, if for no other reason than that adding a whole 3 characters to the main cast, which is what would happen if Liz Matt and Aster get that reward.
alex bozdog
2023-01-20 22:57:52 +0000 UTCI agree without a doubt these last few chapters have been my least favorite of the 207 chapters.
StarWolf
2023-01-20 22:49:20 +0000 UTCcorrect. that shattering turned into the current great powers
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 22:48:29 +0000 UTCIt depends on if that no regeneration extends to mana too. If it does then Matt's concept and talent would allow them to destroy the floor.
Daniel Smith
2023-01-20 22:47:52 +0000 UTCI'm kind of hoping for Unskilled, tho Matt's talent and concept should allow them to regenerate mana in Wasteland
Daniel Smith
2023-01-20 22:40:45 +0000 UTCI have a minor / major issue with these past few chapters. These various lives, showing what could have been and what is will undoubtedly rip through the brainwashing of any Federation teams that have made it this far. I mean, consider the effect on Liz and Matt,and now imagine that your life has been constructed through forced surgery and brain washing.
Obran
2023-01-20 22:36:44 +0000 UTCSo what Floor Theme are we hoping for, for the seventh and final floor of Minkala? Unskilled? (An innate skill slot would be incredible.) Blood is Thicker? (Arcane Mana for Matt, and bloodline improvements for Liz and Aster) Wasteland? (Matt jinxed it. And Endless Healing would be spectacular.) Spirit Journey? (I love the reward, but we've just had Folded Reflections, and another introspective character study sequence would be too much.) Given the jinx, it's probably Wasteland -- which is going to be an utterly brutal bloodbath with other cultivators, but Liz and Aster will be very effective against swarms, and Bandage will be a literal lifesaver.
Clint
2023-01-20 22:36:02 +0000 UTCSpirit Journey would be nasty for Liz right now.
M van Dongen
2023-01-20 22:34:48 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapters but I am glad these are over. I am ready for progress
Xander Cadence
2023-01-20 22:34:41 +0000 UTCBoth Mikel and Bob are wrong. Its when they get their first bit of essence and go from Tier 0 to Tier 1. Its also when they get their T1 Talent and maybe this is when a spirit becomes a motive spirit?
Maakolo
2023-01-20 22:19:18 +0000 UTCIt'll be Wasteland. What does that one do ?
M van Dongen
2023-01-20 22:18:08 +0000 UTCwhere had we seen the shattering before these chapters? was it the shattering of the previous Great Power?
John Warren
2023-01-20 22:10:39 +0000 UTCI feel you which is why it was over quickly.
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 22:09:48 +0000 UTCadded ty
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 22:09:30 +0000 UTCIt was nice and hopefully will follow up with some good growth in the characters along with power as well. I can't wait for Matt and Liz to get married I'm actually going to cry will be so sweet. I hope that we will get to see them when there older or even ascend together tho may be a while
Gray Fullbuster
2023-01-20 22:09:20 +0000 UTCThough I don't agree, I can understand your opinion. Sum of these lives are just brutal and invoke a feeling of disgust (really well written to manage that). Due to that, the negativity of those lives can overshadow the rest, which I think is the reason why one might feel glad it's over.
yannick schwende
2023-01-20 22:02:34 +0000 UTCJust a note it didnt mention Liz's 6th life with her being a bloodline researcher. Is that because it relates to the Awakening thing or just missed it?
Schmidt
2023-01-20 22:01:53 +0000 UTCI am glad this floor is over. I canât discribe why but I just donât like the alternative lifeâs. I know it has its place l. I just donât enjoy them.
hannibal
2023-01-20 21:54:58 +0000 UTCYeah, that was a really good way to make a terribly mean and annoying chapter. Can't even say it's bad because of just how well written it is and how nice some other stuff is. Damn. I tip my hat to you Mantis. That was beautifully brutal and disturbing in just the right ways.
yannick schwende
2023-01-20 21:53:18 +0000 UTCnaaa all good. Talking about this stuff is cool.
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 21:53:06 +0000 UTCTrue and thanks for the comment. Just want to say that wasn't an attack on you, just questioning in book thinking, especially with how hard Liz was hit
Bob Bryan
2023-01-20 21:46:39 +0000 UTCwell its called folded reflections after all. A reflection is about yourself at its base. So it will take, magnify, and then twist what you fear or hope for to make you stronger.
C_Mantis
2023-01-20 21:45:29 +0000 UTCBeing near the healing cooldown limit and having absolutely no healing is different. At least with the healing cooldown, they can hole up somewhere and wait for the cooldown to expire a bit and heal up. With absolutely no healing, that option is gone. And what happens if they run into other cultivators that want to fight? As seen before, it's pretty much impossible to fight other elite cultivators without taking any wounds. And taking wounds on such a floor would snowball into failure with no way to recover.
Merc715
2023-01-20 21:45:29 +0000 UTCI don't think it's minkalla and I think the people in this story named this floor wrong. It feels like this floor shows them things that are tied to their hopes and fears and Liz probably has a lot od fears due to her future awakening. Aster not so much. Matt was told the emperor's fater would act like that, thus his greatest fear. Plus there was the story about the young man whose sister was assaulted and killed by a noble and there was no punishment. So I don't think this floor shows alternative lives in the same sense they believe it does.
Bob Bryan
2023-01-20 21:39:58 +0000 UTCYeah, there are a few who feel the need to end every single chapter with a cliff. Itâs a good tool, but if itâs every chapter itâs beyond frustrating. Mantis is good about it.
Fleetpanda
2023-01-20 21:36:21 +0000 UTCPretty sure minkalla likes foxes and has a hate boner for blood mages. Like aster seems to keep getting nice things like the ice cream bunnies or the winter floor and such. Minkalla definitely playing favorites.
Barkeep
2023-01-20 21:34:05 +0000 UTCIdk. They are so far I to their healing cooldown would a floor not letting them heal be that diffrent? Also. Imagine if mats concept of "I am endless" got a healing addition. Or Elizabeth's blood concept gets her healing super charged? Would definitely make her torch close combat persona harder to kill. I think it would def not be the worst floor to get.
Barkeep
2023-01-20 21:31:56 +0000 UTCThey can get healing from other sources. The other floor rewards are far far far more unique and powerful.
Fleetpanda
2023-01-20 21:30:17 +0000 UTCNo healing? Then they should hope for it, considering they already at the limit of healing cooldowns.
BeepBoop
2023-01-20 21:28:24 +0000 UTCTwo things. First I think that would supercharge some aspects of Matt's concept and wouldn't be the worst thing. Second, he said that out loud. They are totally jinxed now and are guaranteed to get Wasteland.
Robin Richards
2023-01-20 21:23:42 +0000 UTCAnyone remember any foreshadowing about her awakening? All I remember is that she asked her mother to go into monarch mode to address it. Also there was a chapter during the war were they all had weird dream when then died.
MikeL
2023-01-20 21:17:14 +0000 UTCWhat aster went through to go from ice fox to winter fox to eventually aurora fox to Krystal from star fox. The bloodline thingy.
Bob Bryan
2023-01-20 21:14:54 +0000 UTCWhen she got her 1st tier skill.
MikeL
2023-01-20 21:14:44 +0000 UTCWhat's an Awakening again?
Rielgesh
2023-01-20 21:13:37 +0000 UTCAt least C_Mantis is pretty good about this. This really is the first one I remember.
MikeL
2023-01-20 21:12:57 +0000 UTCWhat a chapter. Thank you again for this gift. What a fun last few chapters
JoshCalmick
2023-01-20 20:58:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the chappy! đđ
Tommy
2023-01-20 20:57:13 +0000 UTCDoing heroic work! Thank you :)
Tommy
2023-01-20 20:57:01 +0000 UTCMinkalla: "Matt, maybe my challenges cannot kill you, but I can kill your girlfriend mind health"
TheKillerNormie
2023-01-20 20:51:57 +0000 UTCThat sums it well. Good chapter
Adurna
2023-01-20 20:50:18 +0000 UTCJust to save everyone a trip back to ch173 to see why they hope they don't get wasteland as the final floor: Wasteland: No healing or regeneration. Monsters are numerous, weak, and frequently pack monsters, often willing to use suicide tactics to deal even the slightest injury. Reward: Concepts that aid in healing, regeneration, or repairing are enhanced, up to a three times empowerment by floor seven. Those which did not have an aspect along that theme have it added.
Merc715
2023-01-20 20:47:14 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter, but also f u for the chapter.
Bob Bryan
2023-01-20 20:47:12 +0000 UTCMan, minkalla really doesnât like Liz. Like holy shit
Vega
2023-01-20 20:45:51 +0000 UTCGod fucking damn that cliffhanger! XD
Teatime42
2023-01-20 20:43:11 +0000 UTCWow. That's all I got. Just wow.
Cora
2023-01-20 20:37:50 +0000 UTC