V (Part 2 of 4)
Added 2023-03-03 17:00:07 +0000 UTCYeah, gifgun let me down and the gifs were too heavy for the comic ๐
Long strip is on download! I still haven't figured out a way to export a pdf properly sorry...
P.S.: Any english typos/corrections are always welcome! ๐โโ๏ธ
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I love all of the characters styles ๐ the outfits are beautiful!
2023-03-07 18:18:33 +0000 UTC- Overdid it โก๏ธ overdo it - What if his it was like โก๏ธ What if it was like, - And then never does โก๏ธ And then he never does - Angie's line of speech after being hugged is a little awkwardly spread in the bubbles. I think you can get away with omitting "that" in "That I thought you forgot..." - Her phrase, "So I had a doubt" might be better stated as, "So I was worried..." - Where Hadrian explains he was sleeping, "Had a nightmare" could be rephrased as "I had a nightmare" or "Woke up from a nightmare to the..." - Helen, The baker from The Orchid retired recently โก๏ธ Helen, the baker from The Orchid, retired recently. - I never heard that one โก๏ธ I've never heard that one. (Or, "I never got that one") - Can you please tell me if there is really an โก๏ธ Can you please tell me if there really is an - That I swear it looked back at me as if โก๏ธ I swear it looked at me as if - The comma in Angie's remark about watching horror movies isn't needed. - Don't call me like that โก๏ธ Don't call me that Fun fact, "analysing" has two versions depending on which English you're using. The UK uses "analysing" and the US uses "analyzing." Both are correct, so use whichever! Just be sure to use that form for consistency. (I'm going to guess you've been using UK English, so I'll be sure to use UK spelling if the need ever arises.) And as always these are suggestions, use whatever you'd like or disregard at your discretion! โค๏ธ
Chai
2023-03-04 00:15:04 +0000 UTCHi! I've been lurking! But I return to an interesting twist of events! ๐ I will post a list of things soon!
Chai
2023-03-03 23:23:57 +0000 UTC
