Future direction of the story (Eng)

To tell the truth: I like the abuse route. From the beginning i was impressed by the punishment of Wilddire, the abuse of Wildfire - and of curse his heavy chains! Maybe this picture pushed me to this decision ;-) Different ways to humiliate, Wildfire fucked by dogs and more is promising! But this means not that there can be no kind of relationship. I think a very close relationship can develop in an SM relationship in particular because it knows no taboos - it can therefore be all the more intense. By the way: i`m new to your Fanbox - but already excited - but I need to read more about the story. The pictures seduced me into it. I would like to see more Heavy Iron an Wildfire, and different punishments, i think about more, when I've gone through all the posts. Do you comissions?

MowgliSan

You're welcome. As all advices you're free to not follow them. Just thought I'd mention of the main plot I told you could be used for a mean president choice.Whatever you'll do i'm sure it'll be great and hot.

Ah! Do you mean elapsed time? I think it's about an hour or a little bit more. It's my small but precious time to invest in hobbies during break time~ ;)

madoclaus

Eso me da gusto pero si quiero ver antes como lo humilla el Presidente

Ash61Nando

Thank you for your advice, it helped me a lot. 🥰

アミノ(Aminor)

Thank you, this sounds like the sweet route. Don't worry, no matter which route I take, Wildfire will end up with a good ending.

アミノ(Aminor)

Thank you, I have learned a lot from your comments. 😘 😘 😘

アミノ(Aminor)

The president could try to actively seduce Wildfire, pretending to be nice to him and punishing him whenever he rejects his offers. BUT he could have ulterior motives. Maybe he wants wildfire being quite strong and entirely devoted to him. So he can use him as a weapon to get rid of whoever goes in the way of his business. He's feigning kindness to fool wildfire and it's starting to work, hence why he's involving his brother. The brother starts having feelings for wildfire and he's unhappy that wildfire is sincerely loving the president when the president is all fake. And the story becomes about finding a way to make wildfire realize this before he becomes the president faithful weapon.

No problem at all. And you're quite right it is your story and you shall tell what appeals to your muses. I merely wanted to point out you could have the abuse route without giving up on the romance part. From the way you described your choice it felt like it was either fully sappy or fully abusive.Though you can follow that route I mentioned while twisting it.I'll explain you how.

Thank you! You have similar thoughts to me, I think you will prefer the abuse route, don't worry, even in this development, wildfire will still have some moments of being treated gently. In addition, no matter which route, the president is definitely not a despicable and dirty person.

アミノ(Aminor)

roger that, thank you~

アミノ(Aminor)

Thank you, I think I've decided the route after that, But about Wildfires and dogs...let me keep it a secret for now. XD

アミノ(Aminor)

Yes, I think I've decided the route after that, Thanks for your support! 😊

アミノ(Aminor)

I think I can understand you, I also do not like meaningless humiliation and abuse, this type of work often does not need to portray the top（seme ), but I like interesting top（seme ) too, which is why I spent a lot of effort in the design of the President.

アミノ(Aminor)

Thank you for helping me think about the direction of the story. After reading everyone's messages, I think I already know my conclusion. I really hope you don't mind.

アミノ(Aminor)

I think your route is very similar to the development of my abuse route, except that in my case, the above-mentioned final boss role will be played by the president. And Wildfire 's secret companion role will be played by清一 (one of the president's younger brothers). “The president is the highest leader in the story, and Wildfire constantly rebels against him.” "They're kind of like the Joker-Batman relationship." I think these are some condition in this story which attract me.

アミノ(Aminor)

When this final boss is revealed, the president's position in the story is changed, which will take away a lot of the president's charm and importance in the story. In fact, when the three roles of the president, Wildfire, and final boss exist, I think this final boss will be more attractive to me. "What is he thinking?" "What is his next move?". And the importance of the president in this situation is closer to that of "The Secret Companion of Wildfire".

アミノ(Aminor)

I understand your concept, your concept is to let the president involuntarily punish Wildfire. I have considered this route, but this route will extend another problem, that is, the president and Wildfire are no longer the only main players in the plot, and there is obviously a third party (final boss) in the story who has more power than the president.

アミノ(Aminor)

Thanks. I felt both options were quite unsatisfying and we are never given answers about the important questions. We don't want forced sweetness we don't want meaningless abuse either, we want them to waltz dangerously till they sort things out. Then Wildfire can get his revenge for his dad against the guy who tied up the president's hands.

Agreed! This route feels the most exciting storywise. 👍🏼

Jozomyh

Aunque también puedes unirlas que el Presidente humille y castigue a Wildfire en el trallecto y al mismo tiempo a ser que Wildfire dese estar más con él Presidente mientras el tiene sexo con él al punto en qué eyos dos se enamoran el uno del otro asta que al final terminen juntos y por fin Wildfire disfrute de tener sexo con el Presidente y el Presidente dese tener para siempre entre sus brazos a Wildfire

Ash61Nando

Thanks. ^^

Great idea, count me in for it.

Mr IceLord

Trying to seduce wilfdfire into accepting to not fight, but also being merciless each time wildfire refuses i;e having him fight some beast and then let him be punished and abused, before trying to be nice to him again for a bit and then offering him again the way out. And each time wildfire says no but is more and more tempted to say yes. And you reach the point where after xx times of offers punishment, you have wildfire making a counter offer of his own. He silences the president by kissing him and ask him to let him fight but rewards his victories by nice sex with him. The shift could be that at some point he finds out the president did something in secret to help or protect wildfire's brother but he didn't tell wildfire he did.

I think neither route is satisfying. Your main problem is to sort out what exactly happened to wildfire's father and why. Is the president responsible for it? Did he have a choice. For example it could be cool if the president didn't want to do this to wildfire's dad but was forced to by a superior power like a rival company or his predecessor. Someone forced his hand but he promised he'd try to take care of wildfire. If the president hands are tied up by someone above him, then you can have some fun plot like this. 1st it took him a while to figure out who wildfire was, he found out but wildfire caused this mess (the one you showed us) so he has no choice but to punish him of risk a rebellion within his organization. But now he wants wildfire not to fight, to give him a way out. Wilfdfire is stubborn and blinded by his hatred of the president, so he refuses. The president therefore has to play a dangerous game.

Upon thinking further about this, I feel I may have been unclear. The idea of the President being coerced was not literal blackmail or anything like that. Rather, I meant that the President is figuratively surrounded by sharks, and any sign of weakness is blood in the water. So the President must be ruthless and stoic, even if inside he is a kinder and more honorable man. This is the sort of man who could still be cool and suave, while also making hard decisions and not holding back. The sort of man who might kidnap children and keep the threat of violence over their head, but not act on it. The sort of man who would be cruel to be kind—like using Wildfire as a pleasure hole for the President's men when Wildfire acts up, so that he doesn't misbehave at the wrong time. I guess I'd say I want both! The heat of the non-consensual/dubiously consensual scenes are scorching, but I also want to see Wildfire treated well sometimes. Quite the dilemma!

Jackthesnake

>> even if it's a little long. Not at all :P Btw, how long took to write it down? :)

Mr IceLord

-----(Fin) This was the Internet lecture on "Story Writing" that I've seen before. It's interesting, but there's a lot of flow that we see in a lot of works. Well, it seems too long, but if you imagine a variety of situations happily, and sometimes you give your characters your memories, experiences, or expectations, I think you can create a storyline that you want. The reader's opinion and others' opinions are important, but I think the Aminor's thoughts and stories will be the most interesting and interesting. I think the story of Wildfire is different from creating a work with a "finish" which is most of the business-like story. So, please feel free to control the situation and space you want. You are an omnipotent "God" in a space of Wildfire and boss. Show your children your abilities!!(๑˃́ꇴ˂̀๑)b

madoclaus

-----(Cont...3) And the colleague he had to treat had a history of being a thug in the past, or failed a magic experiment, causing a natural disaster and devastating the village Or, let's say you showed contempt for the poor child. Then, wouldn't it be understandable to some extent that you don't treat your colleagues? In this way, by overwriting the past memories that trigger emotions in the character to stimulate the area of the brain (2), we can continue the logically insufficient story development through the reader's "sympathy." But what if it doesn't even come to mind or it's hard to set the situation? The final way is to stimulate the 1st brain area(Reptile brains). What if, for example, an opponent he can never beat comes rushing in front of him to kill that priest? Feeling threatened with survival, wouldn't he be able to run away? And I think the reader can fully understand that situation, what do you think?

madoclaus

-----(Cont...2) For example, there was a situation where the protagonist, a faithful priest, had to be treating or praying for a dying colleague. But let's say that you have to express that the ugly human side is hidden behind this priest's absolute faith for the sake of the future. Can you turn a clergyman who has been faithful into "logically evil" in an instant? In this case, the storyteller would use the 2nd brain(Mammalian brains) stimulation method. Usually, the brain (2) remembers the emotion in light of its past memories. For example, watching it rain can bring back sad memories of a broken heart, but some people have happy memories of taking a day off from work because of the rain. So, let's use the priest's past memory. Use this to instill in the priest the pain of being assaulted by his friends in the past, the suffering of war or natural disasters, and the sadness that no one helped him no matter how much he prayed to God.

madoclaus

-----(Cont...1) In evolutionary theory, the human brain is usually known to have evolved in three stages. 1. Reptile brains - more visceral, more dominant emotions. This is usually the case for food appetite/wanting to sleep/survival instinct. 2. Mammalian brains - you feel the general seven emotions. "喜怒哀樂愛惡慾" are usually the areas where this brain reacts. 3. Primate brains - responsible for rational and logical thinking. It is analytical and understands what's going on. Usually, in the case of a story writer, the story unfolds so that the reader uses the brain (3)-Primate brain. Establish a logical causal relationship with the situation before and after, and write the work. However, the writer has his own conclusion that he expects or wants. Various events need to be designed to reach that conclusion. However, there are often cases in which you need to induce a reasonably incorrect response to the character or colleague you set.

madoclaus

Hmm? Is it about the story? I think it will be fun even if Aminor is indecisive. And it will be possible to cross pure love and sadism according to sir, Aminor's mind at that time. As Aminor has already said, people's minds are unpredictable. I think it would be good to write your own original story freely. However, I don't know whether this may help or not, let me write down a few things. Please understand even if it's a little long. I've seen E-learning "story writing" classes before, and I will interpret it in my own way and organize it. Question: Do you prefer someone who is "emotional"? Or do you prefer people who are "rational"? ----- Emotional people often lose control of their emotions, while they have excellent empathy. On the other hand, in the case of rational people, analysis and judgment appear to be excellent, but it looks cold. So modern humans usually prefer people who have both sides evenly.

madoclaus

Para mi al menos si me gustaría ver las 2 rutas x que es emocionante ver como sería la ruta dulce pero al mismo tiempo es exitante ver la ruta salvaje y la verdad si quiero ver el amor de Wildfire y el Presidente pero también quiero ver como el presidente humilla a Wildfire espero si puedas a ser ambas rutas

Ash61Nando

This is quite the dilemma. Both themes are enjoyable, but only one can reign supreme as the main narrative. Navigating the difficulties of doing both at once would require a great deal of deft characterization, particularly that of the President. In order to maintain the audience's interest, the President must be cruel, but not too cruel, and kind but never too kind. Perhaps, if the President was himself being coerced by circumstances or those in power around him; those who are threats to him. His behavior with Wildfire could be erratic, offering opportunity for cruelty and kindness (sometimes genuine, other-times a disguise for more sexy abuse) in equal measure. This would create a potentially neurotic personality, however, which doesn't seem in line with the suave and cool aura of the President. The best solution would probably be to pick one narrative theme as the Canon and then treat the other as an AU. That way whichever one interests you more at the time can be your focus!

Jackthesnake

I'm more into the abuse route because that's what attracted me at the beginning. I would love to see dogs x wildfire and can pay for that comission.

tuducthiensu

tbh, me is more for the abuse route, since we know it this way from the start. But i dont approve bestiality. Thanks.

Mr IceLord

I think both would be enjoyable but personally I’m more interested in the abusive route. Those scenarios are more exciting to me and more fun to watch. You are very talented though, so either choice will be great 😊 You could also make scenes from both and share them as different versions of the same story.

Hi! Personally I prefer the safe route, mainly because I feel that abusive stuff is abit cliche when it comes to BL content. But that's just me. Love your work regardless!

Jozomyh