My Little Ventrue Pt.5 Ch.11 (Ch. 65)
Added 2020-01-29 03:22:42 +0000 UTCMy editor is sick! They're in the hospital! So I did my usual double edit pass approach to this chapter, but it'll never be as tight as having a proper editor. Hopefully my editor friend recovers.
You may notice I spend a little time poking at what makes the Jen character 'tick' in this chapter. Jen is based on a woman I know in real life, a very open-minded person, and with how much MLV is based on sexual exploration, I enjoy getting across her very unusual views in the story. I know it may not be for everyone, so feel free to comment on what you think about Jen's views on romance and sexuality.
Comments
:thumbsup: Though you might not be so happy if I put Noah through some hell.
Novus Animus
2020-02-01 14:17:00 +0000 UTCI actually did a double take when I saw the name I was lucky enough to pick out. Thanks again lol.
Noah beaulieu
2020-02-01 04:27:18 +0000 UTCFun read.
Grimlakin
2020-01-30 01:04:03 +0000 UTC
