The Proposal (page 29)
Added 2021-03-16 10:39:46 +0000 UTCNo doubt that they love each other, that was never in question...
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If Song runs away, my heart will shatter..... I don't think I could handle it if he gets up and go.
Angela Antis
2021-03-17 07:47:41 +0000 UTCDon't even think about doing what you about to do 😳
NGK
2021-03-17 07:20:57 +0000 UTCI am very worried about what happens next. I am also checking in constantly to see if Whiteley replies to any comments so I can try and keep up on the world building. I need to know more about these two and their world!
catididnt
2021-03-17 00:10:27 +0000 UTCI’ve had a horrible pit in my stomach all day after reading this! 😭😭😭
Katy Werlin
2021-03-16 20:40:21 +0000 UTCMaybe these two should pull a Harry and Meghan and run off together. Your resolution will likely be more interesting.
Lemaris Designs
2021-03-16 20:01:10 +0000 UTChhhhhhhhhh BABY 😭😭😭
Ash S.
2021-03-16 19:55:54 +0000 UTCDon’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave don’t leave —
Glissando365
2021-03-16 18:34:39 +0000 UTCAgain?
Telda
2021-03-16 18:27:05 +0000 UTCPlease don’t run, Song, please don’t run... I know that after ten years together Mansa would have a pretty good idea of Song’s mindset, but I also don’t want him to suffer the pain of believing that he wasn’t enough for Song to be brave enough to be with him.
Ana
2021-03-16 17:41:31 +0000 UTCOh Song, please don't do something stupid
NorNor
2021-03-16 17:34:13 +0000 UTCI am reading all the comments and it is so good to see peoples' thoughts! There is so much to process - Mansa being a foolish human, Song maybe not even realizing the voices in his head may be his feelings, and feelings can lie. Words not said, assumptions made... what you have been able to do to us in a few short weeks is pretty amazing. Now for someone's sake, get Song a hug!
Goat Matron
2021-03-16 16:39:26 +0000 UTCOh, Song. Tell your stupid brain weasle to get off the treadmill and go back to sleep with your FIANCE
Neil K.
2021-03-16 15:49:46 +0000 UTCOmg please don’t let him run off I can’t handle thisssss
Ineffable Penguin
2021-03-16 15:30:21 +0000 UTCOh my sweet sad Song. Very sad and worried that Mansa will be waking up to a note instead of a beloved one by his side. Agh Whiteley I will be forever in your debt if you keep us posted on these two. I think we’re going to have a sad ending here even if happiness is ultimately what they are working towards. I just love getting this peek in. I know lots of authors say that stories are our window and they go on but we just don’t get to see. I am one of those readers that cries when it’s over! ♥️♥️♥️ I’ve just really fallen in love with these two. xo
pyracantha
2021-03-16 15:12:09 +0000 UTCThis is such a good analysis omg it makes my heart break for Song even more 😭💔
Glissando365
2021-03-16 14:58:40 +0000 UTCI’m both scared and exited for how this will progress. I can get songs point of view so much... you can love someone and believe that they love you back and still not feel worthy of this love. That often leads to self-sabotaging.
Yuu
2021-03-16 14:15:19 +0000 UTCDon’t you dare leave him!
sparksearcher
2021-03-16 14:00:49 +0000 UTCPlease, Song. Let him love you.
Luca Valentine
2021-03-16 13:41:34 +0000 UTCI freaking knew it arghhhh 😩
werebear
2021-03-16 13:29:51 +0000 UTCPlease don’t let him run off!
EsmeGlass
2021-03-16 13:20:05 +0000 UTCOh, Song! 😭😭😭 Mansa, surely you can hear the tears in his voice! Wake and give him the assurance he so desperately needs!
Debbie Champion
2021-03-16 13:20:01 +0000 UTCAww....
Ariana Lipman
2021-03-16 13:14:44 +0000 UTCI’ve said it before and I’ll say it again: Mansa is an idiot—intelligent as fuck, but people dumb. Meanwhile, Song is street/people smart. Mansa is also a romantic, he’s thought about the suitors and decided that busting into his lover’s home in the rain for a simple proposal will fix so many issues. I’m not saying a doubt their love or commitment, but I am saying that Mansa has not played out the emotional ramifications of his proposal (for Song)—in fact, they only discussed how the other officials would treat Mansa. He needs to wake up and talk!
rev02a
2021-03-16 13:09:28 +0000 UTCMansa wake up
Tarek Giver of Cookies
2021-03-16 12:54:18 +0000 UTCThis is tearing me apart from the inside💔
Marta
2021-03-16 12:18:35 +0000 UTCSong 😭😭😭😭😭😭 As much as this hurts it's still the good thing about waking up at 4 am.
Atelerix
2021-03-16 11:56:55 +0000 UTCI just realized we are all paying for the privilege to get hurt by this comic. *sobs quietly* Worth it!
StellaSapiente
2021-03-16 11:49:44 +0000 UTCGod I'm so invested in these two it's unreal >.< Just want them to be happy
JustMissArt
2021-03-16 11:37:53 +0000 UTCI get the feeling that he's gonna leave, and I can't handle that!! I want Mamse to wake up and cuddle his boy!
Hannah Barnes
2021-03-16 11:37:34 +0000 UTCOh My Heart..... 😭😭😭😭
Sarah Marino
2021-03-16 11:31:28 +0000 UTC😭😭😭 ok the “love you” “I love you too” is KILLING ME because for Mansa, the fact that they love each other is IT, like that’s the only thing that really matters for him, that’s why he proposed. But poor Song is so hurt and scared that he’s got the entire world’s feelings and opinions jammed in alongside their love, and compared to all that he feels like he can never be enough... but to Mansa he IS because they Love Each Other and screw what anyone else thinks! Which is definitely a mindset that goes along with Mansa’s position of privilege as a human and a high-ranking official, while Song is constantly dealing with the trauma of being marginalized, everything people have ever said or done to him that have made him believe he’s not worth it...... Whiteley I’m dying over here I can’t stop thinking about this
Darius Crawford
2021-03-16 11:23:46 +0000 UTCWhy are you doing this to them and to us 😭😭😭 Please don't let him leave or something, they just need to talk. Fanfic makes me cry all the time but I think this is the first time an art piece had make me cry literal tears. I just... I want him to be happy so much...
Lyubi
2021-03-16 11:15:49 +0000 UTCDON’T YOU DARE LEAVE
aldaratg
2021-03-16 11:15:18 +0000 UTCoh darling 😭 oh Song, but you don't have to struggle alone, YOU DON'T HAVE TO DEAL WITH EVERYTHING BY YOURSELF, you are not alone in this.... please, please, please, do not do anything stupid, please 🙏😭
sick_pineapple
2021-03-16 11:14:11 +0000 UTC💔😭
rippingoffmyface
2021-03-16 11:06:08 +0000 UTCOh, oh no why does it seem like something's gonna happen and it'll hurt. Do I have to summon Johnny Cash again? 😢💔
Janica Buenconsejo
2021-03-16 11:05:33 +0000 UTC*facepalm*
the.kitsuneko
2021-03-16 10:57:47 +0000 UTCHe's going to do something stupid, isn't he ...? :(
Vala
2021-03-16 10:56:04 +0000 UTCThis is breaking my heart 💔
Naomi
2021-03-16 10:48:32 +0000 UTCNononono!!!! 💔💔💔 Song don't do anything impulsive!! Please....just go back to bed, hug Mansa and stop overthinking!!! And you Mansa, can't you hear the tears in his voice?? Please please please, wake up!!! 💔💔
Giada
2021-03-16 10:47:14 +0000 UTCPoor Soong 😭 Mansa wake up!
Mimsynims
2021-03-16 10:45:33 +0000 UTCPlease honey... Don't run off... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😱
Seliabel
2021-03-16 10:44:02 +0000 UTCThen stop crying, get back to bed, hug Mansa and DON'T do anything stupid
BigBadCat
2021-03-16 10:43:36 +0000 UTCNoooo Song 😭😭😭
Em (8)
2021-03-16 10:42:58 +0000 UTCMaaaaaansaaaaaaaa! Heaven, Hell and anything between.... WAKE THE FUCK UP! Song's about doing something stupid....
Angela Antis
2021-03-16 10:42:08 +0000 UTCPlease don't make Song run off...please let them have a happy ending here....
Bre
2021-03-16 10:41:22 +0000 UTCMansa hug him!
strawhat4life
2021-03-16 10:41:08 +0000 UTCSong don’t do anything stupid
Alex Booer
2021-03-16 10:40:59 +0000 UTCOh baby :(
Emma Atkinson
2021-03-16 10:40:58 +0000 UTCOh no baby, I just want to give him a huuug
Unashamedly-enthusiastic
2021-03-16 10:40:46 +0000 UTC
