Succubus Story
Added 2020-02-05 19:57:57 +0000 UTCSo I've been a bit stuck on what the best scenario for the fantasy succubus would be. Outside of the environment, my succubus demon series really didn't feel like a dream. I can't do much technically but I'll try to make the encounter more like a dream.
I'll also make this succubus much more aggressive. I think the best way to do this would be to have the hero be less willing or going with the flow, so I've had to rewrite a bit of my original idea to fit that.
Sorry if you guys are anxious about my progress. The Patreon support has indeed given me a bigger drive to get these out more often so I'm extremely grateful to all of you who support me.
I'll do my best to get a vid out either February or March.
Comments
Sorry, this isn't the same hero and succubus as before, but your little snippet was hot dude. Albert does truly enjoy being with Amitiel, but so does the hero of the succubus demon series. It's a bit tough to remember but that Succubus really waylaid him in comparison to future heroines.
TheUnsaid
2020-02-12 19:20:42 +0000 UTCEventually, it'll probably go down that road. This is actually a bit challenging to write.
TheUnsaid
2020-02-12 19:17:38 +0000 UTCI think it would be cool if the hero goes to the dream bed, but she's not there. He is puzzled. He wakes uo and there she is in his real bed. She tells him, "I followed you back last time. Now I can come to you instead of waiting." Him, "But what if someone sees you?" Her, "No one can see me but you." It would be nice if her teeth weren't so threatening (imo) as the pointed fangs of the previous Succubus. It could be that it feels better for both of them to fuck in the waking world. The hero can still visit her in his dreams, but now she can haunt him in his waking life as well.. It might be interesting or her to display her control over his sex. Her, (after they've been fucking for a few minutes) "Do you want to cum now? hIM, "YES" Blam. They both cum together really hard. Before he can catch his breath.. Her, "Again? " Him, "Yes, mayb..." Blam. They cum together, heads thrown back in pleasure. He's catching his breath in the seconds after, Her, "Again?" Him, "Wait..." Blam She makes them cum gain, and it's as strong as the others. Her, "Agin?" Him, "WAIT!" BLAM Again she makes hem cum together As they lay there panting, Her, "Be glad I love you" Him, "You could have killed me!" Her, "I know.. I felt you starting to slip. That's why I stopped. I love you, nd I don't want to kill you. But it felt so good." Him , "But...you could have killed me!" Her, "I know, Be glad I love you.." Him, "I am glad. And I love you too. That felt so good to me too. But...please don't kill me." Her, "I'll try not to. I like the romance of the Succubus series, including when the hero kisses her. I like your strong females, but I sometimes wish the guys would stop whining and admit that it feels good to them too. I think that's one of the reasons I like the Angel series. Albert complains, but he also admits that it feels amazing to fuck the Angel. I am glad this little support we are giving you is encouraging you to create. I love your work.
Marcus Martin
2020-02-11 10:09:46 +0000 UTCI second that!
Chrysanthemum
2020-02-06 17:21:49 +0000 UTC
