Adventure Awaits! Huzzah! 31
Added 2025-07-28 22:24:11 +0000 UTC31
I said this in another story, but I'll be saying it here too for the people who haven't seen it. I'm gonna start uploading chapters as PDF's because that way it seems they don't get removed as much for Himmel being Himmel.
Oh yeah, and if you haven't seen it yet, please go vote on the poll I recently started.
Comments
Yeah, recently I have been switching between writing third person and first person fics pretty frequently, so my brain is bugging out sometimes lol.
OppaiMeme
2025-07-31 19:17:49 +0000 UTCThere was some switching between 3rd- and 1st-person in the middle of sentences: "There was no running away from it. He didn’t want to keep holding things in until I burst like last time" An error? Himmel doesn't seem to be mentally collapsing at the moment
John Fiction
2025-07-31 19:16:05 +0000 UTCIt's hard to argue with someone when the rizz aura he inherited from his parents makes you do heart-eyes every time
John Fiction
2025-07-29 21:11:48 +0000 UTCSurely Deirdre won't encounter any problems asking the Captain for a delay on their trip to Jugdral so she can continue to bond with her son, which is totally going to plan
John Fiction
2025-07-29 20:44:31 +0000 UTCYandiedre when
Etherious Natsu Dragneel
2025-07-29 12:17:54 +0000 UTCSo half of the next chapter is Voices discussion going nowhere and second half is plot reason why Deirdre and Julia won't leave party. Invasion, ambush, or something. Or we see another separation, which is secretly great, status quo is the enemy of any story. One way or another, let's get this show on the road, Caeda, dragon war and more government overthrowal awaits!
Max Unknown
2025-07-29 06:24:42 +0000 UTCHimmel gets away without even a slap on the wrist. Celica was swayed by suicidal aura of Himmelness, as expected. She didn't even remind him about "Go to hell with your order", that line was great. Girl has it bad for her osananajimi/transfer (student)/prince/brooding bad boy capture target - but it's okay, she can fix him! Not that she is sure what she actually needs to fix here!
Max Unknown
2025-07-29 06:15:15 +0000 UTC"Supposed to." is key, I believe.
RJKY
2025-07-29 05:33:57 +0000 UTCWith everything going on I kind of forgot Deidre and Julia were ever supposed to actually separate from the group, especially since Deidre is currently going through a lot.
Kaustrios
2025-07-28 23:04:25 +0000 UTCThe Voices™ are getting louder They are Winning®
Podomoro
2025-07-28 22:31:07 +0000 UTCPeak chapter. Hopefully Celica gets to have some… entertainment with Himmel soon. Though I highly doubt that’s how it will go next chapter.
Sherbert
2025-07-28 22:30:00 +0000 UTC
