My Little Ventrue Pt.6 Ch.18 (Ch. 93)
Added 2020-11-21 00:11:01 +0000 UTCThese chapters that explore the aftermath and fallout of the events of the book are interesting to write. I enjoy taking more time with them than most authors. Let me know if that bothers you readers, or if it leaves you itching to see the story get going again.
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Jack and Ann r going to need 'trust falls' in the near future. 🙃
Rogue
2020-11-21 18:20:34 +0000 UTCThanks, but now you've got me confused. Rembrandt and Vermeer? The names sounded familiar, and I had to google. Painters from the Baroque period. Hadn't heard those names since high school 20 years ago. Comparing my writing to them might be a bit much. 😅
Novus Animus
2020-11-21 03:47:44 +0000 UTCwow ! The interchange between those women ! So deep, and revealing of their psychology ! This is a Masterpiece. All in subtleties and light touchs. I think, Rembrandt, or perhaps Vermeer. Anyway, I am under the charm <3 My respects, Sir, I bow.
R. Kener
2020-11-21 03:31:03 +0000 UTC
