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Whiteley Foster
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Bill 58 (page 34)

*mortified*

Hey! Do you have any mansa questions?

Bill 58 (page 34)

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We will definitely be following Song a bit more closely than Mansa in terms of these flashbacks because Song is the instigator of most of the problems in the story. However Song is really tight lipped about his experiences in the main story, which is why he’s focused on in the flashbacks. Otherwise during the main story he just wouldn’t talk about his emotions at all. Mansa is much more chatty when it comes to his history and experiences in the main story, so I don’t need to do a lot in the flashbacks to explain where he’s coming from. If you’d ever like to chat about Mansa’s development please please please message me because I’d love to talk about his character with you 😊

Whiteley Foster

I don't like making early judgement calls on stories that are not yet finished, which is why I haven't been commenting as much, but I do have one question that's been on my mind for a while. I actually have two questions, this first one is less important because it's just me being curious: Would you consider Mansa to be the deuteragonist of this story? That is the impression I have been getting throughout all these flashbacks thus far, since all of them with the exception of The Proposal have been primarily in Song's point of view, and even then, The Proposal switched perspectives about halfway. Not to say that him being the deuteragonist is a bad thing, because Song is an interesting, fleshed-out protagonist of his own accord - and maybe this is just me - but it seems like, so far, Mansa's main role has been Song's Tragic (currently) Lover. And (here's the early judgement call that I'm aware can be totally wrong) he looks to be on track to go from that to Song's Estranged Lover Who Will Help Him Change Society. So my second, actual question is this: Is that all Mansa is going to be as a character, or will he be built upon more in the main story? Will we see into HIS inner thoughts and doubts and goals in the way we get to with Song? He's a soft-spoken, sweet/caring, ace, bi(? or pan/unlabeled), dark-skinned man of color who is a main character that will go through a lot of hurt yet ultimately have a *happy* end - I can't NOT easily get attached to him and eagerly want to know more about him. His potential energy builds up and up with each flashback you treat us with. Guess this is just a way-too-long, convoluted way of me saying: I like Mansa a lot, and relate to him as a queer person of color, and let myself get emotionally invested in him knowing that he's a character of color who is ultimately going to have a happy end, but part of me worries that he's going to be more of a support system to Song than his own person, despite all logic and evidence thus far saying otherwise. You clearly have a lot more plans for him, from what I'm seeing, but my gremlin brain can't help but worry. Sorry to hit you with such a giant wall of text, whoops. I really like Mansa and have clearly spent too much time thinking about him 👀

yorick

Oh god, the higher ups are going to double down sending him potential suitors, aren't they?

Res Judicata

Same!

AJ

Oh honey. Yikes.

Ellen Pauline

Will he ever recover from the embarrassment? 😅

starryfull13

Well it’s a fantasy world but I based him off people of Oceania 😊

Whiteley Foster

Asking this seriously I’ve been wondering what race is Mansa?

Karen Mccormick

Hey it worked for Loki💚🍻 …wait Oh no

Chibiq

He is absolutely a stiff upper lip type, but he will get cuddles by the end of this flashback (well 58 and the next one sort of run into each other but he will get cuddles by the end of that one!)

Whiteley Foster

That infernal on Mansa’s right who’s ears are tilted down and looks like they’re dying of second hand embarassment… big mood mood.

Gabriel Wolfe

My question is about how Mansa tends to cope with things. In the art you posted taking place when Song returns he has his emotional moments, but is he a "stiff upper lip" type who will pretend he's totally fine or is this a situation where he will air his embarrassment to Song when they're alone? Also can my man(sa) just catch a break and have a big squeezer hug that isn't also about consoling or reassuring Song? My ace boi needs cuddles because these posts are stressing me out and *I* need cuddles 😂😂

M

Uh… decent

Whiteley Foster

🥲❤️ With all that Mansa is about to go through in his life, I’m glad he has some loving family

Glissando365

Especially because it’s a party that’s celebrating a huge change that Mansa himself helmed. In a way, it’s Mansa’s party and his partner is being really embarrassing.

Ana

Is Song at least a good singer? 😅😅😅

Lauren

I feel so bad for both of them 😭 Mansa's big night has been spoiled twice over and Song is going to feel awful about this when he's sober and hung over 😭

Atelerix

They know he’s a judge and they’re VERY proud 💕

Whiteley Foster

Well that’s mortifying. 😶 Do Mansa’s grandmothers know what he’s up to? Can we see what his grandmothers look like?

Glissando365

God, this is so heartbreaking to see for both of them 😭😭 I bet Elon is just somewhere in the crowd feeling oh so fucking mighty proud of himself, huh?

CanadianCaptain

Uuuugh why is no one getting Song off the table 😭😭😭 i feel so bad for both what was supposed to be a great night just went down the toilet

Michelle Garcia

Yeah Thomas, do Mansa a solid and get Song off the table and outside.

EsmeGlass

Yaaay! Go Mansa 🎉🎉🎉😃⭐️

Nicola Coxon

I do!

Whiteley Foster

Even without the injustice that just happened to Mansa, having to deal with your partner deciding to get drunk and make a fool of themselves at a work party where you're surrounded by colleagues and superiors is bad enough.

Clariztbel Flores

I feel so sorry for him, it all must be very hard top handle right now...

Marta

distressed noises 😭

Ash S.

In the meantime I guess it’s all hands on deck and get Song off the table 🤭 🍻 🎶 lol

Nicola Coxon

oh... he is so embarrassed... 😬😔

sick_pineapple

From the moment I saw that High Council outfit I always imagined that Mansa with his work ethic and his role in bringing Bill 58 into effect would have made it there eventually at the top of his career arc. Did or do you envision that for him even if it might happen outside the main story?

Nicola Coxon

I’m very worried about Mansa’s mental health over the next few years 😔😔😔… what will he do to cope until Song comes back?

JillianVolts

No, he’ll be fine. It’s just more of a talking point for gossip and rumors now…

Whiteley Foster

Could Mansa be further "punished" because of this? I can't see what more they could take from him but the bad guys always find a way 😔

the.kitsuneko

🙀

rippingoffmyface

Thomas just take the L to your digity and do Mansa a solid. Tackle the infernal off the table and get him outside.

Neil K.

:(

Vala

Oh baby *holds mansa*

YamiKakyuu

The infernals in the audience are getting second hand embarrassed

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