My Little Ventrue Pt.9 Ch.21 (Ch. 156)
Added 2022-11-05 00:12:34 +0000 UTCGetting close to the end of Part 9. Then it's part 10, and an epilogue. Then onto the new series The Pleasures of Hell.
I know some writers prefer to skip all these 'post story climax' scenes, the falling action scenes. I like to meander through them and take my time playing with the characters. It's not for everyone, but it's a guilty pleasure of mine.
As always, let me know if you find any typos. I'm my own editor, so typos are inevitable.
Comments
Thanks.
Novus Animus
2022-11-06 10:38:45 +0000 UTCAnother typo near the end of the sex scene: "though he new better than to simply walk away"
EkkiEkkiEkkiEkkiPtang
2022-11-06 09:17:55 +0000 UTCThanks.
Novus Animus
2022-11-05 09:47:20 +0000 UTCThere’s a typo here on page 9: “The worst part was he couldn’t quite shack it off, couldn’t quite get back to normal, couldn’t quite hold a smile. “
Octavian
2022-11-05 04:39:23 +0000 UTC
