The Pleasures of Hell - Chapter 041
Added 2025-01-16 18:28:42 +0000 UTCHopefully this faster pacing works well. MLV sometimes really dragged out fight scenes and whatnot. Let me know what you think.
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Comments
Thanks. I do try to make them feel alive.
Novus Animus
2025-01-25 22:19:12 +0000 UTCNah, Deaths Grip battle was amazing. You have a great sense of movement in your fights, they don't just stay in one place, they move though the world, and even change it. That's awesome!
Saucy Rake
2025-01-25 17:00:30 +0000 UTCOne hell of a chapter. Excited, thrilled, and waiting for more
Pedro Alksalalto
2025-01-22 09:26:33 +0000 UTCI don't think so, it helped set the magnitude of the event, especially early in the story. It'll make the next spire fall easier to understand.
Daddy D
2025-01-19 02:40:17 +0000 UTCThanks. I definitely went for large and grandiose with the Death's Grip battle, maybe too much.
Novus Animus
2025-01-17 13:43:10 +0000 UTCI recall that I thought that the description of the battle at the spire of Dead Grip was too elaborate. The struggle with Asmodeus was to the point. I liked that it was written from the pov of Mia and how she experienced it. It's amazing that after the intensityof the fight you manage to continue with an equally enthralling conversation that captures my attention.
stillnoname
2025-01-17 04:40:45 +0000 UTCI felt the same way, every time!
Daddy D
2025-01-16 20:48:07 +0000 UTCI liked it a lot. The only bummer was that time flew by too quickly while reading the chapter, and now I’m ready for more.
Dan Kronjin
2025-01-16 19:39:12 +0000 UTC
