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The Proposal (page 29)

No doubt that they love each other, that was never in question...

The Proposal (page 29)

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If Song runs away, my heart will shatter..... I don't think I could handle it if he gets up and go.

Angela Antis

Don't even think about doing what you about to do 😳

NGK

I am very worried about what happens next. I am also checking in constantly to see if Whiteley replies to any comments so I can try and keep up on the world building. I need to know more about these two and their world!

catididnt

I’ve had a horrible pit in my stomach all day after reading this! 😭😭😭

Katy Werlin

Maybe these two should pull a Harry and Meghan and run off together. Your resolution will likely be more interesting.

Lemaris Designs

hhhhhhhhhh BABY 😭😭😭

Ash S.

Don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave —

Glissando365

Again?

Telda

Please don’t run, Song, please don’t run... I know that after ten years together Mansa would have a pretty good idea of Song’s mindset, but I also don’t want him to suffer the pain of believing that he wasn’t enough for Song to be brave enough to be with him.

Ana

Oh Song, please don't do something stupid

NorNor

I am reading all the comments and it is so good to see peoples' thoughts! There is so much to process - Mansa being a foolish human, Song maybe not even realizing the voices in his head may be his feelings, and feelings can lie. Words not said, assumptions made... what you have been able to do to us in a few short weeks is pretty amazing. Now for someone's sake, get Song a hug!

Goat Matron

Oh, Song. Tell your stupid brain weasle to get off the treadmill and go back to sleep with your FIANCE

Neil K.

Omg please don’t let him run off I can’t handle thisssss

Ineffable Penguin

Oh my sweet sad Song. Very sad and worried that Mansa will be waking up to a note instead of a beloved one by his side. Agh Whiteley I will be forever in your debt if you keep us posted on these two. I think we’re going to have a sad ending here even if happiness is ultimately what they are working towards. I just love getting this peek in. I know lots of authors say that stories are our window and they go on but we just don’t get to see. I am one of those readers that cries when it’s over! ♥️♥️♥️ I’ve just really fallen in love with these two. xo

pyracantha

This is such a good analysis omg it makes my heart break for Song even more 😭💔

Glissando365

I’m both scared and exited for how this will progress. I can get songs point of view so much... you can love someone and believe that they love you back and still not feel worthy of this love. That often leads to self-sabotaging.

Yuu

Don’t you dare leave him!

sparksearcher

Please, Song. Let him love you.

Luca Valentine

I freaking knew it arghhhh 😩

werebear

Please don’t let him run off!

EsmeGlass

Oh, Song! 😭😭😭 Mansa, surely you can hear the tears in his voice! Wake and give him the assurance he so desperately needs!

Debbie Champion

Aww....

Ariana Lipman

I’ve said it before and I’ll say it again: Mansa is an idiot—intelligent as fuck, but people dumb. Meanwhile, Song is street/people smart. Mansa is also a romantic, he’s thought about the suitors and decided that busting into his lover’s home in the rain for a simple proposal will fix so many issues. I’m not saying a doubt their love or commitment, but I am saying that Mansa has not played out the emotional ramifications of his proposal (for Song)—in fact, they only discussed how the other officials would treat Mansa. He needs to wake up and talk!

rev02a

Mansa wake up

Tarek Giver of Cookies

This is tearing me apart from the inside💔

Marta

Song 😭😭😭😭😭😭 As much as this hurts it's still the good thing about waking up at 4 am.

Atelerix

I just realized we are all paying for the privilege to get hurt by this comic. *sobs quietly* Worth it!

StellaSapiente

God I'm so invested in these two it's unreal >.< Just want them to be happy

JustMissArt

I get the feeling that he's gonna leave, and I can't handle that!! I want Mamse to wake up and cuddle his boy!

Hannah Barnes

Oh My Heart..... 😭😭😭😭

Sarah Marino

😭😭😭 ok the “love you” “I love you too” is KILLING ME because for Mansa, the fact that they love each other is IT, like that’s the only thing that really matters for him, that’s why he proposed. But poor Song is so hurt and scared that he’s got the entire world’s feelings and opinions jammed in alongside their love, and compared to all that he feels like he can never be enough... but to Mansa he IS because they Love Each Other and screw what anyone else thinks! Which is definitely a mindset that goes along with Mansa’s position of privilege as a human and a high-ranking official, while Song is constantly dealing with the trauma of being marginalized, everything people have ever said or done to him that have made him believe he’s not worth it...... Whiteley I’m dying over here I can’t stop thinking about this

Darius Crawford

Why are you doing this to them and to us 😭😭😭 Please don't let him leave or something, they just need to talk. Fanfic makes me cry all the time but I think this is the first time an art piece had make me cry literal tears. I just... I want him to be happy so much...

Lyubi

DON’T YOU DARE LEAVE

aldaratg

oh darling 😭 oh Song, but you don't have to struggle alone, YOU DON'T HAVE TO DEAL WITH EVERYTHING BY YOURSELF, you are not alone in this.... please, please, please, do not do anything stupid, please 🙏😭

sick_pineapple

💔😭

rippingoffmyface

Oh, oh no why does it seem like something's gonna happen and it'll hurt. Do I have to summon Johnny Cash again? 😢💔

Janica Buenconsejo

*facepalm*

the.kitsuneko

He's going to do something stupid, isn't he ...? :(

Vala

This is breaking my heart 💔

Naomi

Nononono!!!! 💔💔💔 Song don't do anything impulsive!! Please....just go back to bed, hug Mansa and stop overthinking!!! And you Mansa, can't you hear the tears in his voice?? Please please please, wake up!!! 💔💔

Giada

Poor Soong 😭 Mansa wake up!

Mimsynims

Please honey... Don't run off... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😱

Seliabel

Then stop crying, get back to bed, hug Mansa and DON'T do anything stupid

BigBadCat

Noooo Song 😭😭😭

Em (8)

Maaaaaansaaaaaaaa! Heaven, Hell and anything between.... WAKE THE FUCK UP! Song's about doing something stupid....

Angela Antis

Please don't make Song run off...please let them have a happy ending here....

Bre

Mansa hug him!

strawhat4life

Song don’t do anything stupid

Alex Booer

Oh baby :(

Emma Atkinson

Oh no baby, I just want to give him a huuug

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