Written in the Stars
Added 2021-11-30 20:12:24 +0000 UTCMona's looking into her future when Aether stops by to spend some quality time with her!
I hope you guys enjoy this month's comic, it was a chonky bit of work but Im so pleased with how it came out! I'd love your feedback on this format, because that'll help me decide wether or not to make comics like this one again in the future
Thanks SO much for all the support guys!
Comments
I like this format but also the traditional a lot, maybe something in between could be nice?
Paryas
2021-12-04 23:03:37 +0000 UTCI agree with Franco, the animations for fun for a change, but overall I prefer your traditional comic panel format with dialogue.
Scott Monaghan
2021-12-02 14:29:31 +0000 UTCThe animations are incredible, they have a very good level of detail and the movement doesn’t look weird at all, I can see all the effort you’re putting on this but I think it's better that you continue with the old format, not because I don't like the animations, but I feel that in the panels with dialogue makes it feels like, more intimate, y’know? But other than that, I’ll be supporting you no matter what. Keep up the good work, Lily!
Franco
2021-12-02 00:05:30 +0000 UTCThe animations are amazing, well done on them. I do think I kind of prefer the older format just because something about the text makes it feel more intimate between the characters, you know?
PhantomYukino
2021-12-01 20:08:57 +0000 UTCAre all of these self contained stories, or does Aether just have literally every attractive woman in his harem?
Paul Linfor
2021-12-01 18:58:10 +0000 UTCWow. Pretty much a full animation comic. Definitely something nice every once in a while for some comics but not all.
Brandon
2021-12-01 04:45:46 +0000 UTCThe new format is definitely really cool and I feel like fits this story a lot. Given the framing device of Mona doing some divination and seeing it all in a vision the animations fit well as it's like she's getting flashes of things to come, but not necessarily the full story. It feels thematically appropriate that rather than detailed blocks of text we'd get these animations instead. It's a great case of the art adapting to the story.
Sean
2021-12-01 01:37:50 +0000 UTCI love all the animations, but I think I prefer the old format
Sonicmeansspeed
2021-12-01 01:05:26 +0000 UTCThe animations are nice and welcome, but you don't have to do them! I really like your still images; you convey such dynamic poses and movement with just a still frame, so I prefer the old format a bit. Plus, I miss the dialog!
Hugh Munghous
2021-11-30 23:59:52 +0000 UTCSo many animations, so good
Chris
2021-11-30 23:19:48 +0000 UTCDo all of the Genshin Impact ladies know about Aether? I feel like this is going to come to a head!
Scott Monaghan
2021-11-30 22:35:43 +0000 UTCLove the format. I do also love your dialog so if there’s a middle ground that you think works, I’d also love that.
Ben
2021-11-30 21:17:58 +0000 UTCwow love the format this comic
Gambitx24
2021-11-30 21:10:26 +0000 UTCWow, I was not expecting so many animations! This was a real treat and I commend you for the extra work you put into this Kinky!😁
GanRPG
2021-11-30 20:41:24 +0000 UTCOh absolutely love this format! But it hasn’t have to be done all the time since you said it was a lot of work 🥰
Upcomingauthor
2021-11-30 20:39:42 +0000 UTCHonestly, I prefer the old format. There's nothing wrong with this one, it's just not really for me.
Shaun Dinkin
2021-11-30 20:35:43 +0000 UTCAlso, I know it will be amazing~
darkfunnel
2021-11-30 20:30:37 +0000 UTCNoice. I still find it great that I pulled Mona the same month this comic was coming out~ ☺️
darkfunnel
2021-11-30 20:30:27 +0000 UTCFull on minisode, nice.
JewelsDragonfly
2021-11-30 20:24:35 +0000 UTCOoooh this comic is *so good*! The animations are all stunning, what I wouldn't give to be Mona here~
Babs Scriven
2021-11-30 20:21:29 +0000 UTCLove the cover!
DodgeGuy1871
2021-11-30 20:20:46 +0000 UTCI’m personally more of a fan on the elaborate panels than multiple animations Back to back. But the animations are really nice! Love the facial expressions Mona gives off.
Cody
2021-11-30 20:17:30 +0000 UTC
