My Little Ventrue Pt.8 Ch.9 (Ch. 127)
Added 2021-12-05 00:10:51 +0000 UTCThis is a strange chapter. I almost didn't write it, but I wanted to explore some silliness before the story for Part 8 really gets rolling.
Comments
Agreed. Maybe I should consider it an 'interlude' chapter?
Novus Animus
2021-12-08 21:50:31 +0000 UTCI think it could have worked, just not at this moment. It has more of a “winding down” feel to it that would be better suited at the end or beginning of a part.
Memoryleak
2021-12-08 21:47:22 +0000 UTCThanks. The whole chapter was a bit of an experiment. I'm glad I wrote it, but I don't think it turned out as well as I'd have liked.
Novus Animus
2021-12-08 10:40:25 +0000 UTCGotta be honest, this one did not land for me, at all. I don't know if its because this seems like a weird chapter for a Damien only POV, or if I am just kinda over 70 year old frat boy Jessy.
AHoffman
2021-12-08 03:29:27 +0000 UTC
