My Little Ventrue Pt. 2 Ch. 9 - Discussion
Added 2018-10-14 16:52:49 +0000 UTCCucking? What?
In this chapter, I had written a fun little sex scene where Julias and Beatrice get in the tub, and they have anal sex while Beatrice is pleasured by two humans. After they both enjoy some orgasms, they both did a little showing off by pleasuring their counterpart human while drinking them.
Apparently to many of my readers, this qualified as 'cucking', which is:
https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=cucking
~~To enjoy arranging for and watching other men have rough demeaning sex with one's wife. Often perceived as a masochistic humiliating experience for the husband as opposed to normal swinging. ~~
Needless to say I was a little surprised. Did anyone else get that impression when reading the chapter? Maybe I wrote a few sentences with some badly arranged prose, and implied something I didn't mean to?
Sexual fun with kine/humans is a part of the setting, and I do intend to continue exploring that avenue of MLV, but if this particular scene bothered so many people, there may be something worth learning. Thoughts?
Comments
I'm already doing another editing pass on the whole series. I'll keep an eye open on this chapter and see if I can spot what upset some people. Course I won't change the chapter for some whiny Anon commenters, but who knows, I might find something.
Novus Animus
2018-11-02 00:40:37 +0000 UTCThanks.
Novus Animus
2018-11-02 00:16:30 +0000 UTCMy first read was same as Chris, I went back and read it again and can see how one can come to that conclusion. I'm not into the cuckold stuff so maybe that's why I didn't come to that conclusion
Donald J Stubblefield
2018-11-01 23:59:53 +0000 UTCCan’t agree. I think there’s a submissive aspect to the cuckold that Julias just doesn’t show.
Sildani
2018-10-15 12:51:23 +0000 UTCWell that's good, cause your interpretation is exactly what I was aiming for.
Novus Animus
2018-10-14 18:29:17 +0000 UTCTo me it totally seemed like Julias was trying to give Beatrice a sense of what it feels like to not have to hide in the shadows, and to be able to have fun with kine without scaring the crap out of them. I am not entirely sure that there is an actual term for what they did... The kine were essentially sex toys for the two vampires, with the mind control involved. Was more like swinging than "cucking" though. There was no demeaning aspect of it toward either vampire. at least not how i read it.
Chris
2018-10-14 18:00:25 +0000 UTC
