My Little Ventrue - Sexual Content Discussion
Added 2018-04-06 22:19:58 +0000 UTCYou probably noticed in Part2 of MLV that both of Beatrice's sex scenes are anal scenes. This is due to many factors, but ultimately it was because fit girls who enjoy anal sex = super hot, IMO. And this got me thinking.
While I consider the story of MLV to be mine to write, and I won't take votes on key events, I actually really enjoy taking into account other people's desires when writing the sex scenes.
Do my readers want anal? Would they prefer more vanilla? Would they prefer more breast worship? Would they prefer more blowjobs, more cunnilingus? Should I spend an entire chapter writing nothing but the slowest foreplay build up ever?
Should I dial up the vampire powers? Ventrue can brainwash people into becoming mindless slaves (Julias is good at knowing just how to tweak a person's mind, hence why he can enslave someone without making them mindless). Daeva can turn people into adoring fans, even worshipers. Should I use these to create more orgy situations? Antoinette has a long and lively history, and back in the day, she did enjoy basically every orgy situation you can imagine, sometimes up to 30 men at a time (such days are behind her, but you can see the sort of situations she could create to enjoy with Jack).
Should I include more double penetration? Jessy has 4 ghouls. Jennifer has 2. They both consider double penetration to be 'normal' sex at this point. While someone like Natasha has no ghouls, and keeps her sexual adventures (kinky as they may be) private. Jennifer would be down for a threesome with Beatrice and Julias, as you know from how Part2 ended. Jessy is close friends with Natasha, and has offered to bring her to one of her sexual events, so the opening is there too.
What about dubious consent? Power fantasies. Many of the MLV characters enjoy trapping a victim, and while drinking their victim, making said victim enjoy sexual delights against their will. Classic vampire seduction stuff sometimes, sometimes a little darker. I'd never write a hardcore rape story, but power fantasies are enjoyed equally both by genders and if readers would enjoy that, I can write it (tastefully. Not going to stray from the 'dark but romantic' tone of MLV)
What're your opinions? I'll include votes on the majority of sex scenes, but those are usually about the details. Overall sexual themes, I'd prefer to hear what my readers want in discussion.
Comments
Yeah, sorry. Wrote it all on my iPhone and on there, hitting “return” makes the post.
Sildani
2018-04-09 00:43:04 +0000 UTCWhoa, shift+enter for a new line. :P I read it all. I'll keep your ideas in mind!
Novus Animus
2018-04-08 23:39:30 +0000 UTCHi! This made me think about my own likes and dislikes. With that in mind: tit-fucking, vaginal sex, oral sex, denied orgasm, forced orgasm, handjobs, and ejaculation on skin. Those are in no particular order. Now, lemme explain a bit. I enjoy sex scenes to be pretty much consensual, and if not loving then respectful, if that makes sense. How can those fetishes above be consensual and loving? Well, as for orgasm denial, let’s use Antoinette and Jack and her two ghouls (sorry, forget the names). Jack really gets aroused watching those two get it on. Annie is amused by that, and starts slowly, slowly jerking him off while he watches. The ghouls know, of course, and say that if Jack can keep from cumming, they’ll do more and more. So Annie isn’t making it easy, she’s crushing her tits into his back, she knows just how to stroke him, and of course the girls are moaning and such and doing various things, and Jack isn’t exactly very sexually experienced. Eventually (maybe sooner than later) Antoinette’s clever hand and the girls’ antics will force Jack to cum no matter how he tries to hold back. Or, say Annie visits Jack before a meeting dressed in that business suit that shows off her tits so very well. Jack gets really interested really fast, and Annie - who has 5 minutes before the meeting starts - decides to help Jack along, and have some fun by seeing how quick she can make him cum over her tits. And hey, the cum turns to ash anyway, plus her cleavage is big enough to hide it all. As for anal, I’ve never been a fan. DP, bondage, as long as there is consent, go for it. Orgies? You bet! I can imagine Jack struggling not to cum instantly when he sees Antoinette playing with 20 or so gorgeous women who seem to all want him in the worst way. All that said, I enjoyed it very much when Jack possessed Annie and pretty much had her his way. It can’t all be in one direction after all - Jack needs a spine, and Annie needs the change of pace. Finally, all I wrote above applies to Beatrice and Julias, though the roles might be reversed somewhat. I was somewhat disappointed that Beatrice didn’t titfuck Julias, but that may be coming. Last thing: whenever you commission another piece of art, it needs to be Antoinette I think. I have a reasonable idea in my mind what she’s supposed to look like, but you’re her creator, so I’m curious to see what she SHOULD look like. She’s more than just Lady Death after all. Thanks for reading all this!
Sildani
2018-04-08 03:16:10 +0000 UTCI'll include this info in my next Status Update, but I'm quitting my job in July and moving. So I had a choice: look for a new job in the place I'm moving to, or take a stab at writing full time and seeing if my Patreon can grow enough to support me. I'm going with option B. So, starting August, I'll be outputting a chapter every 10 days instead of 21. At that speed, I'll be back onto MLV sometime in the fall season.
Novus Animus
2018-04-07 20:45:17 +0000 UTCYes, I want to see more vampire powers and with more orgy situations! I'm looking forward to see Antoinette creating an orgy situation for Jack. (Maybe including a flashback into her own orgy days). I wouldn't mind more double penetration, and more sexual adventures with jessy and natasha as well. One of the things I enjoyed about MLV is the slow build up. Well, it can be frustrating to be teased for a long time, but the delivery is so masterfully created that the end product was really enjoyable. I also like different varieties of sex scene like double penetrations, anal sex, cunnilingus etc. Are you starting MLV soon? (:
geekstyle
2018-04-07 15:35:37 +0000 UTC
